do you know me for me?? do you see me for me?? do you know me for who im m i don't need ppl telling me what to do telling me who i m calling me rude i don't take it i get up and say you NOT the boss of me i can be rude but il say im sorry i don't need ppl calling me name's and if you don't like it then to bad

 

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do you know me for me?? do you see me for me?? do you know me for who im m i don't need ppl telling me what to do telling me who i m calling me rude i don't take it i get up and say you NOT the boss of me i can be rude but il say im sorry i don't need ppl calling me name's and if you don't like it then to bad

 

hope u like :|[/u][/i]

 

This a rant more than writing but anyways I feel alot of negative feelings that unnecessary

It's alright, but it would be easier to read and understand if you used spellcheck/checked your grammar over. Just a suggestion~

 

do you know me for me?? do you see me for me?? do you know me for who im m i don't need ppl telling me what to do telling me who i m calling me rude i don't take it i get up and say you NOT the boss of me i can be rude but il say im sorry i don't need ppl calling me name's and if you don't like it then to bad

 

hope u like :|[/u][/i]

 

This a rant more than writing but anyways I feel alot of negative feelings that unnecessary

 

...if he intended to have negative feelings in it, then there will be. this isnt the advice he needs, more what demyx says.

fix your grammar, punctuation and spelling.

 

 

do you know me for me?? do you see me for me?? do you know me for who im m i don't need ppl telling me what to do telling me who i m calling me rude i don't take it i get up and say you NOT the boss of me i can be rude but il say im sorry i don't need ppl calling me name's and if you don't like it then to bad

 

hope u like :|[/u][/i]

 

This a rant more than writing but anyways I feel alot of negative feelings that unnecessary

 

...if he intended to have negative feelings in it, then there will be. this isnt the advice he needs, more what demyx says.

fix your grammar, punctuation and spelling.

 

Well actually it's a she lol. I already gave that advice over chat haha. I was just pointing out that the reason behind this was a little unorthadox. I for one love passionate poems and although yes, this is a good piece the meaning behind it is incomplete. It's not just about your spelling and grammar but the heart behind all of it.

WHY ARE YOU ALL MEAN lol jk i know i sucks at spilling sorry