Sorage55 10 Posted March 18, 2010 A boy standing brave, This boy standing strong, A boy met the grave, His weapon so long, He fell to the dark, For a strange cause, His heart was then marked, By the enemy's paws, He entered through the shadows, Eyes glowing bright, A voice through the shadows, Sent him the light, He held her in his arms, His heart he thought flew, Her eyes came to alarm, "Kairi...thank you." Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Giginha 22 Posted March 18, 2010 Very good,a poem of KH was the only thing that was missing. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sorage55 10 Posted March 18, 2010 I thought I should made one, at least one. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
xion---424 51 Posted March 19, 2010 yeay you made a poem it was great nothing about it i hate ^^ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sorage55 10 Posted March 19, 2010 lol thx. I love to write poems and read poems. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Giginha 22 Posted March 19, 2010 You wouldn't like to read mine they are so stupid,and I'm this way,I know that I can't do something but I try as hard as I can. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
xion---424 51 Posted March 19, 2010 lol thx. I love to write poems and read poems. well i do always appricate you reading and commenting on mine so i figured id do the same it was great! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sorage55 10 Posted March 19, 2010 Heh heh. Thank you. Gizelita, you just need to find some inspiration, true inspiration. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Giginha 22 Posted March 19, 2010 I don't know if I have somewhere to take true inspiration out. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sorage55 10 Posted March 19, 2010 Perhaps you should look at your favorite things in the world. A flower? A food? A Picture? Anything, once you get into poetry you can expand your mind and rhyme on things you never thought able. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Giginha 22 Posted March 19, 2010 For now I'll just keep with my storys,I prefer reading poetry than making one,not my sort of thing,maybe someday I can try. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites