Posted March 21, 201114 yr When I was awakened You were the one that I had always noticed first When I was asleep You were the one that I was always dreaming of When I was alone You were the one that always came into the room When I was cold You were the one that always wrapped me up warmly in your arms When I was afraid You were the one that always shielded my eyes from the fright When I was hurting You were the one was always there to comfort me When I was crying You were the one that always wiped away each and every one of my tears When I was screaming You were the one that was always there to hush me When I was psychotic You were the one that always brought me back to my senses When I was talking You were the one that was always there to listen When I was speechless You were the one that always reminded me of the right words to say When I was happy you were the one that always put a smile on my face When I was laughing You were the one that always gave me the pleasure When I was angry You were the one that always calmed me down When I was lost You were the one that had always found me When I was confused You were the one that always gave me the answer When I was thinking You were the one that always filled my thoughts When I was aroused You were the one that always turned me on When I was fighting You were the one that I was always fighting for As I am still in love You are the only one that's been able to capture my heart in the moment And as I now lay dying You've been the one that has stood by my side, through darkness and in light, holding my hand And promising that you'd always remember me ...Thank you~
March 21, 201114 yr Oh, sis! This was really good and emotive > :] It kinda remembered me of the music "My immortal" from Evanescence 8D You'll be a better writer in the future 8D Hope to buy one of your books!
March 21, 201114 yr Author Awww thats sooo good sister Thanks brother ^^ Oh, sis! This was really good and emotive > :] It kinda remembered me of the music "My immortal" from Evanescence 8D You'll be a better writer in the future 8D Hope to buy one of your books! Thanks brother ^^ You can read some of the things I've written once I get my laptop 8D Your Welcome~ lol thanks
March 28, 201114 yr Wow... that was so moving and it touched my heart. You are such an awesome poet Zexion's_lover_4...keep up the great work.
March 28, 201114 yr Author Wow... that was so moving and it touched my heart. You are such an awesome poet Zexion's_lover_4...keep up the great work. Thank you so much It means alot to me. ^^
March 28, 201114 yr You're welcome...what i say after i read something is how i truly feel after i read it. that's just how i am.
When I was awakened
You were the one that I had always noticed first
When I was asleep
You were the one that I was always dreaming of
When I was alone
You were the one that always came into the room
When I was cold
You were the one that always wrapped me up warmly in your arms
When I was afraid
You were the one that always shielded my eyes from the fright
When I was hurting
You were the one was always there to comfort me
When I was crying
You were the one that always wiped away each and every one of my tears
When I was screaming
You were the one that was always there to hush me
When I was psychotic
You were the one that always brought me back to my senses
When I was talking
You were the one that was always there to listen
When I was speechless
You were the one that always reminded me of the right words to say
When I was happy
you were the one that always put a smile on my face
When I was laughing
You were the one that always gave me the pleasure
When I was angry
You were the one that always calmed me down
When I was lost
You were the one that had always found me
When I was confused
You were the one that always gave me the answer
When I was thinking
You were the one that always filled my thoughts
When I was aroused
You were the one that always turned me on
When I was fighting
You were the one that I was always fighting for
As I am still in love
You are the only one that's been able to capture my heart in the moment
And as I now lay dying
You've been the one that has stood by my side, through darkness and in light, holding my hand
And promising that you'd always remember me
...Thank you~