When she walks, I smile

When he walks, I smile

When it walks, I smile

But, when you walk, I cry.

 

AHEM num.2

 

(this is a haiku I wrote in 5TH grade)

Stars, what are they hm?

They are as radiant

as my smile you say?

 

[edit]

 

(anther Haiku)

Don't cry little one,

hold your salty eyes right now,

Happiness will come.

 

[EDIT] MORE!!!

Sorrow and woe,

Is all I feel,

no-one can fix this opening in my heart,

Everyone tries everyone fails,

They may as well quit,

my time had come to quit as well,

to quit acting time to show,

nothing will be the same,

I am so lame,

Here's some of mine

 

MY GOD

When I trip they laugh,

When I fall your there to catch me

When they trip I stare

But you don't fall because your my God

Weather I pass or fail

Have five friends or twenty

I know I have support from you because your my God

FIRE

I hear the crackling of the fire

For me this inspires

The poem I have written

Only to be unforgiven

By the cruel voices saying I can't be who I am

Thanks, I appreciate it!

My favorite from yours was when you said

 

When he walks, I smile

When she walks, I smile

When it walks, I smile

When you walk, I cry

 

It's actually really good! You like to smile don't you?

 

The two you said were good was some of the ones I came up with at the moment!

I have one more

 

This is my destiny

@zexy

yes, I DO like to smile! but I made that one becos of sumthin happened when I was litttle, my papa died and my mom sed that he walked away forever....

That's terrible, all well I don't have a dad either, died when I was in First Grade.

That's terrible, all well I don't have a dad either, died when I was in First Grade.

 

sorry

It's okay, I go to CZC (comfort zone camp) it's for people who've lost somone important to them in life. How old were you when that happened, or is that to personal?

Amy.......I never knew you were such a poet......O.o

The one about fire is my favorite.

umm