This is another story that I've been working on recently. I'm posting the first chapter for Zexikon Day(coming up on 4/6 ) and I'm going to post more chapters when I get the chance.

 

[align=center]The plot to the story is about me as a 22 year old character. Reikon(myself) is an assassin and is on the run from killing countless of people. She did it to give "false hearts" to the Heartless. She isn't a Heartless but is actually a anihuman who can shape shift(mostly into animals)but she finds out more about the Heartless and takes pity of them. So, she kills humans to steal their heart and her powers allow her to form the heart of the humans into the bodies of Heartless. However, it isn't the Heartless's real heart and, because of it, they only gain a will and feelings of their own and nothing else because the heart doesn't belong to them. Reikon doesn't know about the Nobodies until she meets Zexion. Instead of fighting, Reikon does not wish to harm the Nobodies and instead she also wants to take pity on them and help them in gaining a true heart from creating Kingdom Hearts. In the meantime, she gives the thirteen members of the Organzation a false heart. Even though the heart truly doesn't belong to them, the members are grateful to have them and decides to accept Reikon as if she was one of their own.

Zexion is truly intrigued by Reikon's powers and takes a strong liking to her. When he gains a false heart, he realizes that Reikon in the woman of his dreams. However, Reikon has never dated a human before so she is timid to get close to Zexion in fear that he will reget knowing her because of her brutal past and the things that she has been through and the horrible things that she has done.

You see, in this story, Reikon was never liked by humans and was abused growing up. She had tried to get close to people but they have all rejected her. She realizes that she has incredible powers of strength, illusion, shape shifting, magic and defense and decides to use all her anger and sadness towards people in fighting and, in turn, she always comes out strong.

She is one with nature and always takes pity on those who are unfortunate. She resents fighting, only defending and fighting when need be. She gains alot of respect from the Org members but Zexion is the one that really peaks her curiousity.

So, she must choose to take a chance with him or leave the Organzation, never to be seen again, in fear that she'll get too attached.[/align]

 

Chapter 1- Illuding Threat

Summoning Bold Knife, I braced myself for what was to come. This wasn't relatively a difficult battle but, in these days, you could never be too sure. As the group of Heartless stood behind me in hiding, I lifted up my two hundred-twenty pound weapon and diagonally slashed it in front of myself, letting the beings, that were in front of me, know that I was prepared to fight.

 

The beings in front of me were solid white with grey markings on the sides of their body. They had the formation somewhat like a human but not quite. They had a zipper for a mouth and no visible eyes and they had a strange symbol on top of their heads, a symbol that didn't reprisent or look like the Heartless symbol.

 

The twelve; look-alike figures that stood before me, simutaneously unzipped their mouth without personally unzipping it themselves. If anything, they just continued to sway from side to side as their mouths unzipped, revealing nothing but pure darkness inside.

 

Springing up into the air, I raised Bold Knife above my head with ease and sliced two of the beings. Eight came closer to me, taking rather hugs steps as two were floating slowly above me, trying to grab me. As one of the beings grabbed my wrist, I turned to the side to face it and gracefully swung Bold Knife across it's midsection. It faded away, joining the other two in darkness.

 

My senses told me one of the beings was creeping up behind me. Not even needing to see it, I waved Bold Knife rather harshly in back of me, destroying the figure that had been behind me and returning it to the darkness.

 

Remaining, were eight beings. I was now encased in a circle by the beings. A smirk crossed my features. To most, a trap like this would mean the end but to a merciless, agile, hostile, and professional assassin, such as myself, this meant excitement.

 

I realized I'd be able to use

Really good What else could we expect from you?

Hopes to get the 2nd chapter soon!

holy crap, you were right it IZ LONG!!! like my shlong ;D great plt and story, ILU!!!!!

This story is amazing. Great job. Can't wait for chapter 2.

Awesome! not much typos and spot on work! Keep it up!

Thanks. I'll be posting Chapter 2 up either tomorrow or Thursday

I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE IT!! ^^

here comes a paragraph of crit.

First paragraph in, I already felt like you were focusing on little things, like the weight of your weapon - which to me is unnecessary information. Let us have a little imagination.

You misspelled 'represent' and it should be a comma instead of a semicolon after 'The twelve'. The semicolon looks awkward. 'If anything' is also kind of awkward, just being placed in there.

We already know what you're fighting with from the first paragraph, so it doesn't make sense using the name over and over. It doesn't seem to flow very well, and kind of makes it sound choppy.

Also, the pronunciations, I don't think they should be in there either. Again, the reader should be able to use their imagination. If you really want to include the pronunciation of something, I would say use it during dialogue and have a character tell another character how to pronounce it.

You're also switching tenses too much. It makes it somewhat confusing. As I'm reading it, it just feels very robotic to me. It may just be the fact that I've been reading more poetic, flow-y stories recently, but still just feels like bland and no emotion behind it.

Also, I'm not very fond of how you put in the background of your character in there. It just seems like you inserted the paragraph explaining a little about your character. And it's really little, like I still feel like we don't anything about her and we won't anytime soon, as well as her being plain, in my honest opinion.

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here comes a paragraph of crit.

First paragraph in, I already felt like you were focusing on little things, like the weight of your weapon - which to me is unnecessary information. Let us have a little imagination.

You misspelled 'represent' and it should be a comma instead of a semicolon after 'The twelve'. The semicolon looks awkward. 'If anything' is also kind of awkward, just being placed in there.

We already know what you're fighting with from the first paragraph, so it doesn't make sense using the name over and over. It doesn't seem to flow very well, and kind of makes it sound choppy.

Also, the pronunciations, I don't think they should be in there either. Again, the reader should be able to use their imagination. If you really want to include the pronunciation of something, I would say use it during dialogue and have a character tell another character how to pronounce it.

You're also switching tenses too much. It makes it somewhat confusing. As I'm reading it, it just feels very robotic to me. It may just be the fact that I've been reading more poetic, flow-y stories recently, but still just feels like bland and no emotion behind it.

Also, I'm not very fond of how you put in the background of your character in there. It just seems like you inserted the paragraph explaining a little about your character. And it's really little, like I still feel like we don't anything about her and we won't anytime soon, as well as her being plain, in my honest opinion.

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This is your opinion and I thank you for being open and honest about it. I try to get better really lol. Also, the reason why I picked 4/6 for Zexikon Day was because I'm technically not going to be in the Organization since I'm not a Nobody so I just decided to use my favorite number and then Zexion's number so 4/6 could have a holiday like VexenxZexion but with a different character.

I know Heartless reply on instinct but she is one with Heartless. She's not a Heartless but is able to understand them unlike others. The gender thing is just imagination really. There's no limit to my imagination

I felt like I needed to describe the type of weapon sooner or later but I did force it in a early. I was wondering if I should put the pronounciation of the magic spells in or not but couldn't decide but put them in at the last minute. I checked it over before I submitted it but now that I know that I have more spelling mistakes, I'll go over it again and fix the corrections.

The battles seem short because she's pretty strong and agile. I want to make her a highly strong character. That's why I put Lexaeus stutter a bit because it was a powerful move that she had used. I only talk about my character a little in this chapter but, when she confronts Zexion in the second she talks about her whole past and what happened so she'll be explained more. Vexen was a bit OOC but I tried to make him funny but I think I failed lol

Again it's your honest opinion and thanx for telling me (:

 

it doesn't really make sense that she's one with the Heartless, yet she isn't one.

The gender, well, it's a fact there's a difference between imagination and changing facts.

That's one thing I have a big problem with, making her a strong character off the bat. That's just... a mega Mary Sue trait right there. I would prefer that it took a while for her for her to get stronger. And develop more.

OK, Bro.

Nobody

cool story as always. Can't wait for the other chapter

it doesn't really make sense that she's one with the Heartless' date=' yet she isn't one.

The gender, well, it's a fact there's a difference between imagination and changing facts.

