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My Immortal [Read at your own risk]

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EDIT: What the hell happened to Chapters 27-44?? D8 *will put them back up soon*

 

I didn't write this fanfic...I repeat I did not write this. I'm not that bad of an author.

Yup...the infamous, "My Immortal" fanfic. So laughably bad, it's been banned from Fanfiction.net. (Not even kidding.) It's been uploaded multiple times to multiple sites, and I decided to share it here. Read at your own risk.

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Tagged because each chapter is freaking long.

Chapter 1.

 

 

AN: Special fangz (get it, coz Im goffik) 2 my gf (ew not in that way) raven, bloodytearz666 4 helpin me wif da story and spelling. U rok! Justin ur da luv of my deprzzing life u rok 2! MCR ROX!

 

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Hi my name is Ebony Dark

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Ohmygod.

 

This is the most hilarious thing ever. <33333

 

I heard about it first on the TGWTG* -site, and couldn't stop laughing. 8D

 

[ *That Guy With The Glasses ]

o.e..... terrible..... God this terrible.... NOBODY COMMENT ON THIS THREAD. LET IT DIE.

What... did I just read?

 

I think I died.

 

This is worse than card games on motorcycles

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Ohmygod.

 

This is the most hilarious thing ever. <33333

 

I heard about it first on the TGWTG* -site, and couldn't stop laughing. 8D

[*That Guy With The Glasses ]

 

I know right? As soon as I finished read the fourth chapter, I randomly burst out laughing. It just boggles my mind how one person can be this terrible at writing.

(And I love TGWTG<3<3<3<3)

 

o.e..... terrible..... God this terrible.... NOBODY COMMENT ON THIS THREAD. LET IT DIE.

The only thing that deserves to die is the person who wrote this fanfic. *twitch*

 

 

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What... did I just read?

 

I think I died.

 

This is worse than card games on motorcycles

 

You just read a fanfic so bad, it made Chuck Norris cry. Congratulations.

 

It's okay, I did too. ;_; Whoever wrote this fic should be charged with third degree murder. D8

 

You got that right.

...Dude make up your mind, is hilarious or do you despise it?......

It was good but i think the chapters are a bit to short i means it's like a childrens chapter book but i loved it!

it was OK but there were a bunch of short chapters

holyshit the author must have been hyped up on RedBull and Cocaine to have written something so....................pathetic......

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...Dude make up your mind, is hilarious or do you despise it?......

 

I believe you mean "Dudette". -_-;;

And, to answer your question, it's so stupid and awesome, that I find it hilarious. Ever heard of the term "laughably bad"?

 

It was good but i think the chapters are a bit to short i means it's like a childrens chapter book but i loved it!

 

You thought it was...good? That's actually slightly concerning. (Jk xDOr am I?)

To me it doesn't read like a childrens' book...it reads like it was written BY a child. xD

 

holyshit the author must have been hyped up on RedBull and Cocaine to have written something so....................pathetic......

 

Sadly, that actually seems plausible. ._.

Oh god not this again. I remember when this came out. Major lulz.

 

Its funnier when you read it aloud and act like your talking like the characters.

 

Around chapter 16 its get HILARIOUS because the person helping her with spelling leaves and the whole thing falls apart.

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