NOPE.

Edited November 26, 201311 yr by RoxSoxKH

Faith was stuggling "WHAT ARE YOU DOING?!"

Tenebrae laughed in that same weazy, loud, echoey voice...

"Theres no use resisting, you wont win, remember? I've seen yuor future... theres not much left to it..."

Faith was stuggling "IG YOU HAVE FOUGHT MY FATHER YOU KNOW I DON'T GIVE UP EASILY!" *scourges him with fire*

Tenebrae backed from the light...

"You're becomign more trouble then you're worth Girl..."

Faith back flipped while kicking him with fire, hitting him bad and landed "THIS IS FOR MY FATHER!" *she started to punch and kick him with scoring fire, she got him EVERY time

Tenebrae screamed in pain...

"That's the last...straw..."

Suddenly all the shadows in the room compiled together.. a being was formed...

it was monstrous...

Faith got ready for anything...

The shadows had become a beast of incredible size and strength...

it slammed a fist down on Faith...

it Didnt miss...

Faith screamed of pain on the ground.... she got up and put her hands on Tenebrae's face and used the rest of her fire then backed down.... she was dieing "CHAD! TELL GABBY I LOVE HER!"

Tenebrae gave the shadow equivalent of a smirk... the darkness engulfed Faith...

She was gone...

Far away... Chad fell to his kness...

"You surely can't imagine how interesting this is," said Prometheus, walking out of the shadows. "The last time I saw a fight as good as this was....when was it? OH YES, 10,000 years ago, quite the anticipation wouldn't you say?" He walked up to Faith, examining the damage inflicted upon her. "You did quite the number on her I must say, I'm impressed!" he remarked to Tenebrae, knowing of his presence.

Faith was brthing slightly she threw her last fire at the man who said that "SHUT UP!" she yelled.... she then went back into the life stream with a smile....

He hopped out of the way. "Oh my, a feisty one. You really are far tougher than you appear."

When Faith was in, the first person she saw, was Allen, her father...

 

Gabby awoke she saw everything Faith saw, she was crying now... she was vrying in the middle of the streets, people saw her and walked past.

He stood in the room alone "She could perhaps help me..." he whispered.

 

"Now how to bribe her."

Chad walked up to Gabby, he kneeled down to her... he set his hand on her shoudler..

"I'm sorry Gabby..."

Gabby pushed him away " I WANNA GO TO EARTH! BRING ME THERE NOW!"

Chad set an arm on her... he used all his power and transported them there...

Once there, Gabby ran full speed ahead "I WANNA STAY HERE, GO!"

(10 YEARS LATER...)

(change of scenery so soon? lol)

Gabby, now 14 had A LOT of new abilities, here is what she looked like http://api.ning.com/files/tyUX4h3zF1MRVCYJzUqAczgMhSqfIGNPh2FDZRKrWo8atF0Pu1kx3padPb7YznU8XguYYcp8x*exwaUhdLXsCJs9BgfrKyQI/BlackHairPurpleEyes.jpg

"Time to go back to Superia.." she was also really smart now too.

Chad had lived on Superia since Faith's death...

Gabby teleported there all the guys were glancing at her, checking her out, she went straight to the castle.

 

here is the non error

http://www.advancedanime.com/pictures/normal_honoka_sakurai.jpg

It was time, 10 years of planning, it did not bother him though. Time was nothing for him at his age. He stood atop a tower in the center of the city looking at it and imagining what it could be when his work was done, when his vengeance was fulfilled. He backed into the dark portal behind him, teleporting him into an alley way where he emerged in a less intimidating, more human form.