That's one thing I have a big problem with, making her a strong character off the bat. That's just... a mega Mary Sue trait right there. I would prefer that it took a while for her for her to get stronger. And develop more.

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Well, it did take her awhile to get strong. However, it's not explained in this story. I wrote another one my computer that doesn't have internet access(this isn't my pc btw) and it explains her background and a whole plot of her life and what she had to do to get to where she's at. Well, no one really knows who or what she is accept that she is very out of place and different and unique so I figured it wouldn't be a odd that she'd befriend or come into plot with the Heartless.

 

OK, Bro.

Nobody

O...wow...just...wow.... i loved it. it kept me entertained and wanting more. i loved the fact that you had used hearts for the change of characters. I had found the org 13 parts...epecially Vexen's...to be funny. which is what a story needs for something so serious. you actually caught and held my attention when you were explaining what the story is about. i didn't realize how long the chapter was when you sent it to me, but when i read it it didn't seem to be long at all, becuase my attention was on the story. I had a blast reading the story. it is a true piece of fanfic literature for sure...i loved the fact that you had used first person, becuase well...you are the main character....but using first person makes the reader believe that they are the main character, which is something that i had always loved about literature no matter what kind it is.

it doesn't really make sense that she's one with the Heartless' date=' yet she isn't one.

The gender, well, it's a fact there's a difference between imagination and changing facts.

That's one thing I have a big problem with, making her a strong character off the bat. That's just... a mega Mary Sue trait right there. I would prefer that it took a while for her for her to get stronger. And develop more.

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Well, it did take her awhile to get strong. However, it's not explained in this story. I wrote another one my computer that doesn't have internet access(this isn't my pc btw) and it explains her background and a whole plot of her life and what she had to do to get to where she's at. Well, no one really knows who or what she is accept that she is very out of place and different and unique so I figured it wouldn't be a odd that she'd befriend or come into plot with the Heartless.

 

OK, Bro.

Nobody

it doesn't really make sense that she's one with the Heartless' date=' yet she isn't one.

The gender, well, it's a fact there's a difference between imagination and changing facts.

That's one thing I have a big problem with, making her a strong character off the bat. That's just... a mega Mary Sue trait right there. I would prefer that it took a while for her for her to get stronger. And develop more.

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Well, it did take her awhile to get strong. However, it's not explained in this story. I wrote another one my computer that doesn't have internet access(this isn't my pc btw) and it explains her background and a whole plot of her life and what she had to do to get to where she's at. Well, no one really knows who or what she is accept that she is very out of place and different and unique so I figured it wouldn't be a odd that she'd befriend or come into plot with the Heartless.

 

OK, Bro.

Nobody

I'll be one of those people who will be celebrating Zexikon day with you Zexion's_lover_46...and i can't wait for both the event and the next chapter....but of course you already know that.

Chapter 2 is up ^^

 

Chapter 2-Unbelievable Truths

The next morning, I was up early. I didn't sleep well the night before but that was a usual for me. Getting up out of bed, I fed the Heartless. The thoughts from yesterday were still keeping me fixated on the events themselves as I made my coffee. Instead of sugar, I added blood. Most people would find it grotesque, but blood was just something that I'd rather not live without.

 

Today I'd have to find a way to get some food. I didn't have any munny or couldn't risk giving my information out to get a job so I had to forcefully take the food. But I usually stayed away from "prepackaged" food or any dead animal for that matter. So, that left me with need for human blood.

This was the main reason I was wanted...

 

I went outside to enjoy the last bit of darkness that engulfed the earth before the brutal sunlight from the sun came upon the land. I knew that those creatures would come back again but, it wasn't the battle that worried me, it was whythey wanted to battle with me. Did it have something to do with me? I didn't think so. I think they were after the Heartless and I was the one standing in their way. But it didn't matter to me. I wouldn't let the Heartless fall under the likes of those beings, whatever they were.

 

I wouldn't let them hurt the ones that I cared for. The Heartless and I could relate in many ways. I wasn't a Heartless but I acted so cruel sometimes and I've killed people that weren't meant to die. The Heartless and I were never meant to exist either. My mother always told me that I was never planned and that I was a mistake. I grew up hearing her voice say that over and over in my head. Sometimes, the voices would get so loud that I couldn't sleep.

 

But I wasn't crazy. Everyone thought I was but I wasn't; I just tried to live life but, because of my powers, I had to live life differently. But no human ever accepted that. Animals, Heartless, and darkness were the ones that accepted me for who I was. And that's all I really needed. For all the comfort they've given me I could never turn my back on them. So, I made it my duty to protect them come hell or high water. I'd give my life for them because without them there would be no life for me. Becoming wrapped up in my thoughts, I was startled when a body armor touched me gently on the shoulder. With a gasp, I turned around and I could see the fear in his eyes. The armor held out his hand to let me know that he wanted me to follow him. I took his hand and we both teleported to the tram common of Twilight Town where I caught a scent of a male. But I could tell that he was different then the male I had fought yesterday.

 

"Pleasure to make your acquaintance newcomer," a voice spoke out. I turned my attention to the gift shop and looked up to see someone with blue hair covered over his right eye. He was levitating on top of the roof of the shop and had a book in his hands.

 

"Pardon me?" I asked standing my ground. "I think it is you that is the 'newcomer' because, unlike us, YOU don't belong here!"

"Surely, you're not referring to the Heartless living here with you," the male questioned. "In any case, allow me to introduce myself. I am Zexion. Master of Illusion, highly skilled in magic, and known as The Cloaked Schemer."

 

"Why would I care?" I mocked. "You're just another one of those...humans. I have no business with you and you have no business with me."

"Oh, I beg to differ," Zexion replied. "I do hope you recall taking down a Nobody the other night and, if he hadn't teleported away, he would've been doomed to fade back into darkness."

 

"I don't know of anything called 'Nobodies'," I answered truthfully. "But, if they're anything like humans, they're on my 'Things to Destroy' list. The man was the one who sent beings after my Heartless."

 

The body armor stayed back but I felt something touch my leg. "Pocket!" I noted looking down and seeing a Shadow Heartless. "Sweetie, how many times have I told you that you can't follow me wherever I go?" Pocket had somehow snuck into the teleportation when I wasn't looking. This is why I called him Pocket because, just like a pocket on your shirt, it was as if he was patched alongside of me, never wanting to leave.

 

"Intriguing as ever," Zexion muttered. "I've never seen Heartless act as if they have feelings."

"They're not acting," I protested. "They can actually feel. Because I gave them a heart."

Zexion gasped and his look went from mischevious to confused in a near instant.

"Of their very own?" he asked truly intrigued it seemed.

"Negative," I explained. "There false hearts. The ones I've stolen from people who didn't, how should I say, deserve to have feelings."

"But how could you-," Zexion began but I cut him off as I leaped up into the air and summoned Bold Knife. I came crashing down towards Zexion but he faded away and that's when I realized he was truly an illusionist like myself. Illusionist among illusionist, I knew his tactics like my very own and, once I landed on the roof of the shop where Zexion had been levitating moments ago, I jumped to the left hand side where I could sense Zexion's real self and fight him, rather then a mirage that I had been talking to moments ago.

 

Taken by surprise, Zexion didn't have much time to think so he was barely able to set up a defense. He landed on the ground and I landed a few feet away from him.

"Phenominal," he commented. "I've never met someone intelligent enough to figure me out so easily. No matter, I still have many tricks up my sleeve and in my mind."

"I do not wish to fight you," I answered. "I wish to make peace and find out more about you Nobodies."

Zexion gave a fake smile and a short laugh. "Why would you bother to care about one who has no feelings?"

"I gave the Heartless a heart didn't I?" I pointed out. "I took them in as my own because they are my own."

"You're illuding yourself," Zexion quickly replied thinking that I was making a false statement.

