This is a story from the dark days. When an evil ruler known as Set ruled the world. Back then, The worlds were fused together. A man has created a weapon. He has chosen the call it a keyblade. He made three copys of it. They then disappeared and went to find their master's. The man was killed be Set himshelf. Set then issued an order to his army. They were to shoot or capture to the people who hold the keyblade. Three people have been chosened. Their name's are. Rui, Lero, And Beth. They must join together to defeat Set and free the world from his domain. Who will win. Set and his army or the keybladers. Read and find out.

 

Chapter 1 will come out pretty soon.

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Chapter 1

Rui

'' Darkness. Darkness. We need to stop it. Help me.'' said a voice.

Rui woke up in a wagon. He saw a man driveing. Rui looked out of the window and saw the blue sky. The blue sky looked like it just ate the clouds. Rui looked at his side and saw a blade in its holder.'' I see your awake master Rui. We are almost at your meeting point.'' said the man as he made the horses turn right. Rui now a forest at his right side. The forest had tall trees like the lenght of the buildings at the kingdom. Rui then heard the wagon stop.'' Here you are master. Call me and I'll pick you up.''said the man as he left and Rui got off.

 

Rui saw he was about a hour early. He started walking in the forest.'' I guess I can see whats inside the forest while I'm waiting.'' Rui said as he walked in the forest.

 

When Rui came into the forest, He saw the birds cripping like they were trying to make a song. Rui walked a little further. He then saw a tree that was in his way.'' Guess I'll just fly over the tree. Rui then flew over the tree and landed back on the ground. He has the power of wind. He started walking again. He kept walking until a man stopped him.

 

'' Sorry, I can't let you go any further. The ruler's orders.''said the man. Rui then held onto the hilt of his blade.

 

'' I'm moving ahead. You can't make me leave.''said Rui as he pulled out his blade and clashed blades with the man. The man then started attacking. Rui kept dodgeing the attacks. The man then had fire form around the his blade. Rui had wind form around his blade. Rui and the man then clashed blades. A shockwave started form. They then were blasted away.

 

'' Dang. Wind and fire don't mix well.''thought Rui as he fell on a chiff heading staight to the ground.

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It's interesting. I'll say that. The only thing I recommend is for you to do like whenever you do quotes, after the quote is finished, press the enter key.

Hm.That's a very great story.