So this just a little something I came up with when I was listening to 'At Dusk, I Will Think of You...' Great music and I was inspired by two of the YouTube comments (which were also short poems). No set rhyming or sequence/rhythm; doesn't follow those actual official poems that have those set rules and stuff. Just something from the top of my head.

 

I remember…..the past

 

The Days gone by

 

 

Being together

 

Under the ever-changing sky

 

 

The night was full of stars

 

And the day was clear

 

Full of darkness

 

And full of light

 

 

But our favorite time

 

Was full of colors and quiet sounds

 

As the sky burned

 

And our clock tower chimed

 

 

Sunlight shone silver

 

Shadows turned grey

 

Neither a shining night

 

Nor a shrouded day

 

 

There was no tint

 

There was no shade

 

As light and darkness

 

 

Faded away

 

WOW Your poem is AMAZING I really like it! VERY WELL DONE SOLARCLAW!      

Ah! ^//////^ Thank you

Very good. Especially for something just off the top of your head.

Pretty Good

So touching! I got chills

The beginning reminded me of Chrono Cross for some reason ._. Great poem though! Fits Days perfectly!

that was really good i can't write poems for some reason... but i can write songs, lots and lots of songs haha i guess poetry just doesn't click for me but you're really good  keep up the good work

Great job! You have talent! I would love to read more stuff from you.

 

Keep it up!