i don't own anything thats from kingdom hearts or bleach.

Intro: When Riku went into darkness. He had became a heartless and made a nobody. He got his heart back, but his nobody still lives. Heres the story of Riku's nobody, Xurki.

Chapter 1

I was a fine nobody untill Xemnas came to me. He said that i was special and told me to join his organzation. I joined it as number 7. I was the member before some Saix person took my spot. I was now number 13. Back then numbers met that's how powerful you are.I needed totake some action. I wanted to be strong. I was strong to even wound Xigbar who is the second strongest. I made my way to Axel. He is way out of my ledge, but what the heck i need to become stronger. I got to him.'' Hey Axel mind if we go a few rounds?''i asked asi saw that Axel was drinking.'' Well if you want to be hurt that badly then fine.''said Axel as he got up. We made it to the naughts starway. I got out my soul eater which Xemnas said is what my somebody had. We got ready o fight.'' I need to get stronger no matter what.''I was thinking.

Ineresting.I like it.Please write more.

Chapter 2

We made it to the stairway and he bought out his crackarms. Me and Axel clashed weapons.He threw one of his crackarms and i dodged it barly and he appeared behind me and stabed with one of them. I feel to the ground and was bleeding heavier. I got out and had darkness form around my soul eater and i fired it at him. He got dameged by it big time. He then put both of his weapons together and held it to his chest.'' BURN HIM,INFNERO.''yelled Axel as he had a fire battle suit on him. He also had a fire blade in his hand and he had longer hair, and wings.'' You see every memeber has a mode which we call a limit break. But wemust learn our names of our somebodies weapon to use it. It looks like you can't do it. You must now be defeated.''said Axel as he flew down to attack.'' I need to learn the name.''i said thinking to myshelf as i clashed blades with Axel.

He had became a heartless and made a nobody. He got his heart back, but his nobody still lives.

Impossible. And you mixing Bleach with Kingdom Hearts. Big no no.

 

This story would be better if you DIDN'T do that.

Nice.Please write more.

Like always you right the most interesting stories. I always love to read your story!

I don't like this idea to be completely honest First of all, I don't like Bleach at all. Second of all, I don't think that KH and Bleach even mixes well, and you have proven my statement. It doesn't mix well.

Chapter 3

Axel's power was so strong i can't hold my eater very well. I broke away from the clash and I appeared behind Axel, But he coutered by stabeing me. I got away holding my wound. Axel was walking to me to finish me off.'' Its time we got rid of our 2nd 13th member.''said Axel. I got it.'' FLY,BLACKWING.''I yelled. I got to ginat black wings and red eyes.I had a stange keyblade.'' I guess we both now know our limit breaks.''said Axel. We clashed blades. I then was stabed by him again,but i turned into feathers and reappeared behind him.'' I call this fake feather and this feather shot.''i yelled.I sented about 20 black feathers at Axel which dameged him good to knock him out of his limit break. I got out of my and called a few dusks to heal him. I went to my room and layed on my bed.'' I wonder if i can now beat Saix to get my old number back.''i thought to myshelf.

Whoa I hope Saix is ready for you! You are ready for anything to come. I hope your ready like you say you are.

Please write more.I want to see what happens bettwen you and Siax!

So Chaoter 4

I fell asleep and started to dream.

I saw a boy with white hiar like me but shorter. He had a yellow short with black X on his shirt.'' So he had just learned his limit break?''asked the boy.'' Yes now you must go now and bring im to me.''said a man. the image faded. I was now in a room which had Axel in it.'' Saix hes coming for you next so you must get ready.''said Axel.'' Don't worry Lea i will be ready.''said Saix as he bought out his claymore and started walking.

I woke and went to where Saix was.'' Time to beat you Saix so i can get my number back.''I yelled as we clashed weapons.

Ehhh it's ok I guess. You could've added a few more details

The story is getting to best part to me! I just can't stop reading.

Very good; i can see it's an Espada-esque story

chapter 5

I broke from the clash and got my blade ready.'' Saix lets go all out. I want to see what your made of. When i'm done with you i'll get my old rank back. FLY, BLAKCWING.''I said as i entered limit break mode. Saix then held his claymore in the air and then said.'' SHINE,MOON YUIO!'yell Saix. He came down with blue flames around him and had two claymores in his hand.'' This is my limit break. Now its time for you to die.''said Saix as we clashed. After we fought for a while. Saix was getting anger as he was wounded by my feather shot level two.'' Its time i show you what the second in commard can do.''said Saix as he started to glow.''SOLLAW,HION XIE.''yelled Saix as he had blue wings and horns and he had a kingdom hearts blade.'' You see my and Xemnas are the only ones who can do more then one limit break. Its time for you to die.''said Saix as he reappeared behind me and shot me to the memory tower. I got up and clashed with him.

Very interesting. Saix is truly power full but i think you can handle him.

