Was wondering what everyone thought? I've never done this before. The idea just popped into my head one day and I started writing it down. Be honest!
Name: Li Sung
Age: 16
Appearance: Around 5'2", skinny but curvy, tan, wears a short black pleated skirt, heeled black ankle boots with a silver buckle running across, a buttoned down white short sleeved shirt, a curious "Aura Necklace" that's shaped as a tear-drop and is clear but turns different colors in certain situations, long brown wavy hair and blue eyes.
Home World: Crystal Island
Side: Light
Storyline: Li Sung always had a special gift. She could "feel" when something was going to happen. She wasn't psychic, she didn't see dead people, she saw Aura's. When she felt something bad was going to happen or if someone in general was bad, her Aura See gift would "turn on." Happy, innocent people had white Aura's, Mischievous but good people had blue Aura's, Everyone in-between had purple Aura's, and the evil/bad things and people had red Aura's. On a blustery, rainy, warm summer night Li was trying to go to sleep. She had a hard time because her Aura See was sending off different signals and she started to see a mixture of colors. Confused, she got out of bed. When she went to look outside, the sky was pitch black with gray swirls and a huge dark blue and purple vortex spinning around. Frightened, she went to her parents room to see if they were ok and to warn them, but found their room empty. She then ran all over her house screaming out for them, but they weren't there. Li then went outside to look at the massive vortex in the sky. Before she knew it, she was being tugged by some unknown force towards the vortex. She grabbed hold of a tree, closed her eyes, then let out a loud high-pitched scream as the vortex sucked her in. She awoken up in a dark in-between sort of world. When she got up, she noticed a man covered in all red. He said to her "Don't even bother to see the light. It's a useless effort." Angry, scared and hurt she yelled "Where am I?! What happened to my parents? My home? What's going ON?!". The mysterious man said "I owe you no explanation." He summoned a large axe-like weapon and tried to come after her. She closed her eyes, waiting for her end until out of no where, a long, white with beautiful purple, baby blue and pink intricate designs keyblade appeared in her hand. Instantly, she blocked the man trying to attack her. She stared into the hood of his outfit to try to see eyes. All she saw was black. She held her ground until she saw a huge white light heading right for her. The man yelled out a disgruntled and defeated yell, disappeared, and Li was taken by the white light. After that, she was lying in a deserted street in an unknown place.
Keyblade/Weapon: White Oleander and Oblivion
Magic: Aura See (her own unique magic), Elemental (fire, ice, lightening ect) and Magnetism.
Was wondering what everyone thought? I've never done this before. The idea just popped into my head one day and I started writing it down. Be honest!
Name: Li Sung
Age: 16
Appearance: Around 5'2", skinny but curvy, tan, wears a short black pleated skirt, heeled black ankle boots with a silver buckle running across, a buttoned down white short sleeved shirt, a curious "Aura Necklace" that's shaped as a tear-drop and is clear but turns different colors in certain situations, long brown wavy hair and blue eyes.
Home World: Crystal Island
Side: Light
Storyline: Li Sung always had a special gift. She could "feel" when something was going to happen. She wasn't psychic, she didn't see dead people, she saw Aura's. When she felt something bad was going to happen or if someone in general was bad, her Aura See gift would "turn on." Happy, innocent people had white Aura's, Mischievous but good people had blue Aura's, Everyone in-between had purple Aura's, and the evil/bad things and people had red Aura's. On a blustery, rainy, warm summer night Li was trying to go to sleep. She had a hard time because her Aura See was sending off different signals and she started to see a mixture of colors. Confused, she got out of bed. When she went to look outside, the sky was pitch black with gray swirls and a huge dark blue and purple vortex spinning around. Frightened, she went to her parents room to see if they were ok and to warn them, but found their room empty. She then ran all over her house screaming out for them, but they weren't there. Li then went outside to look at the massive vortex in the sky. Before she knew it, she was being tugged by some unknown force towards the vortex. She grabbed hold of a tree, closed her eyes, then let out a loud high-pitched scream as the vortex sucked her in. She awoken up in a dark in-between sort of world. When she got up, she noticed a man covered in all red. He said to her "Don't even bother to see the light. It's a useless effort." Angry, scared and hurt she yelled "Where am I?! What happened to my parents? My home? What's going ON?!". The mysterious man said "I owe you no explanation." He summoned a large axe-like weapon and tried to come after her. She closed her eyes, waiting for her end until out of no where, a long, white with beautiful purple, baby blue and pink intricate designs keyblade appeared in her hand. Instantly, she blocked the man trying to attack her. She stared into the hood of his outfit to try to see eyes. All she saw was black. She held her ground until she saw a huge white light heading right for her. The man yelled out a disgruntled and defeated yell, disappeared, and Li was taken by the white light. After that, she was lying in a deserted street in an unknown place.
Keyblade/Weapon: White Oleander and Oblivion
Magic: Aura See (her own unique magic), Elemental (fire, ice, lightening ect) and Magnetism.
Current location: Land of Departure
What did ya think? Trash? Ok?