So like.... it's kind of late and I was writing this, so I don't have time to revise it as of now (I will probably do it tomorrow after school)
Chapter 1- Hannah: Chosen
My skin had been crawling and I was shaking like an idiot in front of the whole school. It was our last day of school so nobody could mess up this performance and live. Our captain Big Red stood firm... her short crimson hair was stunning. Our varsity team gathered together... I was nodding off so I had to rush there awkwardly behind them and she spoke "this was an excellent year, and I hope we end it off in an excellent way. Put your heart and soul into this routine because it has to be the best damn one ever" we all nodded and got into our designated places. I took one deep breath... I could feel my heart beating out of my chest. I knew everyone was just happy today, but I felt tension and found it hard to breathe. I felt stupid for letting fear overcome me, but this was all I could think of. I heard my name somewhere... I knew I wasn't supposed to be distracted, but I found my friends Alex,Serena, and Mimi sitting together. Serena blew a playful kiss and winked at me before she broke out giggling. I chuckled then smiled at her a bit as well.... and I felt so much pressure off. Our song "Pound the Alarm" had started and I just let myself and everyone else guide me through it. Before I knew it everything was over and the crowd was applauding super loud. Big Red took this time to walk over to the microphone in her calm manner, clearing her throat before starting"I'm glad you loved that one, but as we all know I'll be leaving this school after today and I have to pass the torch". The room grew silent and I could hear my stupid, nervous,heartbeat again. Maybe this was a special cheerleader thing, but Big Red had this way of making people excited-- the way she speaks and presents herself is amazing aswell."The captain for next year is" she inhaled deeply, I swore I could hear the crowd inhale with her, before saying "Hannah!". I felt a bit more anxious afterwards, but everyone else was happy. I just remained like an idiot for a while... I was happy, but the pressure of the thought was killing me. I walked down into the locker room a bit after everyone else did, I was hoping I'd be alone, but there was one girl in there. I sat on a bench and sighed when I heard footsteps.... it was Tori. She never socialized it seemed, but she decided to talk to me. She had on kind of a smile "I know you're unsure of yourself and feel lost, but you'll be fine" she gave me a small hug before she walked out. I wanted to ask her something, but she had vanished. I sighed? How could you of all people do this, Hannah?
2- Mimi: Questions I'd been waiting for Hannah with Alex and Serena for a while. Serena had beautiful ginger hair and Alex's was a ;brunette. I saw a small mouse scutter by. Hannah finally came out of the school with her simple blonde ponytail shimmering in the setting sun. Alex and Serena walked up to her... I was a bit of a wallflower... I often just listened to them three of them. But i admit to loving Serena and Hannah's conversations "Wow, I never thought you of all people would become a captain" "Well what's that supposed to mean?". Alex was a bit of a neutral between us "congratulations. I knew you would be excellent, but making captain is a great thing to brag about" I was a bit of an awkward one... all I could say was ?Don't slip up". The three of them were kind of quiet afterwards, but I could see a bit of sadness on Hannah's face... I guess I do in fact exist. We strolled along the sidewalk and I could see everyone from our school... they all seemed happy, but I wonder what goes on in everyone's mind. The four of us were crossing the street leading to the park and as we walked Serena asked "... how's Matt?" I was a bit nervous about the subject since I was usually withdrawn and thought no one else knew about him. I knew I would have to make things up as I went... "What are you talking about? I have a friend named Matt..." "Oh, but would you like to change that?" I knew I was kind of an emotional wreck, but I overreacted again and I just ran away into the wooded area in the back of the park.... not caring about everything around me.
I ran farther and farther deep into the woods... I heard a twig snap, but I wasn't sure if it was me who caused it. There was a bit of a clearing towards the end. I reached it and only saw the sea. I sat down on the bench wondering. How much do I matter? I don't know what I mean to people... even my close friends, but I guess I don't open up enough. I leaned back and gazed at the surface of the ocean "if only I could amount to anything". I heard another echo my words.
