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Make sure the stash is well hidden

I give up on giving advice

What do I think? Well right now your fanfiction doesn't sound interesting. The preview you posted too sounds like a generic intro to a coming-of-age story. Fanfiction, in general, is about putting your own twist on things. So with the vague description you've given us, the story's been done before. What you need to do is cast a hook and reel us in. What's going to cast it aside from the thousands of other Kingdom Hearts fanfiction out there? Is your fanfiction going to be set in an alternate universe? Is it going to be a parody of another story? What's going to make your story interesting enough to make us want to read it? Writing fanfiction, good fanfiction, is a hard process. The high school setting is overdone, inserting original characters is a 99.99% chance for disaster (whether it be a sibling to one of the main characters, new Organization member, or new Organization XIII in general, it's not going to be successful), and people screw up the characters one way or another (especially in romance). It's okay to get creative with fanfiction, but it's also so very hard to pull off right. You're using characters that aren't yours. You're using characters that already have a face, a background, and a personality. If you make them act differently (for example: Marluxia super flamboyant and radiating ~GAAAAAY~ when really he's an arrogant, manipulative, bastard) then your fanfiction is heading for the trash. Now what can you do to make your fanfiction good? You could focus upon an aspect in Kingdom Hearts that hasn't really been explained in depth and probably won't be. Like for instance, where all of the kids' parents? How did Terra and Aqua meet (where they always training since they were kids or what)? What were Braig's, Dillan's, Evan's, Ienzo's, and Aeleus' lives like before Xehanort came around? Just where the firetruck does Pluto go throughout most of the games? An AU is always a good route to go, as long as you don't go with the high school setting for the love of god. Do a medieval fantasy, make all of the characters babies, put them in a daycare together and do a Rugrats parody, have gang wars on the streets of New York City, do something that people don't do often. And remember, try to keep everyone in character as much as possible. And, if you're too lazy to proofread like I am, then at least spellcheck whatever you write. And don't write in script form. And stick to one tense. That also means you must stick to one point of view. Also original characters are bad in fanfiction. AND DON'T DO THE HIGH SCHOOL SETTING. JUST DON'T DO IT.

If she were talking about Doctor Who she'd probably go on a rant about time and it's causes and effects. Except time isn't exactly like that. Most people just assume that time is a strict progression of cause and effect. But actually from a non-linear, non-subjective viewpoint, it's more like a big ball of wibbly wobbly time-y wimey... stuff.

could also mean that kh is happy

I may or may not have gotten a haircut today. Also look I have an apple

Hey it's worth it they got Christopher Eccleston

*Your questions

Fill a tub with the blood of a thousand virgins. Look deep into the red liquid while chanting "Stan is my savior". Once the blood starts to bubble, ask your question and then submerge yourself in the liquid. Your answers shall be answered in the form of hallucinations seen after letting the blood seep into your eye sockets.

Hank and Katherine Green are the best couple in the world nobody can tell me otherwise

not being serious ._.

i was using shit generically

Doctor Who = better than all that shit

The Lion King = Hamlet

Depression is a serious mental illness that does not equal just being a little bit sad. It is a mental condition that makes people feel like the lowest of the low. This feeling isn't just something you feel for a few minutes and then it goes away. It stays with you for what could be days and even for weeks. It sucks out all of your self-esteem and confidence, and can turn the happiest person you know to the next suicide victim. It's a constant shadow that lurks behind you, popping out at the most inappropriate of times to remind you why your existence doesn't matter. And it grows. Then before you know it, it's grown to such an extent that you don't want to put up with it any more and you decide to do something about it. You grab your gun, your knife, your noose, your pills, anything you can get a hold of. You take that one last plunge, because you know no matter how many pills you take, no matter how much therapy you go through, that monster will always come back; and there's only one way out. Depression isn't a word to be thrown around willy nilly whenever you feel a bit sad. What you're feeling is just a bit of teenage heartbreak. It's just a crush, you'll have plenty more of them. If you really want to talk to her, then make an effort. Like Koko said, chat her up on Facebook, there's a 97% chance that she's on there. If she doesn't talk to you, then that means she doesn't want to and respect her wishes. You're 16, a crush you have now won't be the most serious relationship you'll ever have.

Like people have said; this isn't twitter. So no.

This isn't Twitter. This is Hell.

You must've bathed in the blood of non-virgins then.

this is gonna be good

I've already got the episode titles on the 'what we know about series 7 so far' post (: and there are these other photos released by Doctor Who's facebook. Putting in a spoiler because they're big. It's also been announced that the opening sequence will be changed with each episode this season. And the TARDIS will also be getting a makeover from the inside some time this season as well.

The friendship is strong in these two

Trust me. All of the companions are fabulous

All the companions are great. You'll only see Donna for that episode, but then she'll be back for the season 4 companion. Martha's really great though, she's an actual Doctor (well almost --unlike the Doctor).

Hi I'm updating this thread with another video. And yes it's another Doctor Who video. Despite how bright the coloring is in some places, I really like how it came out!

AND THEN YOU GET TO MEET MARTHA. SHE'S A STAR