XxBlossomingNobodyxX 298 Posted December 16, 2013 I want to paint the world black Up in several coats, Cause it seems its cold. I want it to drown In thick darkness So it can't breath, Just like me. And if I did, God would poke holes In my dramatic art, And call these stars. And the moon Would remind you Of the true light locked away, Before I decided to smother the canvas sky in paint. I need to vent these feelings, Why won't you talk to me? All I get is silence, That reminds me... See me, hear me, know me. Make me real. Turn me from an illusion, Into something we can feel. We all don't get answers, But it's about time I did. Nevermind, this black and red Will replace what you never said. I give up, there's nothing I can do. In the end these feelings won't vanish with me, And you'll know it was cause of you. I think this is one of the most depressing poems I've ever written. 1 Lalalablah reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Philip Ellwell 5,487 Posted December 16, 2013 I want to paint the world black Up in several coats, Cause it seems its cold. I want it to drown In thick darkness So it can't breath, Just like me. And if I did, God would poke holes In my dramatic art, And call these stars. And the moon Would remind you Of the true light locked away, Before I decided to smother the canvas sky in paint. I need to vent these feelings, Why won't you talk to me? All I get is silence, That reminds me... See me, hear me, know me. Make me real. Turn me from an illusion, Into something we can feel. We all don't get answers, But it's about time I did. Nevermind, this black and red Will replace what you never said. I give up, there's nothing I can do. In the end these feelings won't vanish with me, And you'll know it was cause of you. I think this is one of the most depressing poems I've ever written. what i saw while reading this: 1 XxBlossomingNobodyxX reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
XxBlossomingNobodyxX 298 Posted December 16, 2013 what i saw while reading this: I already had all these feels. But maybe thats why I cried during the KH2 manga. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lalalablah 1,539 Posted December 16, 2013 This was a really beautiful poem despite its sadness. The 3rd, 7th, and 8th stanzas were my favorite. And if I did,God would poke holesIn my dramatic art,And call these stars. Like wow that is just an amazing line. 1 XxBlossomingNobodyxX reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
XxBlossomingNobodyxX 298 Posted December 16, 2013 This was a really beautiful poem despite its sadness.The 3rd, 7th, and 8th stanzas were my favorite.Like wow that is just an amazing line. Thanks, Lala. I like that too. Im glad you liked my poem, it means a lot. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites