Dragonforce...huh, a story not about KH

 

Anyways, here's the story of Dragonforce:

 

Dragonforce is a story about the Dragonforce. It is a clear, green crystal ball that is the lifeforce for all dragons. No dragon can live without it; in other words, all dragons will never cease to exist without it. The exisitance of them would be wiped clean from history. The memories of them in people's mind would fade away. The only way the Dragonforce can be destoryed is if it runs out of lifeforce or if it fell from a huge distance. But luckly the Dragonforce managed to survive through the course of Earth's revolving time.

 

However, it is the modern world now. Dragons have been extinct for years. Only one ancient one exist. But he is millions of years old and hidden and will eventually die off in a matter of months. Without no dragons to be born, the Dragonforce will lose all energy, making it just another worthless item for humans to keep.

 

But 5 heroes who contain the powers of the dragon spirits will be destined to meet together, and find the Dragonforce and the ancient dragon before it is too late. They all have a symbol ingraved in their hand, to identifies if that said person has a dragon spirit.

 

Here is the 5 types of dragons: The Firedrake, using the power of fire and the ability to see the future when it dreams, the Sea Serpent, using the power of water and the ability to hypnotise other creatures, the Terra Guardian, using the power of earth and the ability to punch/kick/slice/etc through any type of solid matter, the King of Atlas, using the power of air and the ability to change the weight and dimension of its body, and finally, the Thunderfang, using the power of electricity and the ability to absorb any type of energy.

 

These dragons have been sealed into our 5 main characters, Terry, Linda, AJ, Sai, and Ester. When they come to realize their power, they shall sent out on a journey to find the others and save the Dragonforce.

 

But a threat lies in their way...or two.

 

The first problem is where to find the Dragonforce and the ancient dragon. Only left with clues that are actually riddles to confuse them, they must figure out what their meanings are, and figure out Dragonforce's location first. But the real problem is that it is in human's hands, when a explorer in 1819 discovered it and brought it back to his country. Where could the Dragonforce be? And will the humans be able to give it up?

 

The problem that will stand in the dragon heroes ways are hunters. Hunters orginally hunted down dragons for a hatred, money, or even just for fun. With no dragons around, the Hunters disbanded...until the news of people containing dragon spirits, they decide to reband and will make sure nothing stands in their way. They will try to get their hands on them...or at least their blades. Darkness seems to be strong as they linger in the hearts of the hunters....

 

Since I have given you all that I can tell you, I shall begin the story of dragons

 

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Prologue - Dreaming Burns My House Down

 

Meh, it's New Year's Eve.

 

It's December 31st, 2009. And in one hour, it will be Janurary 1st, 2010. On my television, people are screaming, waiting for that ball to just freakin' drop. Hooray, I guess.

 

I don't mean to sound like a sad person, but it's been boring over the past years. Nothing's interesting. Nothing important happen. Just the same.

 

So rather than watch an inanimate object slowly drop to the ground, I decide to sleep. And that, is what I shall do.

 

But I got to tell you, dreams are weird. Not regular weird, I mean weird where it makes no sense. And this dream changed my life forever...

 

In my dreams, I running with a bunch of people (I counted four of them). I don't know what we were running from, but when I turned around, there was black shadows after us. One person called out, "Yo dog, move faster! It's catching up!", while another said, "Come on, the darkness will swallow you if you don't hurry!". Then I realize what they meant. It was darkness...and it was going really fast! Too bad it was too late. As I ran and ran, the darkness just got faster, and before I knew it, the darkness already got me. The darkness turned into a dark creature with bright red eyes, and it growled at me. Somebody was shooting it, but it ignored the bullets and went to go take a bite out of me. However, fire blew out of my mouth and burned that sucker. But everything turned black...

 

Suddenly, it turns white, and then I'm in giant white room. A guy sat a table, drinking tea. I look around, as going from running away with a bunch of people to a guy drinking tea in a white room. Oh it's definitly what you expect. Anyways, as I looked around, he said out loud, "I suggest you wake up." I look at him strange. How the hell did he know I was dreaming? Psychic much? I said to him, "How did you know I was dreaming....and why do I smell breakfast?" The man sighed and said, "Think harder. What did I say?" I shug at him and said, "To wake up?" The man nodded his head and finally said, "Then that's what you should do. Wake up!" The words echo through my head and out of my ear as I wake up.

 

To my surpise, it was a good idea to wake up. My room is on fire. Hooray...god damn it, I hate life sometimes.

