Okay, this is a non-rhyming poem (is that called free-verse?) that a friend from school wanted me to write for him. I thought I should share it with you guys since its only half-finished and if its too weird, I want to fix it where its at now. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The Black Rose
Roses are red
Violets they say are blue
But this rose is black
And our train is way off track
The last time I saw you
You said this was the last time
And that the line was too fine
Between love and hate
But I didn't accept the bait
So I'm stuck here in a crate
Of crows and evil souls
Taking in 1000 tolls
If it wasn't for one stupid lie
You probably wouldn't of died
And I wouldn't of gotten tied
To one sinister ride
Although I will escape
I shall not leave unscathed
For today is the day
I learn how to play
The Nightmares' games
Attacking the things
The stupid humans called Angels
Was our first mistake
Angels and Demons
Stria and the Nyx
Are no where near the same things
But they do share one common trait;
Both have those that fell from their proper state.
Wow... Turns out I lied. This poem pretty much rhymes throughout. Oh well. Anyway, my friend says this is apparently part of an actual story he was going to write (which explains some of the things like "Stria and Nyx" as well as why "Nightmares" is capitalized).
Okay, this is a non-rhyming poem (is that called free-verse?) that a friend from school wanted me to write for him. I thought I should share it with you guys since its only half-finished and if its too weird, I want to fix it where its at now.
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The Black Rose
Roses are red
Violets they say are blue
But this rose is black
And our train is way off track
The last time I saw you
You said this was the last time
And that the line was too fine
Between love and hate
But I didn't accept the bait
So I'm stuck here in a crate
Of crows and evil souls
Taking in 1000 tolls
If it wasn't for one stupid lie
You probably wouldn't of died
And I wouldn't of gotten tied
To one sinister ride
Although I will escape
I shall not leave unscathed
For today is the day
I learn how to play
The Nightmares' games
Attacking the things
The stupid humans called Angels
Was our first mistake
Angels and Demons
Stria and the Nyx
Are no where near the same things
But they do share one common trait;
Both have those that fell from their proper state.
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Wow... Turns out I lied. This poem pretty much rhymes throughout. Oh well. Anyway, my friend says this is apparently part of an actual story he was going to write (which explains some of the things like "Stria and Nyx" as well as why "Nightmares" is capitalized).