"HOW DARE YOU TELL ME WHAT'S REAL!" I yelled twirling Bold Knife and then sprinting over to the blue haired schemer, jumping up and bringing my weapon down. He darted away, avoiding contact.

 

But I had a hunch that he'd do something like this so I was quick to react as I already had things planned out. In an instant, I flashed in front of him. My eyes glowed white and three illusions of me came before me. They formed a triangle around Zexion and, while he was distracted, one by one my formations flashed towards him, slightly cutting into him and rendering him out of breath and almost helpless.

However, I made it so that he wouldn't die because I had no wish to kill at the moment. And he was the key to find out more about these beings called Nobodies.

 

Zexion fell to his knees and grabbed his chest, trying to focus on his breathing.

"As much as I hate to admit it," I admitted as the mirages and the white glow in my eyes faded away. "You're right that the Heartless aren't my own but I call them my own because I truly see them as my own."

"This is absurd," Zexion gasped slowly standing back up. "I've never witnessed..such power."

"Hmm," I answered unpreturbed. "Glad I could make an impact. It does my heart good to see that I've come a long way from where I was."

"What are you?" Zexion asked me with an fustrated look on his face.

Trying to avoid Zexion's question(because I really didn't want to tell him of my past, especially since I just met him and I really don't think he'd care if I told him anyway), I acted as if he was inclined to answer my questions first.

 

"I think the question is: What are YOU?"

"I'm a Nobody of course," Zexion answered.

"Ok," I replied. "Let me rephrase that: what's a Nobody?"

"Nobodies are beings much like the Heartless," Zexion answered. "Yet they have the will and mind to act as their own."

Zexion looked at Pocket with a blank expression on his face. "Without a heart," he added.

"So," I retorted. "What do they have to do with the Heartless and I?"

"They have plenty to do with the Heartless," Zexion explained. "You're just standing in their way so they went after you."

"Wait, if you're a Nobody," I replied. "Then why don't you look like the other types of Nobodies, like the ones I fought yesterday?"

 

"When one with a strong heart, such as myself, looses their heart, they loose their feelings but keep the shape of a human form. There are only 12 others like me. The lesser Nobodies such as the dusks, assassins, and dragoons that you fought yesterday take orders to destroy the Heartless in hopes to create Kingdom Hearts. Then we can truly exist."

"In that case," I answered. "I want to help you."

 

"What I want to know is," Zexion replied. "Why would you want to help Nobodies when they have nothing to do with you? Additionally, why is it that you're aiding the Heartless, beings that don't have a right to exist?"

"I don't have a right to exist," I explained. "And no one cared about me. So, I'm preventing that from happening again by being the one that helps those who shouldn't exist and those who are outcasts."

 

"But you have feelings don't you?" Zexion questioned. "Surely, you're meant to be, even if you don't think that's true."

"I wasn't treated like I was meant to be here," I corrected. "Either way, my life's purpose is a caretaker. I was neglected from the day I was born so, instead of laying down and letting humans have their way with punishing me, I stood up for what was right, even though I stood alone. And I came out strong."

 

"Intriguing," Zexion remarked. "You're a strange one indeed."

"Excuse me?" I asked raising an eyebrow.

"Please, don't take offense to that," Zexion answered. "I don't mean that you're strange in a bad way. I mean that in a talented way."

"Wow, really?" I asked surprised that he'd said something as thoughtful as that, even when he didn't have feelings.

"Of course I mean it," Zexion replied. "If you could give us a heart, even if it's not our own then I must say that's quite unique indeed. You're probably the only one who has the power to do that. I applaud you for all that you've done...hmm...what's your name?"

"Reikon," I answered.

"A unique name for a unique women," Zexion noted. "My aplogies for jumping into a fight with you earlier. I had the wrong impression."

I smiled. "Eh, I'm used to it," I answered. "Most people get the same impression of me."

"I would like you to come back with me," Zexion replied. "Back to our Organization."

"To help you right?" I asked. "Not to use me?"

