Larxene12 86 Posted November 4, 2009 When she walks, I smile When he walks, I smile When it walks, I smile But, when you walk, I cry. AHEM num.2 (this is a haiku I wrote in 5TH grade) Stars, what are they hm? They are as radiant as my smile you say? [edit] (anther Haiku) Don't cry little one, hold your salty eyes right now, Happiness will come. [EDIT] MORE!!! Sorrow and woe, Is all I feel, no-one can fix this opening in my heart, Everyone tries everyone fails, They may as well quit, my time had come to quit as well, to quit acting time to show, nothing will be the same, I am so lame, Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
zexionrox13 3 Posted November 5, 2009 Here's some of mine Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Larxene12 86 Posted November 6, 2009 MY GOD When I trip they laugh, When I fall your there to catch me When they trip I stare But you don't fall because your my God Weather I pass or fail Have five friends or twenty I know I have support from you because your my God FIRE I hear the crackling of the fire For me this inspires The poem I have written Only to be unforgiven By the cruel voices saying I can't be who I am Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
zexionrox13 3 Posted November 7, 2009 Thanks, I appreciate it! My favorite from yours was when you said When he walks, I smile When she walks, I smile When it walks, I smile When you walk, I cry It's actually really good! You like to smile don't you? The two you said were good was some of the ones I came up with at the moment! I have one more This is my destiny Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Larxene12 86 Posted November 7, 2009 @zexy yes, I DO like to smile! but I made that one becos of sumthin happened when I was litttle, my papa died and my mom sed that he walked away forever.... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
zexionrox13 3 Posted November 7, 2009 That's terrible, all well I don't have a dad either, died when I was in First Grade. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Larxene12 86 Posted November 7, 2009 That's terrible, all well I don't have a dad either, died when I was in First Grade. sorry Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
zexionrox13 3 Posted November 7, 2009 It's okay, I go to CZC (comfort zone camp) it's for people who've lost somone important to them in life. How old were you when that happened, or is that to personal? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Axel Fan8 1 Posted November 7, 2009 Amy.......I never knew you were such a poet......O.o The one about fire is my favorite. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites