So I've been writing various Chapter Stories (can't be called books, haven't been published, even though I'd like to try and get them published at one point) for about two years now. I honestly haven't been too satisfied with most of my work, but also realized that it may be because I've never let anyone read any of them. So I've decided to put one here for all of you to read. Warning, I've decided to use strong language if I remember to, or when I feel it's what I would use, which is why I decided to put the PG14+ thing in the title, cause just in case it takes that turn, I don't want it removed. Now this isn't Kingdom Hearts related, cause it isn't a Fan Fic, it's an actual original story. I'm currently working on the sixth chapter, and hope to add one every day until I post it's pre-determined end, which I already know. Some of the chapters don't yet have titles, cause I wanted the titles to all be songs off my ipod, and have yet to go through them to find a chapter title to correspond with each chapter. I would like anyone who reads this to comment and give feed back on what you think I may be doing right or wrong. Just because it's a pre-determined end, doesn't mean I can't change anything. This is the one that I wanted to do right, and I'm hoping all of you will help me with this.
Origins of The Wind
Chapter 1: Days
Everything in life goes in a sequential order, I should have known it would be a bad day when that sequence started with me finding the cat in the washing machine.
Well, it started, as I said, with me opening the washing machine door to find my little sister Maya’s cat, Neko, inside. He was fine, my clothes, not so much. I had to take everything out, even Neko’s little…”present” and then throw everything back in. As a result, I was late for school. I ran into first period and slid, falling onto my ass, into the teacher, and systematically into the principal’s office.
I sat there, watching the desk, as he looked from the complaint, to my file, to me, then repeated it about half a dozen times. Finally he spoke, “Why are you here?”
“Ask Mrs. ‘I don’t know what Look Out means’. I slipped, and accidentally slid into her. Sure, I was running, but I was late, you expect me to calmly walk into the school and sit down?”
“Yes…I do.”
“So? What’s wrong with some exercise in the morning?”
He glared at me, “I expect you to not use sarcasm, young man.”
“Right. Can I go now? This is really counter-productive.” I told him, looking blatantly not interested.
He seemed to smile, a rare sight for our principal, “How so?”
I smiled warmly, “Well, if you would sir, follow this logic. I was sent here cause I was late, therefore I was sent here for missing my classes. But if I’m here…I’m missing my classes, so how does this help at all?”
He nodded. What did that mean? Was I in the clear? Was I in deeper shit? What? Help me out here? Had I just dug my own grave six feet deep being lowered into it by my loved ones? He finally spoke, after what had seemed like forever, “You may go,” I must’ve just sat there for a while, cause this time there was a recognizable smile, “I’m serious…you may go.”
I stood up slowly, “Th…Thank you sir…” I slowly walked out of his office and back to class.
I walked in and my teacher, Mrs. Gonzalez, glared at me with a burning intensity that told me I was close to death. I took my seat and she stood up. Walking slowly to my desk, I could see her plan, slowly, but perfectly. The gears turned in her head like clockwork. I swallowed hard, ready for some abuse, but instead she slapped a piece of paper on my desk, “Get to work, Mr. Chase.” I raised an eyebrow, and her nostrils flared.
“Yes, ma’am.” I said calmly, pulling out a pen from my bag.
Upon finishing the first side, I flipped it over and saw a note, “See me after school.” It was a simple demand, but as I looked up, her eyes met with mine, and I was honestly scared of her for the first time in my life. What was she going to do to me? What kind of punishment was legal in her eyes? I nodded and she lowered her eyes.
So, I passed through the day quietly, small things going wrong. 60 on a physics test, fine. Detention for trying to help another classmate, why not? Lunch lady drops my sandwich, picks it up, and throws it onto my tray, excellence.
There was only a small bit of relief at the end of the day; my favorite teacher, and also the toughest I had; Mrs. Layland decided to give us the day off, which would never happen again, so we enjoyed it.
I put my head down and thought about the note Mrs. Gonzalez had given me. I had told my other teacher I was already in trouble with Mrs. Gonzalez, so he let me go without the detention out of pity. Everyone was afraid of her, which was why I was surprised my principle hadn’t punished me. It was like he already knew I was doomed. Suddenly I felt a hand on my shoulder, “Hey, Noah, are you awake?” asked a kind, sweet voice. I raised my head to see a girl, about average height, with shorter brown hair, and light brown eyes. If you asked her, they were “Hazel” but it’s the same freaking thing.
“Hm?” I asked, pretending to be asleep, “Hey Lucy…Guess I am now.” I faked a stretch and she smiled.
“So, what are you gonna do? I mean, even thinking about Mrs. Gonzalez gives me the creeps. I can’t imagine what it’s like having her mad at you.” Her face was full of worry.
I smiled, the kind of fake smile everyone uses to reassure people that they’re fine, “It’ll be okay, I have to meet her after school though, so if I’m not here tomorrow,” I leaned in close and whispered in her ear, “Call the cops…”
She hit my arm, “That’s not funny Noah, really.” The concern was sincere.
“I know,” I lowered my eyes, “Things just haven’t been going my way today, next thing I know I’ll be getting hit by a car or something…”
“Noah-” but the bell cut her off, she turned to it and then back to me, “Good luck…”
I nodded and walked past, throwing my bag over my shoulder. I walked slowly through the halls; everyone seemed to be heading away from his destination, away from him, as fast as they could. As if they could feel his upcoming death. I finally reached the room, and opened the door slowly after knocking. Mrs. Gonzalez looked up, and gave an evil smile.
Now, I probably should have turned an ran, but something inside me told me to stay. It was almost as if what she had to say would have relevance in my future.
She spoke, “Mr. Chase, please sit down.” I did as I was told, “Are you familiar with Greek Gods?”
My head tilted. It was such an odd question. Why would she ask that? I couldn’t figure out what she was getting to, “Um…yes ma’am, I am. Zeus, Poseidon, Hades, and so on.”
She nodded, “Yes, and do you know of Hecate?”
I blinked, “I’m not too familiar with her…I remember you mentioning her in class one day, but that’s about all.” I stared, waiting for her response, but she seemed solid, like an unmoving stone. ‘I guess it’s not too weird,’ I thought, ‘She is my Mythology teacher.’
Finally Mrs. Gonzalez closed her eyes, “Yes, we weren’t supposed to start Greek mythology for another two or three weeks. Hecate is the Greek Goddess of magic. I want you to research her, and be ready to present your findings in a couple of weeks.”
I sat there for a minute, it felt like forever, “That’s…That’s all?” I couldn’t believe that was all she had to tell me.
Mrs. Gonzales nodded, “That is all, I think you’ll find it interesting in the very least.”
I nodded and stood up slowly, “Okay, thank you…I’m going to go now, see you tomorrow.” I had spoken very slowly, not sure whether or not she was serious. I walked out and found Lucy sitting on the other side of the hallway. I walked past her. She stood up and caught up with me.
“So? How bad was it? I couldn’t hear a thing.” She asked rapidly.
I was quiet for a bit, “I…got…homework…”
She stopped, “What?”
I stood in front of her, “She gave me homework…”
Lucy’s eyes went past me and she seemed disappointed slightly, “Huh…didn’t expect that…”
I looked at her feet, “How do you think I feel?”
She smiled, “Yea, guess this threw you off guard…So what’s the paper about?”
“Some Greek Goddess,” I scratched my head.
“Oh…” her voice trailed off, “Do you want any help?”
I shook my head, “Nah, she probably just doesn’t want to make the lesson plan.” We laughed for a bit and stared walking out of the school. We walked down the sidewalk towards the highway we had to cross. That was when I heard a horn and before she knew what happened I had grabbed Lucy and thrown her out of the way onto the grass. I felt a jolt of pain and was suddenly flying through the air. I hit a big tree on the school campus.
As I fell, I lost consciousness, but why was it taking so long for me to hit the ground? It felt like forever, I blacked out before touching the ground. It could have been the hit. I probably had a concussion.
But it felt as if the air was rushing to keep me up, to cushion my fall…
Foreward:
So I've been writing various Chapter Stories (can't be called books, haven't been published, even though I'd like to try and get them published at one point) for about two years now. I honestly haven't been too satisfied with most of my work, but also realized that it may be because I've never let anyone read any of them. So I've decided to put one here for all of you to read. Warning, I've decided to use strong language if I remember to, or when I feel it's what I would use, which is why I decided to put the PG14+ thing in the title, cause just in case it takes that turn, I don't want it removed. Now this isn't Kingdom Hearts related, cause it isn't a Fan Fic, it's an actual original story. I'm currently working on the sixth chapter, and hope to add one every day until I post it's pre-determined end, which I already know. Some of the chapters don't yet have titles, cause I wanted the titles to all be songs off my ipod, and have yet to go through them to find a chapter title to correspond with each chapter. I would like anyone who reads this to comment and give feed back on what you think I may be doing right or wrong. Just because it's a pre-determined end, doesn't mean I can't change anything. This is the one that I wanted to do right, and I'm hoping all of you will help me with this.
Origins of The Wind
Chapter 1: Days
Everything in life goes in a sequential order, I should have known it would be a bad day when that sequence started with me finding the cat in the washing machine.
Well, it started, as I said, with me opening the washing machine door to find my little sister Maya’s cat, Neko, inside. He was fine, my clothes, not so much. I had to take everything out, even Neko’s little…”present” and then throw everything back in. As a result, I was late for school. I ran into first period and slid, falling onto my ass, into the teacher, and systematically into the principal’s office.
I sat there, watching the desk, as he looked from the complaint, to my file, to me, then repeated it about half a dozen times. Finally he spoke, “Why are you here?”
“Ask Mrs. ‘I don’t know what Look Out means’. I slipped, and accidentally slid into her. Sure, I was running, but I was late, you expect me to calmly walk into the school and sit down?”
“Yes…I do.”
“So? What’s wrong with some exercise in the morning?”
He glared at me, “I expect you to not use sarcasm, young man.”
“Right. Can I go now? This is really counter-productive.” I told him, looking blatantly not interested.
He seemed to smile, a rare sight for our principal, “How so?”
I smiled warmly, “Well, if you would sir, follow this logic. I was sent here cause I was late, therefore I was sent here for missing my classes. But if I’m here…I’m missing my classes, so how does this help at all?”
He nodded. What did that mean? Was I in the clear? Was I in deeper shit? What? Help me out here? Had I just dug my own grave six feet deep being lowered into it by my loved ones? He finally spoke, after what had seemed like forever, “You may go,” I must’ve just sat there for a while, cause this time there was a recognizable smile, “I’m serious…you may go.”
I stood up slowly, “Th…Thank you sir…” I slowly walked out of his office and back to class.
I walked in and my teacher, Mrs. Gonzalez, glared at me with a burning intensity that told me I was close to death. I took my seat and she stood up. Walking slowly to my desk, I could see her plan, slowly, but perfectly. The gears turned in her head like clockwork. I swallowed hard, ready for some abuse, but instead she slapped a piece of paper on my desk, “Get to work, Mr. Chase.” I raised an eyebrow, and her nostrils flared.
“Yes, ma’am.” I said calmly, pulling out a pen from my bag.
Upon finishing the first side, I flipped it over and saw a note, “See me after school.” It was a simple demand, but as I looked up, her eyes met with mine, and I was honestly scared of her for the first time in my life. What was she going to do to me? What kind of punishment was legal in her eyes? I nodded and she lowered her eyes.
So, I passed through the day quietly, small things going wrong. 60 on a physics test, fine. Detention for trying to help another classmate, why not? Lunch lady drops my sandwich, picks it up, and throws it onto my tray, excellence.
There was only a small bit of relief at the end of the day; my favorite teacher, and also the toughest I had; Mrs. Layland decided to give us the day off, which would never happen again, so we enjoyed it.
I put my head down and thought about the note Mrs. Gonzalez had given me. I had told my other teacher I was already in trouble with Mrs. Gonzalez, so he let me go without the detention out of pity. Everyone was afraid of her, which was why I was surprised my principle hadn’t punished me. It was like he already knew I was doomed. Suddenly I felt a hand on my shoulder, “Hey, Noah, are you awake?” asked a kind, sweet voice. I raised my head to see a girl, about average height, with shorter brown hair, and light brown eyes. If you asked her, they were “Hazel” but it’s the same freaking thing.
“Hm?” I asked, pretending to be asleep, “Hey Lucy…Guess I am now.” I faked a stretch and she smiled.
“So, what are you gonna do? I mean, even thinking about Mrs. Gonzalez gives me the creeps. I can’t imagine what it’s like having her mad at you.” Her face was full of worry.
I smiled, the kind of fake smile everyone uses to reassure people that they’re fine, “It’ll be okay, I have to meet her after school though, so if I’m not here tomorrow,” I leaned in close and whispered in her ear, “Call the cops…”
She hit my arm, “That’s not funny Noah, really.” The concern was sincere.
“I know,” I lowered my eyes, “Things just haven’t been going my way today, next thing I know I’ll be getting hit by a car or something…”
“Noah-” but the bell cut her off, she turned to it and then back to me, “Good luck…”
I nodded and walked past, throwing my bag over my shoulder. I walked slowly through the halls; everyone seemed to be heading away from his destination, away from him, as fast as they could. As if they could feel his upcoming death. I finally reached the room, and opened the door slowly after knocking. Mrs. Gonzalez looked up, and gave an evil smile.
Now, I probably should have turned an ran, but something inside me told me to stay. It was almost as if what she had to say would have relevance in my future.
She spoke, “Mr. Chase, please sit down.” I did as I was told, “Are you familiar with Greek Gods?”
My head tilted. It was such an odd question. Why would she ask that? I couldn’t figure out what she was getting to, “Um…yes ma’am, I am. Zeus, Poseidon, Hades, and so on.”
She nodded, “Yes, and do you know of Hecate?”
I blinked, “I’m not too familiar with her…I remember you mentioning her in class one day, but that’s about all.” I stared, waiting for her response, but she seemed solid, like an unmoving stone. ‘I guess it’s not too weird,’ I thought, ‘She is my Mythology teacher.’
Finally Mrs. Gonzalez closed her eyes, “Yes, we weren’t supposed to start Greek mythology for another two or three weeks. Hecate is the Greek Goddess of magic. I want you to research her, and be ready to present your findings in a couple of weeks.”
I sat there for a minute, it felt like forever, “That’s…That’s all?” I couldn’t believe that was all she had to tell me.
Mrs. Gonzales nodded, “That is all, I think you’ll find it interesting in the very least.”
I nodded and stood up slowly, “Okay, thank you…I’m going to go now, see you tomorrow.” I had spoken very slowly, not sure whether or not she was serious. I walked out and found Lucy sitting on the other side of the hallway. I walked past her. She stood up and caught up with me.
“So? How bad was it? I couldn’t hear a thing.” She asked rapidly.
I was quiet for a bit, “I…got…homework…”
She stopped, “What?”
I stood in front of her, “She gave me homework…”
Lucy’s eyes went past me and she seemed disappointed slightly, “Huh…didn’t expect that…”
I looked at her feet, “How do you think I feel?”
She smiled, “Yea, guess this threw you off guard…So what’s the paper about?”
“Some Greek Goddess,” I scratched my head.
“Oh…” her voice trailed off, “Do you want any help?”
I shook my head, “Nah, she probably just doesn’t want to make the lesson plan.” We laughed for a bit and stared walking out of the school. We walked down the sidewalk towards the highway we had to cross. That was when I heard a horn and before she knew what happened I had grabbed Lucy and thrown her out of the way onto the grass. I felt a jolt of pain and was suddenly flying through the air. I hit a big tree on the school campus.
As I fell, I lost consciousness, but why was it taking so long for me to hit the ground? It felt like forever, I blacked out before touching the ground. It could have been the hit. I probably had a concussion.
But it felt as if the air was rushing to keep me up, to cushion my fall…