If there is one thing I like about this rewrite is that it acknowledges that Ventus was still angry at Aqua as well as a somewhat angsty and realistic reaction to Roxas having Ven’s face. You can read it here: https://archiveofourown.org/works/21680044/chapters/71878761

wow that is not great. they did not capture the way the characters talk at all

59 minutes ago, ocean's rage said:

wow that is not great. they did not capture the way the characters talk at all

Better than cringe, if you ask me.

18 minutes ago, Iscreamer1 said:

Better than cringe, if you ask me.

thats more cringe than anything ive ever seen disney do 

not to mention it creates plot holes. this idea that KH3 needs fixing is daft and the people who try to fix it dont seem to be any good at it

Maybe the idea itself is not bad, but how it is written is definitely bad