Hiya all, Eternal Reckoning here, i came up with a concept today and i had to jot it down. I've come up with the back ground for a story and i want to ask you what you think of it, if people like the idea i present in this introduction i will begin posting chapters i will also accept any criticisms and ideas you might have in regards to my idea so far!
the ideas expressed in this story are works of fiction and are not meant to offend, please be open minded and enjoy
INTRODUCTION
The air is cold and biting accompanied by a dead, creepy atmosphere, the stench of blood creeping through the room as we sit and watch in utter and forced silence, a truely horrific site was before us but all we could do was sit and wait for our impending bliss and satisfaction. A cruel fate we inherited from blood lines dating who knows how far back and even to this day it remains just as real. I fear their is no lapse from such a fate and think none would consider risking the consequences of leaving.
Human instinct forces us to strive towards and cling to life no matter what the consequence, our bodies have adjusted and evolved and now the pleasure our act insues is to addictive to leave behind. For generations now children in our line have been bred on it and raised on it, to the point it feels natural. Our fellow humans chastise and hate us for what we do, but what place do they have to chastise us when they themselves engrave the same suffering in human history?
The world is biased and even as we grow and progress as fellow earthlings the race who holds power and numbers dictates the law, what is right and what is wrong, on a further note what is deemed good and evil. Through the eyes of our fellow humans we are monsters and outcasts, feared and hated for our choice of prey and that which sustains us, but in the end what is wrong and what is truely right in this world...
We are a race of human parasites, our ancestors lived as outcasts as the world around us progressed often tree dwelling and living in the wilderness like hunter gatherers with no where to go. After the forests were wiped out we had to adapt to survive. There was no way after so long living with nature that we could survive or adapt to living in the modern world, constructed over time by our corrupt breathren. So like any race, the only way we could survive was by adapting the traits we now possess. The world doesn't make room for the weak and "uncivilised" so we had to become stronger to survive amongst them, our bodies did this through common and gradual evolution. We thrive off of the agony expressed by fellow humans, it releases a chemical in our brains that causes us pleasure and it is therefore the incentive for our ravages, without the release of such chemical our brains go into meltdown and we fall ill and eventualy die, We dont require food like regular people and the gases released from fossil fuels help produce the chemical in our brains that feeds us, so in a way we live off of the mistakes of the people and return it positively like a plant that takes in co2 to give out oxygen.
Over the years our numbers have grown significantly and societal collapse is the price to see them rise. The humans live in constant fear and hate, in spite of our very existence when they themselves were in fact the initiators of the evolution thats causing it. The appaling ignorance of humans and their inability to take respinsibility for their actions is the direct cause of any misfortune they are now experiencing and it is understandable despite its biased appearance and that they might deem our actions evil and foul because like anything what is truly good and what is truely evil falls on the eyes of each individual who is observing the passing of time. so by bringing such things to surface at least one thiing is proved, mortality is the very definition of ignorance.
Hiya all, Eternal Reckoning here, i came up with a concept today and i had to jot it down. I've come up with the back ground for a story and i want to ask you what you think of it, if people like the idea i present in this introduction i will begin posting chapters
i will also accept any criticisms and ideas you might have in regards to my idea so far!
the ideas expressed in this story are works of fiction and are not meant to offend, please be open minded and enjoy
INTRODUCTION
The air is cold and biting accompanied by a dead, creepy atmosphere, the stench of blood creeping through the room as we sit and watch in utter and forced silence, a truely horrific site was before us but all we could do was sit and wait for our impending bliss and satisfaction. A cruel fate we inherited from blood lines dating who knows how far back and even to this day it remains just as real. I fear their is no lapse from such a fate and think none would consider risking the consequences of leaving.
Human instinct forces us to strive towards and cling to life no matter what the consequence, our bodies have adjusted and evolved and now the pleasure our act insues is to addictive to leave behind. For generations now children in our line have been bred on it and raised on it, to the point it feels natural. Our fellow humans chastise and hate us for what we do, but what place do they have to chastise us when they themselves engrave the same suffering in human history?
The world is biased and even as we grow and progress as fellow earthlings the race who holds power and numbers dictates the law, what is right and what is wrong, on a further note what is deemed good and evil. Through the eyes of our fellow humans we are monsters and outcasts, feared and hated for our choice of prey and that which sustains us, but in the end what is wrong and what is truely right in this world...
We are a race of human parasites, our ancestors lived as outcasts as the world around us progressed often tree dwelling and living in the wilderness like hunter gatherers with no where to go. After the forests were wiped out we had to adapt to survive. There was no way after so long living with nature that we could survive or adapt to living in the modern world, constructed over time by our corrupt breathren. So like any race, the only way we could survive was by adapting the traits we now possess. The world doesn't make room for the weak and "uncivilised" so we had to become stronger to survive amongst them, our bodies did this through common and gradual evolution. We thrive off of the agony expressed by fellow humans, it releases a chemical in our brains that causes us pleasure and it is therefore the incentive for our ravages, without the release of such chemical our brains go into meltdown and we fall ill and eventualy die, We dont require food like regular people and the gases released from fossil fuels help produce the chemical in our brains that feeds us, so in a way we live off of the mistakes of the people and return it positively like a plant that takes in co2 to give out oxygen.
Over the years our numbers have grown significantly and societal collapse is the price to see them rise. The humans live in constant fear and hate, in spite of our very existence when they themselves were in fact the initiators of the evolution thats causing it. The appaling ignorance of humans and their inability to take respinsibility for their actions is the direct cause of any misfortune they are now experiencing and it is understandable despite its biased appearance and that they might deem our actions evil and foul because like anything what is truly good and what is truely evil falls on the eyes of each individual who is observing the passing of time. so by bringing such things to surface at least one thiing is proved, mortality is the very definition of ignorance.
so what do you guys think?