 

I sprung out of bed immediantly, and ran out of my room as fast as lightspeed. However, when I turn to the hallway, it was flared with lots of bright orange flames. Looks like my whole house is on fire. Big hooray. I ran back and went to go take a left. Sadly, there was fire. To the right, there was fire. And behind me was a lava of fire coming straight at me. The only thing I had to get out of here was a window. Probably not the best plan, but the only option I have left. As the fire almost got to me, I crashed through the glass window, and hit the ground. I lay there in pain, as jumping out of a window on the top floor of your house isn't going to be pretty. Not only that, I got glass sticking out of my body from that damn window, and a little fire on my back. Oh and the sound of a fire truck makes it worst.

 

As I lay on the ground with injured legs, glass in me, and fire on me, I check my wristwatch. It's 12:00AM. What do you know, it's 2010 now. Happy New Year for this strange start of the year.

 

I am Terry Evens, 16 years old, no job and a drop out from high school, and apparently, I just burned my house down. Cheers.

 

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Yes Terry is the main main character, and he will be one of the heroes. Some of you, which hopefully it's all of you, will figure out his dragon spirit already.

 

Anyways, I hope you enjoyed it. I found out that I got sick of writing KH stories, not stories in general. I mean, I have 4 KH stories up there, and yet no other non-KH stories (except Dante's Journal, but that's different). So technically, I'm writing stories again

When I first saw the title of the story I was like "SOMEONE ELSE LIKES THE BAND DRAGONFORCE? OMG ONE OF MY FAVS!" And then I see an epic story intro instead....good anyways.

pretty good job on the prolauge and btw dude, r u back to writing KHLS again?

When I first saw the title of the story I was like "SOMEONE ELSE LIKES THE BAND DRAGONFORCE? OMG ONE OF MY FAVS!" And then I see an epic story intro instead....good anyways.

 

You mean these guys doing this song?

 

0jgrCKhxE1s

(^ Which by the way is an epic song. Love the guitar solo )

 

pretty good job on the prolauge and btw dude, r u back to writing KHLS again?

 

Thanks. But nope, I'm not going back to writing KH: TLS...yet. I need more time off for KH stories.

 

When I first saw the title of the story I was like "SOMEONE ELSE LIKES THE BAND DRAGONFORCE? OMG ONE OF MY FAVS!" And then I see an epic story intro instead....good anyways.

 

You mean these guys doing this song?

 

0jgrCKhxE1s

(^ Which by the way is an epic song. Love the guitar solo )

 

YES! Of course thats their signature song, EVERYONE knows Through Fire and Flames.

Chapter 1: Hospitals Suck

 

I should say, neddles suck. I don't think pain is helpful AT ALL!

 

After the whole house on fire incident, they found me lying on the ground, next to my smokey house, so they rushed me to the hospital as quickly as possible. But when I got there, they just took out the glass, checked my legs, and made sure I was a living body once again.

 

But neddles...ouch. Once they were finishing me up, they decided to give me some medicine to help me recover. But as I stayed fainted through out the night, I was twitching in pain. I can easily feel it when I sleep, which sucks. This won't hurt a bit my ass.

 

Waking up was probably the worst thing to do. Why? Well when you have sisters that are much older, they tend to care TOO much for you. Just like what happened.

 

As my eyelids began to open, I can hear a voice, "Maybe he should...wait, he's waking up finally." But when my eyes opened fully, I am tackled my 22 year old idiot sister. She was hugging me, with her boobs creating friction on my face. She also sobbing, saying, "YOU'RE ALIVE!", "I thought you were a goner", and "You're the only family member I have". I pushed her away with my weak strength and told her, "I'm fine...geez."

 

You see, I only have my sister and myself. No one else...yes that means no parents. Our parents left us when I was actually borned. After a week of my existance, bam, they are gone. I don't mind it. They can go to hell for all I care. I remember when I was 4 and my sister was 12. When she heard the news of their deaths, she came to me and told me. But with my back turned to her, I said one word, "Good".

 

But the only thing good from them was inheirting the money. Let me just say, holy hell it was a lot. Couldn't tell you how much, but it was definitly able to get us 10 houses. Maybe more. I couldn't believe we were rich. Still shocks me to this very day.

 

I tried to get up, but my sister push me down to the bed with such force, and said, "Nope. You're staying right there. You need all the rest you can get." I think she may be right. I'd rather sleep than stare at the celling all day. But I wasn't tired all. "Yeah, how am I going to get rest when I'm not even tired?" I asked. The doctor was kind enough to speak up for once. "I can give you some medicine to help you sleep," he said. Oh joy, more medicine. You think I had enough with medicine, especially needles. Blasted needles.

 

I had no choice but take the needles. They hooked me right up, and some sort of substance went into my wrist. Within minutes, I slept faster than you can say goodnight. The doctor and my sister decided to leave me be, as I rested in peace...but not in a dying sense, of course.

