-Bursts of Inner Literature-

 

Ok, since i've received a few complaints already on the account that i'm writing too much poetry its cluttering and de-fouling the writing section of the forums I am told to keep all my poems in ONE single thread. *sigh* Whatever :dodgy: "Till time end bodies but souls anone"

I like your poems,there's nothing wrong with them.But never mind,There are people that prefer other kind of things.

Well I guess its time to fill this thread with some new lines eh? How's about this one:

 

"The Pen is mightier than the sword",

Which has protected the fatal lord,

 

But time had past,

And nothing ever last,

The pen still here,

The sword still there,

 

Yet soon they will both fall,

For as we know,

The spoon pwns all.

 

(Proof: http://kh13.com/mybb/showthread.php?tid=5085)

Very good Sorage,I'm your fan!!!

A random poem:

 

Look at me,

All alone,

No one to see,

Only to moan,

 

What do I see?

A twinkle in the sky,

What could it be?

That tickles my eyes,

 

I look up,

With thoughts of you,

Light to sup,

The view so true.

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I just made up this poem on the spot

I like your poems so much! It's very good too,if someone asked me to choose the one I like the most I wouldn't know which one to choose.

I likies these poems!!

lol thank you both. I would type up another poem, but my time is nearly up for the computer T_T. Tommorow perhaps, if I remember

I'll make you remember.

To Hell-

 

In your mind,

You may find,

You can fall,

We can see it all,

 

Look to the sky,

You can fly,

You can fall,

We can see it all,

 

Drop to the floor,

Die a little more,

You can fall,

We can see it all,

 

Crawl to me,

Look and see,

You can fall,

We can see it all,

 

Damned to Hell,

Fall in the well,

You can fall,

We can see it all,

 

Listen to me,

Your not free,

You can fall,

We can see it all.

interesting poem

GOOD! CAUSE HERE'S ANOTHER!:

 

Untitled Nature-

 

I be,

A tree,

The sea,

Figures three,

A rock,

Could talk,

And walk,

Time-lock,

To the lake,

Drive a stake,

Living flake,

Perfect make,

The light,

Will fright,

The demon's,

Dark might,

Go,

And see,

Look at me,

I be,

A tree.

Sorage, I love the way you make the rhimes, and I still can't do it. Anyway, I can keep with my story. But don't stop your poems.

Your rhyming is very good, better than I ever could be. Your poems are short and simple, and yet amazing. I like that. You sir get 5/5.

Thank ye, I just find my inspiration and my imagination takes from there.

Mmm, thats good. Anyone who isn't afraid to use their imagination and inspiration can be great. And you are a great poet. I look forward to your next one.

As you insist, I have a poem in my archives:

 

To Live-

 

I live,

To see,

Te tree,

The leaves,

 

I live,

To soar in the sky,

The thunder in my eye,

And creation that lies,

 

I live,

To run through the forests,

To brush past and flourish,

In living tourist,

 

I live,

To go through the tree,

The fire in me,

 

I live,

To be free.

To Hell-

 

In your mind,

You may find,

You can fall,

We can see it all,

 

Look to the sky,

You can fly,

You can fall,

We can see it all,

 

Drop to the floor,

Die a little more,

You can fall,

We can see it all,

 

Crawl to me,

Look and see,

You can fall,

We can see it all,

 

Damned to Hell,

Fall in the well,

You can fall,

We can see it all,

 

Listen to me,

Your not free,

You can fall,

We can see it all.

 

My favorite so far. You rock so freakin' hard, Squishie. ^^

As you insist, I have a poem in my archives:

 

To Live-

 

I live,

To see,

Te tree,

The leaves,

 

I live,

To soar in the sky,

The thunder in my eye,

And creation that lies,

 

I live,

To run through the forests,

To brush past and flourish,

In living tourist,

 

I live,

To go through the tree,

The fire in me,

 

I live,

To be free.

 

Ooh! Very nice!

 

 

 

 

 

To Hell-

 

In your mind,

You may find,

You can fall,

We can see it all,

 

Look to the sky,

You can fly,

You can fall,

We can see it all,

 

Drop to the floor,

Die a little more,

You can fall,

We can see it all,

 

Crawl to me,

Look and see,

You can fall,

We can see it all,

 

Damned to Hell,

Fall in the well,

You can fall,

We can see it all,

 

Listen to me,

Your not free,

You can fall,

We can see it all.

 

My favorite so far. You rock so freakin' hard, Squishie. ^^

 

That one was my favorite too! :]

I love all Sorage's poems, I can't choose wich one is my favourtie.

Lol, for the "Hell" poem I was testing out repetition. I have another repetition poem but its a little stupid

Put it here, I like stupid thing as well. (so I can laugh a bit of the one who did it )

Fine -_-' :

 

Night Fright-

 

Look at me,

Then you flee,

Tonight,

I'm the fright,

 

Walk around,

Growl and frown,

Tonight,

I'm the fright,

 

Dark and tall,

God save you all,

Tonight,

I'm the fright,

 

Stay away!

Night to day,

Tonight,

I'm the fright,

 

I'm no worse,

I'm the curse,

Tonight,

I'm the fright,

 

Goodbye,

Time to die,

Tonight,

I'm the fright.

Looks like a song. But it isn't so stupid.

Well, songs ARE basically poems, filled with repitition and beat. Thats all what a song is and what it ever was, a poem.

Some that I know aren't (that's why some of them are stupid)