Little pieces of dirt hit her eyes. Unconscious, the girl finally waken up. The pit was deep, dark, and scary to her. The girls hands and feet were tied. Then it hit her. She remembered everything that happened. Tears ran down her face she was being buried. "Please stop! Stop throwing dirt!" she whispered. As she looked up, she saw a familiar face. It was Kiro, her best friend. He was burying her alive as well. "Kiro, why? I thought you would always protect me! In the end you were a liar. You never did.." she whispered but didn't finish the sentence. Kiro was as kept throwing dirt down. "I'm sorry Enma Ai, please forgive me one day" he whispered as well.

 

The light was thinning by the second. They threw one last shovel of dirt on her. Enma Ai's parents looked as she was buried. They left in silence. The air was gone. She laid there alone, and dying of no air. Enma Ai closed her eyes. She saw a figure coming to her. She couldn't move but she felt safe for some reason. The figure became a little old man. The man smiled at her and said,"Hello Enma Ai I have been watching you for a long time. I've seen what the villagers did to you. They've called you a demon. Your friend Kiro abandoned you. You feel lost, confused, and scared. I can help you. I am the one they call Omenshu."

 

Enma Ai looked and listen to what was told. He made her feel better. "I can be alive again but how?" she said. The man walked around her and said,"I will give you life back but you must sign my contract. You will bring the sinners down the gate to Hell. You will be apart of the supernatural but you can still die just like a human. Times have change. In the modern world it is easy to die but you will have companions on your journey, but do you accept?". Enma Ai thought for awhile and said "Yes..I do". The old man smiled and when he took her hand pure darkness came into her. The everywhere was dark and then a light came to her and she fell from the sky and landed in the grass. When she looked she saw three figures but her eyes couldn't see very well. The three figures looked at each other and smiled...

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Chapter 2: The Three figures

 

 

Enma Ai waken up hours later but the three figures was still there. They helped Enma Ai up and stood back.

"Hello, are you the people that the old man told me about?" she said. They shook their heads yes. One was a lady in kimono and had her long hair in a stylish style. There was also an old man in a ancient kimono and a hat. Just like the ones she remembered but the boy had something new that hadn't seen before. He had his hair covered his eye. The boy also been wearing a jacket and t shirt and also jeans. It shocked her it was new to her. "What are you names then?" she said. They looked up and the sky was bright blue. "Our names are Wanyudo, Hone Onna, and Terra." they said.

 

 

Enma Ai smiled,but she felt something in the back of her . Then something whispered to her. 'Ai Enma...Ai Enma...Ai Enma...new name.' it kept saying. "My name is Ai Enma..." she said. The boy walked up and said,"Its ok we know that you real name was Enma Ai but you have to change it." Enma Ai looked around the meadow and nodded. Emna Ai stared down a notice her clothes have to a Japanese school girl outfit. She liked the outfit though. They started to walk out of the meadow of flowers and walked to an ancient old house and Enma Ai walked in by herself.

 

She looked around. Cob webs every,but she knew that house from anywhere. Everything was still there that she remembered. "Mom...Dad..where are you?" she said but no answer. She went through the house then she walked out. "Their dead..I forgot. It was over a hundred years ago." she said. A tear feel out,but nothing else. Then she began to walk by herself into the streets of Tokyo. Everything was different. Buildings,clothes,people was so new to her.

Edited April 17, 201114 yr by Ai Enma

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Chapter 3:Enma Taking On the World

 

Enma's taking the new world as she sees it. "Tokyo has change a lot from the smallest village to a city. These people look different. It feels different. Where's everything that I remembered? Nothing that I remember is here anymore." she said. As walking couple of school girls walked by laughing and giggling.

Enma stared at them for awhile. 'They seem so happy. Where's their kimonos and escorts?' she thought.

 

Enma sat on the stairs of the library and put her head on her knees. She closed her eyes and opened them again. Hone Onna and Terra was there. Enma stood up and looked around it looked like time had frozen. Everyone wasn't moving. It was quiet as church. "I want to leave now. I want to go home where Kiro is. Oh..I forgot he doesn't care no more. Let's just go.",Enma said. They just nodded and began too walk.

 

 

"Ai, I know this is knew to you but things will get better. You are knew to these things and you still are heartbroken from Kiro Unako." Terra said. Enma looked at him. 'How did he knew about Kiro? Did the old man tell him." she thought but just nodded as they walked. Enma looked around. Then she felt sadness in her heart. She put her hand over her heart and smiled. "Hone Onna and Terra will you help me pro feel my revenge? I just need to go back to my home." she said. They nodded and walked to the ancient old house. Enma walked in the house and went into her room and found an picture that she drew.

 

She smiled at it. It was when she and Kiro was walking on the cliff. Then she looked back and ripped it up. She rubbed her hands together and a spark became into a flame. She blew it around. The little house burned to the ground. "What was done to me cannot be forgiven. I die with hatred in my heart and that is sin. My parents died with nothing in their heart. I know their in a better place. So I will help the people who have died with sadness.",she said. Terra was surprised at her. Enma watch the sun set on the horizon. They all watched in silence. 'Maybe I will find another friend better. I will understand then why I chosen someday.' she thought.

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Chapter 4: First Job

 

Nightfall has come. The crickets are singing the tuneful song as the Moon appears over the mountains. Enma has woken up on small dock by the pond. As she sits up she sees she wearing a kimono with big flowers on it. 'What happen? Did I change my clothes and forgotten?' she thought. She stood up and walked toward Hone Onna. She was smiling at Enma as she walked closer to her. "Hello Miss, are you ready for our first job together?" she said. Enma walked around and saw that no one else was there but her and Hone Onna.

 

It was quiet and peaceful during the night. The stars shone so brightly in the sky. "Hone Onna did you die once like me? Did you have to sign the contract too? I just feel so confused right now." Enma said. Hone Onna walked up to Enma and smiled. "I did die once but it was so long ago that I can't remember why I died or who even killed me. You are new to things like this. You died young but you have life again Miss. I am so ever grateful to be working with you on this mission." Hone Onna said. Enma had smiled and they began to walk into Tokyo.

 

The apartments were so small and quiet. Only thing you heard was the barking of dogs. There was only one light on. A woman was packing her things has fast as she could. She committed murder to her husband for no reason at all. She was leaving the city to go to America. As she walked quickly to her car forgot something. Enma was already in the dinning room waiting for her. It was quiet and the room was filled with darkness.

 

Then a suddenly something dropped. The woman grabbed the broom. "Is anyone there? Hello?" she said frantically. The room filled with light. The woman turned around and saw Enma. She breathed in and was calm again. "Little girl why are you here in my apartment? How did you even get in." she said. Enma stood up and walked toward her. Enma put her hand over the woman's head. "Yes you are Lillian. You have did a bad sin. So you must go to Hell. Your husband wants revenge on you." The woman walked backwards.

 

'How did she know that? I must leave now' she thought.She ran toward the door but darkness grabbed her. The woman fainted and Enma opened a portal to the a unknown place. She put the woman into the small boat and tied her to it. She began to row. The pond had lanterns and it was very foggy. In the sky it look like a flower was there. The woman woken 15 minutes later. She tried to get loose but couldn't. "Please little girl let me go. I'm begging you!" she said. A gate was coming up with the words in the Japanese said 'Hell'. The woman began to scream as loud as she could.

 

"Screaming and pleading won't stop you from go to hell. Even I can't. It is my job. So..goodbye." Enma said. The boat began to disappear and the went through the gate. Only thing was heard was 'I'm sorry..'. Enma walked back to shore and left in a portal to Hone Onna.

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