What happens when you come to the decision of whether to disband light or darkness? Will you choose disband light and become evil, or will you disband dark and corrupt the world with light? That is what Tristan will have to face in the end...

 

Tristan is a 15 year old ophan, who roams the streets, trying to survive with enough food and water. No shelter has taken him and he continues to rot as he lives in the damned city.

 

One day...he randomly finds a pair of rings, one white and one black. With curiosity, he puts both of them on, and suddenly, two mysterious people appear from the rings, Jillian from the white ring and Vincent from the black ring. Tristan is amazed by it, but the two people begin to fight.

 

100 years ago, these two were children of two rulers of these natural forces, light and darkness. Jillian belonged to light, while Vincent belong to darkness. One day, the two hated one another and then they fought so great, that an all poweful god like person appeared and punished the two, sealing them into rings...

 

As Tristan breaks up the fight, Jillian and Vincent then realize that they are stuck in rings and attached to a boy. Tristan tries to take it off, but it is not possible. And then the two speak of a war....a war between light and darkness, when the rulers of light and darkness find out what happen to their children. It would be the War of Opposite Powers....and it will not only destroy Tristan, but destroy the entire world.

 

Now Jillian and Vincent will have to team up with Tristan and each other, and go out on an epic journey. Across the lands and waters of Earth lies challenges for the three, and Jillian and Vincent will discover why they have been placed in the rings...and who that person that did it really is.

 

During the journey, Tristan will learn so much about life. He will learn emotions and love...along with hate and revenge. He will be changed, no longer just a poor ophan. He will become a real person...a real warrior and a hero.

 

And at the end of his adventure, he will meet a person that will give him the ultimate decision between light and darkness. It will stop the war....but once he chooses...his fate is sealed, and he will no longer be just one normal person. Good and Evil will end it.

Ooh. Good start! Somewhat similar theme to my story, but that doesn't matter. It is a good start and I can't wait for more.

An epic tale of light and darkness, the forces rise upon a lonely boy, who's destiny was greater than all. Epic story man, can't wait to read more.

that was an awesome and epic start!!!!!!!!!! plz keep writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Prologue - The Two Rings

 

"Get out of my way, kid!" said a stranger. He pushed Tristan away. Tristan got back up and said, "I need money, food, water, shelter. C'mon, you can't let me die here in the streets!". But the man ignored him and continued on his way. He went to other people, but they did not either respond or responded negative.

 

They all didn't care for one boy. But that boy would change the fate of this world...

 

He hasn't had water for a day or two. Tommorow, if he doesn't get water...he won't survive.

 

As Tristan walked barefooted, he kept a dull, but calm face. He felt nothing. No emotion, other than sadness. Tristan isn't very normal, compared to people, who walk down streets with money in their wallets.

 

He walked down one street, and went into a narrow alley. When he looked, it was a dead end. He sighed and turn around. But when he turned, three people blocked the way. One carried a wooden baseball bat, another with a crowbar, and the last one brass knuckles. The boy with the brass knuckles said, "I hear you're the poor kid in this city, looking for some food and water. We can't let you do that. We need that food and water, since we're poor just like you." Tristan's eyes widen and he backed up a little. "No, no no no! I just want some water. I don't want any trouble," said Tristan. Another boy from the pack said, "Oh, you don't want any trouble, eh? Well too bad, you're in trouble." They begin walking towards Tristan.

 

Tristan's end is near. Death is behind him. There's nothing he can do. He was too weak for fighting, nor does he like fighting. As the boys apporach him, aiming their weapons at him, Tristan says his final words in his head. The boy with the crowbar aimed his weapon in the air, and lowered it fast, going for the strike. Tristan covers his himself, and closes his eyes...

 

Suddenly, a meteor appears in the sky. It moved faster than the speed of light. One of the boys noticed it and warned the others. The three ran away and Tristan opened his eyes. He wasn't dead. He saw that the three ran away, but he didn't understand. He stood up straight and took a few steps, but the meteor that was falling from the sky crashed right in front of him. Tristan fell back and hit his head on the wall. Blood dripped down his face as his vision became blurry. But he shook his head and stood up. He took baby steps this time and walked over to the smokey ground. When the smoke cleared. Tristan bent down and saw two objects.

 

He proclaimed, "Rings!?!"

wow that was a cool start, cant wait to see wat happens the next!