"If it isn't too much to ask," Zexion answered with a smile on his face. "Yes, I would like you to help us. It'd mean alot...well it would once we gain our feelings back."

 

Knowing that it was going to take sometime, the body armor teleported away but Pocket followed me. I sighed and picked him up in my arms.

"I hope you don't mind if Pocket comes along," I answered.

"It's quite alright with me," Zexion reassured.

Holding Pocket in one hand, I took Zexion's hand and we teleported to a place that I had never come across before. It was very beautiful; it was dark, dreary, and peaceful.

"Wow," I exclaimed as I held Pocket in my arms and looked up into the dark sky. "It's beautiful. You have quite an intriguing location for home."

"Why thank you," Zexion answered. "Most people aren't fond of the dark like we are here."

 

"I'm fond of the dark," I answered. "I'm very fond."

Zexion smiled. "Reikon," he introduced. "Welcome to The World That Never Was."

My eyes sparkled into the night sky as I caught sight of the heart shaped moon. This place was extrodinary; a peaceful land that I had never thought could exist.

 

"Some of our recruits are at Castle Oblivion at the moment," Zexion informed me. "But they'll all promptly report to this evening's meeting."

The World That Never Was was huge and it was easy for me to get lost in such a place like this. It made me feel at ease that Zexion was leading the way. Usually, I insisted that I'd do everything on my own but there was something about him that really got my heart racing.

"I hope there's vacancy here," I called over to Zexion as he led me to a hallway with many rooms. "That is, if I'm allowed to stay here."

 

This would be a good excuse to get food. I seriously doubt I could go on the hunt for human here but maybe I could eat some fruit or vegatables. I just wanted something in my body to keep me energized. Giving false hearts to beings was quite a difficult task. It was a good thing that I had taken the lives of people beforehand and saved a fair amount of hearts.

 

"Feel free to stay here as long as you like," Zexion insisted.

Just then one of the rooms to the doors opened and someone with red spikey hair poked his head out of the room.

"Yo, Zexi-uh whose that?" the redhead asked.

"Well," Zexion began but I cut him off. I was completely able to make my own introduction.

 

"This may sound unbelievable," I interupted. "But I'm someone whose going to give you a heart."

The redhead raised an eyebrow and then noticed Pocket in my arms.

The redhead didn't say anything for sometime. I take it he didn't know what to say.

"And...you can do that?" he asked still fixated on Pocket. "Is that a Heartless?"

"Why, yes it is," I answered. "I bet you've never seen one act this way have you?"

"Uh no," he answered. "That's why I asked."

"Axel," Zexion told the redhead. "Shouldn't you be out on a mission?"

"No, I finished early," the redhead named Axel answered.

Axel came out of his room and came towards me. I'm sure he still didn't know what to think about this situation. He was probably in denial that I could give him a heart because he didn't seem too enthusiastic but he didn't have feelings so maybe that was expectant.

"I'm Axel," he told me extending his hand. "Got it memorized?"

"Uh sure," I answered as I was a bit caught off guard by they "got it memorized" statement. "Pleasure."

 

I didn't bother to shake his hand but gave eye contact. I had a sense that he was the pyro of the Organzation. Just by his looks and his actions I could tell his element was fire.

"And does Xemnas know about our fine addition?" Axel asked Zexion.

"No," Zexion answered.

"I'm not an 'addition'," I said immediately after Zexion finished speaking. "I'm one that...well doesn't have a place to belong."

"I'll be sure to memorize that," Axel answered and then he walked back into his room and shut the door.

"That went well," I replied with a smirk on my face as I turned my attention over to Zexion.

"As well as it could be," Zexion added.

"What's that suppose to mean?" I asked.

"Listen Reikon," he said. "There's some members that are tolerant of your company and there's some...that aren't looking for friendship."

Zexion looked up and noticed a tall male walking past him and down the hall. He was in a rush so he didn't bother to notice me until Zexion spoke out.

 

"Take Xaldin for example," he replied looking over towards the man. "He's one to keep to himself. So, it's advise that you don't-"

"Don't what," the man known as Xaldin replied turning around to face Zexion. That's when he caught sight of me. "Who are you?!"

