Wrote a new piece-love it if you'd listen to it! (Warning: The beginning is a tad high, so if higher ranges hurt your ear, don't listen to this!)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1rD0VzXaXtU&feature=youtube_gdata
Feedback and helpful criticism is welcome. ^^

Edited May 24, 201312 yr by Noby Raghavan

Wow, it sounds amazing. Great job

What beautiful music, this is so inspirational

Edited May 24, 201312 yr by rainbow_pocky

Thanks! 0///0

This is so relaxing and beautiful

very nice work!

So peaceful This is really good, very inspirational.

 

All I might add is that you might want to have a stronger bass. Usually the bass is a vital part of the song. This one works fine without much of it, but it might add a little something extra in future composures.

So peaceful This is really good, very inspirational.

 

All I might add is that you might want to have a stronger bass. Usually the bass is a vital part of the song. This one works fine without much of it, but it might add a little something extra in future composures.

 

I had a loud bass at the chorus, however it became muddled and overwhelming with its addition so I quieted it. Thank you though! ^^

Must... resist... critiquing... music...

Screw it. Sorry if I hurt your feelings.

 

"The Library"

 

-Thank you for the warning about the high-pitched intro. You saved me an ear-drum as well as my headphones.

-This actually sounds... highly appropriate for a library themed setting. I'd listen to this the next time I'm in a library.

 

So peaceful This is really good, very inspirational.

 

All I might add is that you might want to have a stronger bass. Usually the bass is a vital part of the song. This one works fine without much of it, but it might add a little something extra in future composures.

Wrong. This isn't dubstep. I'd go for more for the instrumentals. 1:15 onwards to is SO BEAUTIFUL. Bass could actually be softened here. I'd emphasize the Xylophone here actually, similar to Xion's Theme in which most of the instruments would go soft as the xylophone sounds off here. But that's my personal opinion.

-The Piano sequence near the end, sorta fast and Y NO LONGER?!?!? That part was so BEAUTIFUL!!!! If it slowed down and extended, I'm pretty sure you'd hit the sweet spot for a library themed song.

 

Question: HOW ARE YOU DOING THIS?!?!?!

 

Note: You've been held against FF8's "Balamb Garden." Personally, I'd prefer THIS COMPOSITION. Overall, pretty stunning!!! Keep up the good work!

Edited May 24, 201312 yr by Javelin434

Must... resist... critiquing... music...

Screw it. Sorry if I hurt your feelings.

 

"The Library"

 

-Thank you for the warning about the high-pitched intro. You saved me an ear-drum as well as my headphones.

-This actually sounds... highly appropriate for a library themed setting. I'd listen to this the next time I'm in a library.

 

Wrong. This isn't dubstep. I'd go for more for the instrumentals. 1:15 onwards to is SO BEAUTIFUL. Bass could actually be softened here. I'd emphasize the Xylophone here actually, similar to Xion's Theme in which most of the instruments would go soft as the xylophone sounds off here. But that's my personal opinion.

-Piano at the end, sorta fast. If it slowed down, I'm pretty sure you'd hit the sweet spot for a library themed song.

 

Question: HOW ARE YOU DOING THIS?!?!?!

 

Note: You've been held against FF8's "Balamb Garden." Personally, I'd prefer THIS COMPOSITION. Overall, pretty stunning!!! Keep up the good work!

 

*sips cup of tea* Thank you for the tip. *sips tea even more*

 

They're probably using something like Finale Notepad, or software of the like.

*sips cup of tea* Thank you for the tip. *sips tea even more*

 

They're probably using something like Finale Notepad, or software of the like.

Thanks for the info! Now if you'll excuse me, OFF TO FIND THE PROGRAM!!!

Must... resist... critiquing... music...

Screw it. Sorry if I hurt your feelings.

 

"The Library"

 

-Thank you for the warning about the high-pitched intro. You saved me an ear-drum as well as my headphones.

-This actually sounds... highly appropriate for a library themed setting. I'd listen to this the next time I'm in a library.

 

Wrong. This isn't dubstep. I'd go for more for the instrumentals. 1:15 onwards to is SO BEAUTIFUL. Bass could actually be softened here. I'd emphasize the Xylophone here actually, similar to Xion's Theme in which most of the instruments would go soft as the xylophone sounds off here. But that's my personal opinion.

-The Piano sequence near the end, sorta fast and Y NO LONGER?!?!? That part was so BEAUTIFUL!!!! If it slowed down and extended, I'm pretty sure you'd hit the sweet spot for a library themed song.

 

Question: HOW ARE YOU DOING THIS?!?!?!

 

Note: You've been held against FF8's "Balamb Garden." Personally, I'd prefer THIS COMPOSITION. Overall, pretty stunning!!! Keep up the good work!

Haha, thanks for the critique!=) Um, I'm actually using a free program called MuseScore to compose these, and then I download soundfonts to add the sounds, and then I mess around with it in Audacity buut Finale Notepad actually would simplify the process because you wouldn't have to download sound samples like I do.-it's just that I'm too lazy to switch over-