3- Serena: Beginnings
We were well into the woods-- that is Hannah, Alex, and I, but the place was creepy and weird. I wondered where Mimi could have been.... I felt a bit scared so I ran towards where the ocean was hoping it could calm me down. I knew it was a bit of a selfish thing on my part, but I felt the need to relax. I heard Hannah behind me "Okay, what's her deal now?" and Alex"Well your guess is as good as mine,but we just have to follow her... I trust he". I got to the ocean and I saw Mimi sitting on a bench "wow I can't believe I found you... let's go home". I sat on the bench and inched closer wondering why she hadn't responded. She had an empty look in her eyes and didn't move. I grabbed her shoulder and I got knocked back "what? What is this? Who are you?" Mimi finally stood up and said "it's just me.... why do you care now?" I choked a bit and could only manage "I've always cared! I've tried my best to reach out... I guess I need to work harder" Hannah and Alex showed up before Mimi responded to me "try? Why would you try? You'll always end up with disappointment and failure" Alex interrupted "No! if you don't try how could you know you're going to fail?". Mimi's voice was distorted now... it hadn't sounded like her "give up hope.... your efforts will never amount to anything... life is a losing game".It was in my nature to lash out... and I yelled "Well why don't you go die if that's how you feel?"Mimi gasped a bit and came back to her senses for a split second.
I was enveloped in a blinding light-- I felt weightless and free. The brightness had been like none other so I closed my eyes. When I opened them I only saw the same thing again... here I was hoping it was a bad dream. I looked over and I saw Alex.... she had a beautiful white tutu and small wings that matched. Hannah had a golden cheering uniform. While I had on a swimsuit and some embroideries on it... without them it would be identical with my swim team outfit. We didn't speak at all... maybe it wasn't just me who felt great about this.... or maybe they were in disbelief and thinking they were dreaming. I felt new confidence and stepped forward towards Mimi. I had involuntarily held up my hand and shouted "Pure Aqua Surge! Look back and reflect... deep within yourself and find what matters the most" What the Hell? That was stupid,but I'm just gonna hope no one else remembers that. I saw the water surround Mimi and then it vanished. Mimi fell to her knees and she seemed normal-- and we looked normal again too.
Sooo yeah maybe tell me what you think of it? Definitely tell me about my writing xDI can tell I'm repetitive and stuff so yeah stuff like that
So like.... it's kind of late and I was writing this, so I don't have time to revise it as of now (I will probably do it tomorrow after school)
Chapter 1- Hannah: Chosen
My skin had been crawling and I was shaking like an idiot in front of the whole school. It was our last day of school so nobody could mess up this performance and live. Our captain Big Red stood firm... her short crimson hair was stunning. Our varsity team gathered together... I was nodding off so I had to rush there awkwardly behind them and she spoke "this was an excellent year, and I hope we end it off in an excellent way. Put your heart and soul into this routine because it has to be the best damn one ever" we all nodded and got into our designated places. I took one deep breath... I could feel my heart beating out of my chest. I knew everyone was just happy today, but I felt tension and found it hard to breathe. I felt stupid for letting fear overcome me, but this was all I could think of. I heard my name somewhere... I knew I wasn't supposed to be distracted, but I found my friends Alex,Serena, and Mimi sitting together. Serena blew a playful kiss and winked at me before she broke out giggling. I chuckled then smiled at her a bit as well.... and I felt so much pressure off. Our song "Pound the Alarm" had started and I just let myself and everyone else guide me through it. Before I knew it everything was over and the crowd was applauding super loud. Big Red took this time to walk over to the microphone in her calm manner, clearing her throat before starting"I'm glad you loved that one, but as we all know I'll be leaving this school after today and I have to pass the torch". The room grew silent and I could hear my stupid, nervous,heartbeat again. Maybe this was a special cheerleader thing, but Big Red had this way of making people excited-- the way she speaks and presents herself is amazing aswell."The captain for next year is" she inhaled deeply, I swore I could hear the crowd inhale with her, before saying "Hannah!". I felt a bit more anxious afterwards, but everyone else was happy. I just remained like an idiot for a while... I was happy, but the pressure of the thought was killing me. I walked down into the locker room a bit after everyone else did, I was hoping I'd be alone, but there was one girl in there. I sat on a bench and sighed when I heard footsteps.... it was Tori. She never socialized it seemed, but she decided to talk to me. She had on kind of a smile "I know you're unsure of yourself and feel lost, but you'll be fine" she gave me a small hug before she walked out. I wanted to ask her something, but she had vanished. I sighed? How could you of all people do this, Hannah?