 

"Hey there!" I greeted in an outgoing tone. "I'm Reikon."

"Your presence is not welcomed here intruder," Xaldin warned. "And you're lucky I don't destroy you right now! Zexion, who is this girl and why is she here?"

"She's-" Zexion begin but I cut him off yet again.

"I told you," I interupted. "I'm Reikon. And, well, I'm here to help you. Isn't that nice."

"Humph!" Xaldin sneered. "Unless you can give us a heart, you will not benefit us in any way."

"But I can," I answered.

"What?" he asked me seemingly in shock. He turned his attention over to Zexion. "Is this some sort of a joke Zexion?"

"Not in the least," Zexion replied.

 

"Well, you seem somewhat rude Xaldin," I answered. "You should give people a chance, even if you don't think they deserve one. But, hey, I understand how cruel human nature could be so I don't blame you."

"You have a point with human nature," Xaldin answered. "But I still don't believe you."

"Why would you?" I asked. "But you'll be quite pleased when the time comes to reveal my powers to you. Won't it be nice to get a heart back."

"Sure..." Xaldin agreed having no room to argue.

With that he left and I couldn't tell if it looked like he was in disgust or if he looked relieved.

 

Not wasting any more time, I asked Zexion, "Since we're not having the meeting now, could I have something to eat please?"

"Of course," Zexion replied and he led me down the hall and into another room where he gave me something to eat.

 

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That afternoon, Zexion led me to Where Nothings Gather. He told me that it was where Organzation XIII held meetings. Him and I had spent the morning conversing about our past and then Zexion told me everything about Organization XIII and their goal.

 

I looked around the corner and noticed seats that were high up in the air. In the middle, there was the Nobodies symbol. As the Organzation members started appearing in each of there designated seats, I turned to Zexion, who was standing next to me, and asked him, "Think they'll believe me?"

"I do not know for sure," Zexion replied. "But they'll discover that you're telling the truth soon enough."

 

Once every member had come to join the meeting, Zexion escorted me out into the center of the meeting room and looked up at the leader, Xemnas.

Xemnas didn't say anything at first and it led me to believe he wanted me to be the first one to speak.

 

"I've come to help you," I simply said.

Xemnas still did not say a word at first, as if pondering on the whole situation. It wasn't everday that you stumble across someone who had powers to give you a heart. If anything, I was probably the only one in the world who could give someone a false heart successfully.

 

"And why is it that you'd help someone like us?" Xemnas finally spoke.

"Because I know what it's like to feel unwanted," I explained. "I know what it's like to be an outcast. I really don't even think I'm meant to exist even though I have feelings and a heart. I was always told I was never meant to be. But either way I'm here and I want to give those who are taken for granted a second chance. Please believe me when I say, I understand the need for second chances."

 

"And how does this process go about?" Xemnas asked curiously.

"Well, the process is done with dark magic," I explained. "So, there's risk involved. You'll be in a trance so you won't be able to move."

"So you're saying once it begins there's no going back am I correct?" Xemnas asked.

"Yes," I confirmed.

 

"Are you really going to believe someone like this?" Vexen objected. "It's highly unbelievable that you could just give hearts out to Nobodies."

"You know," Sa

* whinning in agony* Awe...lol...awe...man....why leave me hanging like that? I wanted to read more...I wanted to see who was next. *fakes a sob then pouts* Man....I don't want to wait for the next chapter...but I guess I have to suck it up and deal. *Gets excited* =D Really Zexion's_lover_46, it just keeps getting better and better as I read further into a chapter. I thought it was pretty cool that Zexion was the first one to 'get' his feelings back. You're really letting me suffer with anticipation for what's going to happen next. Keep up the awesome work! I truly loved it...and I know I'll love it until the last chapter. This is really something to look forward to. From one cloaked schemer lover to the next, this is truly a masterpiece in making. =D. Just a Marvelous piece of work.

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