I want to paint the world black

Up in several coats,

Cause it seems its cold.

 

I want it to drown

In thick darkness

So it can't breath,

Just like me.

 

And if I did,

God would poke holes

In my dramatic art,

And call these stars.

 

And the moon

Would remind you

Of the true light locked away,

Before I decided to smother

the canvas sky in paint.

 

I need to vent these feelings,

Why won't you talk to me?

All I get is silence,

That reminds me...

 

See me, hear me, know me.

Make me real.

Turn me from an illusion,

Into something we can feel.

 

We all don't get answers,

But it's about time I did.

Nevermind, this black and red

Will replace what you never said.

 

I give up, there's nothing I can do.

In the end these feelings

won't vanish with me,

And you'll know it was cause of you.

 

 

I think this is one of the most depressing poems I've ever written.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I want to paint the world black

Up in several coats,

Cause it seems its cold.

 

I want it to drown

In thick darkness

So it can't breath,

Just like me.

 

And if I did,

God would poke holes

In my dramatic art,

And call these stars.

 

And the moon

Would remind you

Of the true light locked away,

Before I decided to smother

the canvas sky in paint.

 

I need to vent these feelings,

Why won't you talk to me?

All I get is silence,

That reminds me...

 

See me, hear me, know me.

Make me real.

Turn me from an illusion,

Into something we can feel.

 

We all don't get answers,

But it's about time I did.

Nevermind, this black and red

Will replace what you never said.

 

I give up, there's nothing I can do.

In the end these feelings

won't vanish with me,

And you'll know it was cause of you.

 

 

I think this is one of the most depressing poems I've ever written.

what i saw while reading this: 

what i saw while reading this: 

I already had all these feels. But maybe thats why I cried during the KH2 manga.

This was a really beautiful poem despite its sadness. The 3rd, 7th, and 8th stanzas were my favorite.

 And if I did,God would poke holesIn my dramatic art,And call these stars. 

Like wow that is just an amazing line.

This was a really beautiful poem despite its sadness.The 3rd, 7th, and 8th stanzas were my favorite.Like wow that is just an amazing line.

Thanks, Lala. I like that too. Im glad you liked my poem, it means a lot.