Interesting indeed.

chapter 6

I broke from the clash and used feather shot level 3.'' You think this move can wound me.''said Saix. I got up and stabed Saix in the arm.'' So you can wound me when im in level 2. If you think you won because you can wound me then you must be mistaken.GUILT,HUI THN.''said Saix as he had flames form around him.'' You see Xemans only has two levels. While i have three.''said Saix as the flames died and he had ginat wings and black claws and horns.'' I see your shocked,but you should feel honored. You are the frist to see this form.''said Saix as he rushed to me. He then was at my side and put his hand on my head. He shot me to the ground. The impact was strong to make a little carter.'' Its time to finish you.''said Saix as he grabbed my neck and put his finger in the middle of my chest.''Nobody blast.''said Saix as a black and white beam shot though my body.

Whoa! I didn't know that Saix could be that dangerous. You can make some powerful characters dude.

Awesome and Nice Chapter!!

I can't wait to read the next one.

chapter 7

Saix dropped my body on the ground.'' There he can't be a problem now that hes died.''said Saix as he started to walk. I then had feathers form around me and i got up.'' What. how can you be alive anf how can you have a level 2.''said Saix as he got ready. I just then let out a roar and rushed to Saix. Saix then fired a nobody blast. Then i did the same thing by fireing it from the tip of my blade. We clashed the blasts and my won it. I then made a X on his face.'' AHHHHH. You will pay for that.''said Saix as i got the side of his head and started pounding it in the ground. I then slashed my blackwing at him. He then was pounded to the ground. I powered up a nobody blast.'' Ah i see no mercy. Thats very dark of you.''said Saix as i fired it at his head. His body was now just his body with his head,right arm and right leg and right wing. I then was knocked out of level 2 and fell to the ground. Saix got up and returned to normal.'' My body is refaining its limbs,but the organs he destory will not come back. Looks like i win since i'm the last one standing.''said Saix as he walked to the castle and left me there.

This is getting exciting.So cool and unique.Please write more.

Chapter 8

Saix made it to Xemnas. Saix had a broken arm and paper around his X wound.'' My lord Xikru has gone rebel and i've beaten him.''said Saix.'' Looks like you got a bit wounded your shelf Saix. Now leave and sent Zexion to destory thr nobodys dead body.''said Xenmas. Saix left the room and Xemnas locked the door.'' Please brother find Ventus and Aqua.''said Xemnas as he told a man with blue draggers in hands and he faded as he heard Xemnas.

 

I was on the ground just sleeping until i finally woke up.'' Dang Saix is way to strong.''i said as i saw my coat was ruined and things. I then saw Nobodys with books in their hands and saw Zexion with them.'' By order of lord Xemnas i must destory you.''said Zexion as he made a paper sword. I went to the nobodys frist and killed them. I then clashed blades with Zexion.'' Take this book huo.''said Zexion as i was sent to a realm nothing but paper floating around.'' Here i'm all powerful. Its time to kill you.''said Zexion as he clashed blades with me.

This is so good!Please wrirte more!:D:D:D

Chapter 9

I clashed blades with Zexion who then broke away from it and sented a paper storm at me. I blocked it the best i could.'' I see your still tried from your fight with Saix. This time you will be dead.''said Zexion. I dodge Zexion's attack. He was right. I can't use my limit break right now means he has the upper hand. I dodged another attack and manage to stabed him in the arm.'' Your dead. This is for wounding me. SRACE, HKO.''said Zexion as he turned into a bat. He still had his body and shuff. He had big black wings and claws and black eyes. He rushed to me. I blocked the attack the best i could.'' Show me your second limit break. Come on.''said Zexion as he pushed me out of the realm back into the city and punched me to a building. I got up and got me blade ready.'' Take this Zexion. Anit crow.'' i said as i made it rain feathers and mad a big boom when they touched Zexion. Zexion was pushed out of his limit break and was knocked out. I got on the ground and saw a man in a coat with blue draggers.

These chapters are getting very interesting. I wish most stories could be like yours

Hmm, I fell out of love with BLEACH along time ago, so seeing anything that's connected with it doesn't even interest me. Although how Saix got the X mark on his face was a good idea, because I wondered about that scar for a while. And making mysterious figure Xemnas brother isn't bad. Cosidering we don't know which world Terra is from. Master E finds them but on which world? Anyway nice job on this. Although I would have to go with your first story, than this one.

Chapter 10

I saw the man and i thought he would be big touble if i don't kill him right now. I rushed to the man, but the man then sented a X slash at me. I dodge it the best i could, but he was to fast. He stabed me with his draggers and i fell to the floor. I had blood coming from my body and i couldn't get up. The man then knocked me out and sented me to another world.

 

I was in a bed with my wounds covered. I saw a man with long blonde hair and two blue draggers on his hip.'' So this must be the person Xemnas is trying to look for. His brother, Vanten.''i said to my shelf trying to be quiet. He was talking to a boy with long white hair and red eyes. He was wearing a coat too, so i couldn't see his weapons.'' So does he really know where Ventus it at.''said the man with white hair.'' Yes, All we need to do is use him to get to CO and then find the room of sleep.''said the man with the draggers.'' I need to get out of here before they kill me to use me in their plan.''i thought. I got out of the bed and opened the window to the room and left. I saw that i was in Twilight Town.