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I been thinking about a story. It about a girl and a boy.

A girl name Isabella or just Bella and a boy name Adam, In their family their moms and dad pick who their kids marry.

Some times if the boy or girl does not want to get marry they don't have to. But if they want them out they have to get marred .

So here;s the plot.

 

The mom and dad of Isabella meet the mom and dad of Adam at a big party,

Isabella is about 8 and Adam is 10. The mom and dad start talking and they think that Isabella is cute right? So the mom of Isabella jump and says,"What about when their older they can get marry!!!" The dad of Adam smiled and said yes.

So as the years go by the family of Isabella and Adam stay close once Adam is 18 and Isabella is 16.

 

They familys start talking about them and if their ready to get marry. The thing is Adam is in love with somebody else,

And Isabella don't want to marry cause she 16 and she want to have fun and have a boyfriend and blah blah blah.

In the story Isabella finds somebody she really likes but he a year older and he not like Isabella family. He don't make somebody get marry cause they think it would good.

 

So do you think the story is original and do you think I should write it?

Should I write the story? 5 members have voted

  1. 1. Should I write the story?

    • Yes
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    • No
      1

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Sounds intriguing. It doesn't sound like the most original kind of story line, but I think that's okay. If you want to write it, then go for it! One thing I would do though is change the girl's name. LOL sorry, that name just has way too much baggage from the Twilight series, you know? That's just my suggestion, because of course, they're your characters, not mine, so you can name them whatever you want. :P

WHY AM I STILL HERE

gaaah oh this time I''m going to bed for real good night

WHY AM I STILL HERE

 

i would ask the same question if i would even know you.

Rule #1: There is no plot that hasn't been done :P So, since this is only the plot, no, it isn't original. In fact, I have a friend that went through the exact same thing as your female character; her parents arranged for her to marry her cousin but she wanted to follow American norms and have boyfriends and such.

 

However, originality comes from throwing all the various characters with all their back stories and having them play through the plot together that will make it original. Writing style will also make the story original because there is no one that can tell a story the same way you can. So I think there is potential for this to be original and I think you should write it. You just need more character development and details, though you may have them but just haven't shared it with us. Good luck with your story ^^

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