2- Mimi: Questions I'd been waiting for Hannah with Alex and Serena for a while. Serena had beautiful ginger hair and Alex's was a ;brunette. I saw a small mouse scutter by. Hannah finally came out of the school with her simple blonde ponytail shimmering in the setting sun. Alex and Serena walked up to her... I was a bit of a wallflower... I often just listened to them three of them. But i admit to loving Serena and Hannah's conversations "Wow, I never thought you of all people would become a captain" "Well what's that supposed to mean?". Alex was a bit of a neutral between us "congratulations. I knew you would be excellent, but making captain is a great thing to brag about" I was a bit of an awkward one... all I could say was ?Don't slip up". The three of them were kind of quiet afterwards, but I could see a bit of sadness on Hannah's face... I guess I do in fact exist. We strolled along the sidewalk and I could see everyone from our school... they all seemed happy, but I wonder what goes on in everyone's mind. The four of us were crossing the street leading to the park and as we walked Serena asked "... how's Matt?" I was a bit nervous about the subject since I was usually withdrawn and thought no one else knew about him. I knew I would have to make things up as I went... "What are you talking about? I have a friend named Matt..." "Oh, but would you like to change that?" I knew I was kind of an emotional wreck, but I overreacted again and I just ran away into the wooded area in the back of the park.... not caring about everything around me.
I ran farther and farther deep into the woods... I heard a twig snap, but I wasn't sure if it was me who caused it. There was a bit of a clearing towards the end. I reached it and only saw the sea. I sat down on the bench wondering. How much do I matter? I don't know what I mean to people... even my close friends, but I guess I don't open up enough. I leaned back and gazed at the surface of the ocean "if only I could amount to anything". I heard another echo my words.
3- Serena: Beginnings
We were well into the woods-- that is Hannah, Alex, and I, but the place was creepy and weird. I wondered where Mimi could have been.... I felt a bit scared so I ran towards where the ocean was hoping it could calm me down. I knew it was a bit of a selfish thing on my part, but I felt the need to relax. I heard Hannah behind me "Okay, what's her deal now?" and Alex"Well your guess is as good as mine,but we just have to follow her... I trust he". I got to the ocean and I saw Mimi sitting on a bench "wow I can't believe I found you... let's go home". I sat on the bench and inched closer wondering why she hadn't responded. She had an empty look in her eyes and didn't move. I grabbed her shoulder and I got knocked back "what? What is this? Who are you?" Mimi finally stood up and said "it's just me.... why do you care now?" I choked a bit and could only manage "I've always cared! I've tried my best to reach out... I guess I need to work harder" Hannah and Alex showed up before Mimi responded to me "try? Why would you try? You'll always end up with disappointment and failure" Alex interrupted "No! if you don't try how could you know you're going to fail?". Mimi's voice was distorted now... it hadn't sounded like her "give up hope.... your efforts will never amount to anything... life is a losing game".It was in my nature to lash out... and I yelled "Well why don't you go die if that's how you feel?"Mimi gasped a bit and came back to her senses for a split second.
I was enveloped in a blinding light-- I felt weightless and free. The brightness had been like none other so I closed my eyes. When I opened them I only saw the same thing again... here I was hoping it was a bad dream. I looked over and I saw Alex.... she had a beautiful white tutu and small wings that matched. Hannah had a golden cheering uniform. While I had on a swimsuit and some embroideries on it... without them it would be identical with my swim team outfit. We didn't speak at all... maybe it wasn't just me who felt great about this.... or maybe they were in disbelief and thinking they were dreaming. I felt new confidence and stepped forward towards Mimi. I had involuntarily held up my hand and shouted "Pure Aqua Surge! Look back and reflect... deep within yourself and find what matters the most" What the Hell? That was stupid,but I'm just gonna hope no one else remembers that. I saw the water surround Mimi and then it vanished. Mimi fell to her knees and she seemed normal-- and we looked normal again too.
Sooo yeah maybe tell me what you think of it? Definitely tell me about my writing xDI can tell I'm repetitive and stuff so yeah stuff like that
Edited by FireRubies1