 

Again, dreams are weird. Just had one once again. But this time, much weirder. It was like I was seeing the future. As I said above, when I said dying sense, I think this applies to this dream. Ok, so I was awake, still in the hosptial and the same doctor who was here eariler came in, and said I needed more medicine for "special reasons". After getting the neddle, he hooked me up, and he was using a new substance. I wasn't sure what it was, but I felt uneasy. When the neddle went into my wrist, the liquid went through the tiny tube and straight in my wrist. At first I was fine. But after minutes, I felt my heart stop and my breathing also to stop. My head tilted and my eyes closed.

 

With that, I woke up instantly, sweating like a pig. So I catch a vision of my death. Strange, guess doctors fix you up...in a reaping way. But after that dream, I aint trusting that guy.

 

And it was right on time. That same doctor walked in the room, and said, "Hey, glad to see that you're awake. Look, I got to give you medicine, for 'special reasons'." Wait a minute, that was from my dream. Maybe I'm paranoid, but just to make sure, I decide to hide right by the door, while he go gets that neddle. Not the best hiding place but this room is small and there is no place to hide. I heard him come in, saying, "What the? MARGRET! Where did our patient go?". He placed something on the table and walked out of the room. I walked over to the table and grabbed the object. It was a needle from the dream, but there was something that said on it. It said "Lethal Injection".

 

Ah crap. So lethal injection kills me in my dream. Nice to know that. Funny how they were supposed to do it when I was sleeping. Strange...but either way, these guys are trying to kill me! Am I a criminal or does hosptials normally do this? I'm confused.

 

Well screw this, there's no way I'm staying here. Escaping is going to be my big plan right now. First thing...I need a change of clothes...going out of here with nothing but a patient clothes does not sound fun. Technically, I'll be going butt naked. Sorry, but there's way I'm doing that.

 

As I changed I hear footsteps, and they are close. After I put on the final touches by putting on my shoes, I see the window. Now I now what you're thinking, already did that, fell out, hurt my legs, etc. But this is the only way, and if I fall, well consider this story done. Good thing there was a ledge when I climbed out. I basically walked on the ledge and around the building, until I got to the front of the hospital. That's what a bullet wizzed right past me, and into the glass which shattered upon impact. Great, there's a sniper here. I guess they really are trying to kill me. What the hell did I do to deserve this bullcrap? I was getting nervous doing this. When I moved, more bullets kept coming at me. This is impossible to get down without a headshot.

 

You know what, screw it, I'm jumping off. I can't do this. Hopefully I land on a car. I know my legs are pretty weak from my last crazy fall, but it's either injured legs or a nice blow to the brain. And so, I took the leap of faith...

 

And what do you know, I land on a moving truck. That's much better than landing on a car, as my legs didn't hurt that much. Actually more like barely. And thank god it was moving. A moving target in a sniper scope is hard to get someone.

 

I hope this truck can get me somewhere...somewhere away from these looenys. I'll find out why I'm being targeted, and I will find out the cause of the madness. Then, I can go back to live my boring normal life once again.

 

I should of burned that hospital down while I was there.

Hahahahahahaaha needles suck, but ur chapter 1 rulz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it was way better than I expected it to be keep on writing

It's very good, but mind if i point out some stuff?

For example, here;

So rather than watch an inanimated object slowly drop to the ground, I decide to sleep.

"Inanimated" is improper. It should simply remain "inanimate".

 

Also, here;

As I changed, I hear footsteps, and they are close.

Watch your tenses because when you get them jumbled up they make no sense. Also, I don't think you need that many commas. owo

So, maybe something like

As I change I hear footsteps, and they are close.

In the end though, you might wanna change the 'are' to something else, like to 'sound'.

I noticed as well that you said neddles quite a few times and I'm assuming you meant needles in those places?

 

All in all, it's very good and i like how the story is going, so please updatee X333 <3

Chapter 2 - A Friend Like Me

 

Let's see here on my list of things done:

 

1) Have my house burned done. Check.

2) Go to the hospital. Check.

3) Escape the Hospital. Check.

4) Find a place to live a new life? Not checked.

 

Well looks like I'm not doing so hot. Can't go back to my sister. She'll be freaking! And if she does, something tells me I will land in a new hospital, otherwise known as a mental institution.

 

Speaking of sister, as I walked around the streets of nowhere, I get a call from my sister. I pull out my iPhone from my pocket, and stare at the picture of my sister. Yeah, I don't think I will be answering that. I turned my phone off and sat at the nearest bench to rest.

 

I can't believe what's happening so far. I mean, my house burning down was probably my fault (maybe I left the stove on or something), but trying to get killed by hospital freaks and a sniper. Life is so perfect...not.

hey r u gonna post more 4 this story bcuz the last time u posted 4 this story was like a month ago. I hope u can continue this bcuz its really good