I'm currently experimenting on a new art style for me to use, here are two drawings i did

Neku Sakuraba

 

Ash Ketchum (Which is my first attempt)

 

What do you think?

Fool. Make the lines a little thicker (like go over with a black pen or something) and color it better and you can make a cartoon.

Always room for improvement.. It's decent, if your trying to fine your own style.. It's in the mistakes of your drawings that make them distinct

I think the drawing is decent.

You should make the hands a bit smaller, and make them take an actual pose don't just let them hang there. It will make it more realistic. Make sure the hands are over the knees not under.

Make the outline with a black pen or something.

Make your coloring a bit stronger.

And you should fix the legs. Make them more closed and a bit longer.

 

Overall. Its a good drawing. Well done

Slenderman!