Pounding,

screaming,

terror.

Terror runs through me

I can

wow its good

Thank you ^^

I would like some crit though ;-;

But that's fine. Glad you liked it.

Kind of personal, but I wanted to post it.

Thats beautiful, Paolette :]

And I especially love how you made another sentence along the side with the alignment. Very creative, very beautiful, and I hope to see more.

You crave crit?

TOO BAD BECAUSE I HAVE NONE.

It's beautiful. And like RoxSox said, the alignment was VERY clever.

I didn't come up with the alignment idea myself, I have to admit.

I blame my favorite author.

Good lucking guessing who it is

[:

I know you love crit..

But I can't think of any to give you. o.o

This is beautiful <3

I'm sorry about what's happening in your family, though