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oh, it looks nice, and I don't mind about the legs because it seems the pants are kinda baggy, so that the shape you drew would be of mostly of the cloth and not of the leg, but never mind.... It looks really great ( except for the right hand being a bit samll)

that's right: nothing beats Erik Wolfblade :D:D:D:D:D:D:D -and, sorry for that idiot theory I wrote about Red. I was just kidding, that thing nothing serius and should be ignored (I swear:(:()

You had already showed me he second one, and I even said something about the hair. But now, when I saw that "25th colured" I just tough: Now, you are really painting. The hair in this one is simply fantastic and the shirt was well done too. You have improved a lot from a drawing to the other :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D::D:D:D:D:D:D:D::D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Cool, i've always wanted to see the pics of one of my favorite books !!!! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D Hope see mopre coming soon, and btw, congratuulations, Lionheart, you draw really well :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

This is the end? I can't wait for the rest (What the hell am i saying if I haven't read even chapter 8 yet but i will read it all as soon as possible :D:D:D)

Weee... I got a theory theory too *lifts hand speaking as if this was a primary school classoom Narmad has evil plans *MWHAHAHA* and wants to undo what has been done after Alkaisha fought his goody brother (whom I occasionally forgot the name) : hide the Hiden City, he wants to undo it. He (Narmad) is a folower of Alkaisha and so are Icean and the Spirit Master, they are together to get the Hidden City out the shadow what according to the legend (yes I attached things to the legend of Alkaisha), could lead them to Voldemort Alkaisha. Vendaigo has French accent because he is French, and he wants to go back to France, but he can't because the Hidden City is hidden. So he decides to join the nazi Alkaisha followeers. Assana follows him and so does Merc, becasue Vendaigo own them all some money and they want to make sure he won't escape without paying them (specially Assana, who is the youngest and always looses his money when gets bullied by the other kids in the in the neighborhood). But why are Icean and The Spirit masters interested in teaching Erik? Because they know he is a "key (I'll call it that) wich can only be used out there (not in the Hidden City ) to bring Voldemort Alkaisha back to rule. Why Brox was hurt by the assasins? They want to make sure he doesn't interfer in their plans (after all Vendaigo really wants to ggo back to France) What happened to Alexis? Well, after organization XIII Alkaisha's followers suceed in their plans, Erik (after being forced to help them) turns evil and decides to obey Alkaisha forever, becoming his messenger. So, Alexis becomes so disgusted with that, that she decides to become a nun. Sanatar becomes a clerk, and goes to church with her. I know it's dumb but forgive me for this

Don't stop! I still love Red and wanna see more :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D::D:D::D:D:D:D::D:D:D:D

Since the beginning I've been readng this fan fic and never comented, now I shall do wah tI should heve done a long time ago when i firt saw it mnay months ago: I wnat oi say I love this!!! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Continue! This sequel is so exiciting! ! !^^ :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

The siggy is gret siS, but you made Toboe look kinda gay. I've already told you: TOBOE IS NOT GAY!!!

This sory is just F A N T A S T I C ! ! ! Since the beginning months ago, i've been reading this and now I finally decided top post - seriouly, i must stop reading thiungs and don't comenting - Now that I kniow there will be sequels I'm sure I'll read them. your writing style is different from anything else i've ever seen before, but the main thing is: I read this tory for all these months criyng only about one thing: the plot. That's what interrests me in this novel. :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

OH, first I read "masked" in a theared title here on "writing", then I saw the author's name: Sorage55. Result : the first thingI tought: it's something about The Domo Chronicles! Great! But then I read "This story...is a KH fanfic yes." byut never minds. ---- As usual, you write fantastcly. I like the names, really. ANd I'll nvbe waiting ofr more as excited as I am with Domo CHronicles

I can't wait to see our characters :D:D and I must say: I feel so proud to know a character of my favorite story was dedicated to me!!! Thanks so much :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D btw, chapters 7 and 8 are my favorite till, now - I think I gonna like Merc quite much or very much as I read more about him

Where is my siggy, demon sis?

Now I'm realy liking he story, that introductory air defnilty left all your words. -lol, I quite liked Jack as soon as he appeared, he's one fo those chacaters i like for no reason as soon as I see them lol that's typical of me -

There is no way not enjoying this chapter - i like action,and with such a description, i must say i ould see the fighing in froint of my eyes while I read F A N T A S T I C ! ! !

Well, it seems you are working on good plot but I think there's something wrong with the way you write... you describe events very fastly so we can't imagine the scenes very well (in fact, I'm trying to guess till now how did an Indian get to the island).... But I haven't given up on reading this, specailly because of the title -"a true ghost story: The 6 spirts of toyan bay" sounds so epic and soo cool:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Thanks lexi, I'll follow your tips next time my teacher ask me for an essay, I've already given it to her, and now i'm waiting to see wich grade I got... I wish it was agood one beacause my others grades weren't very good (actually, they were very bad ) And thanks, Eterna, it seems I'm not as bad as I tought at writing... :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

I had to write a short story to an english text in 150-180 words.So, I just wrote anything that appeared in my mind and the text below was the result. My first short story ever. Tell m what you think :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D T.H.E.M. When I started on the journey I had no Idea about what was going to happen. Instead, I just felt my heart beating faster telling me: "just go!" "Are you sure about this, young lady?" The loud voice of the man sitting beside me echoed in my ears making me more excited. I knew I had to go, although it was too dangerous. "But that's my only chance, it's now or never" I thought. Finally, I took a deep breath, lifted my head answering: "Yes" "Very well" he said, coldly, in reply "But remember: we are out laws and you are just a little non-skilled girl, if you ever got caught we wouldn't mind leaving you behind" "I'll take the risk" My blood became cold like ice and my face turned white like snow. Breaking into scientific facility looked suicide, but I had to try. That was the only way to save THEM. I had to save THEM THEM was my life and since my birth I knew THEM meant more than the world not only to me but to all mankind. A noise was heard. Our plane was taking off. Heading straight to my doom, where my hope lied faithful. ------------------- -Don't ask me about the meaning of the last sentece in the last paragraph. -Don't ask what the hell is a THEM. -I just wrote whatever I had in mind, don't ask me why, not even I know.

thanks antrium, I wish i had your creativity and unique way of writing, just answering: me and mum are ok now, i didn't even show her what I wrote, but never mind...Thanks for rading and if anyone could give some critics I'd be glad in hearing them :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

3 weeks ago, poetry entered my soul, I started reading others's work on DA and even wrote two pieces on a certain moment, when there was too much emotion for my heart to handle, so the forst time in life I shared it with a the paper. Tell me what you think:

It's easy: you. Sis you are demon, aren't you?

O.O How can you draw so well? Actually all your drawind are fantastic, this one is great and the shading is just perfect!!! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D OK, I now I'll tell one other real thruth: I have no idea about who he is (is it from an anime?)

Yeah, people at my school said so (about his appearance, becuase they don't know this anime) , but I'm sure Toboe is NOT gay. He is a bit unsure and very cute (even with that hair, I must admitt) :D:D:D