So lately Ive been working on a project that I call KH Redux,and Ive been getting some really good ideas for how I want my characters to look like and some characters that I wanna bring into the series.

So first up we got the main bro,still have no clue what his name should be,if youd like to leave suggestions that be nice.

Next up we got the main gal of the series,also no name.

And if those two little drawings in the corners werent a big enough hint,Im planning for Serah and Oswald to be in it,same for Lightning but havent sketched anything for her out yet.

So yeah,thats pretty much what Ive got so far,tell me what you guys think,feedback would be nice,if youd like a better look you can ask for my DA,but Ill only give if you ask cause I dont wanna make every thread about this a plugin,that make me seem needy.

Oh, man! Seeing Oswald reminded me of something I thought up a loooong time ago. 

 

I was thinking that if there's such a world as the 'Timeless River' that you can go back to via a doorway, what if there was another one that disappeared mysteriously to make way for TR? I called it 'The Forgotten River' and it featured all of the old Disney characters that nobody remembers. 

 

Sorry for changing the subject, but your Oswald just suddenly brought that back to me. Really like your artwork, btw. Actually looks like it's literal concept art Square drew up. 

Oh, man! Seeing Oswald reminded me of something I thought up a loooong time ago. 

 

I was thinking that if there's such a world as the 'Timeless River' that you can go back to via a doorway, what if there was another one that disappeared mysteriously to make way for TR? I called it 'The Forgotten River' and it featured all of the old Disney characters that nobody remembers. 

 

Sorry for changing the subject, but your Oswald just suddenly brought that back to me. Really like your artwork, btw. Actually looks like it's literal concept art Square drew up. 

Although this is off-topic it's a great idea!

 

 

So lately Ive been working on a project that I call KH Redux,and Ive been getting some really good ideas for how I want my characters to look like and some characters that I wanna bring into the series.

So first up we got the main bro,still have no clue what his name should be,if youd like to leave suggestions that be nice.

 concept1.png

Next up we got the main gal of the series,also no name.

 concept.png

And if those two little drawings in the corners werent a big enough hint,Im planning for Serah and Oswald to be in it,same for Lightning but havent sketched anything for her out yet.

 concept2.png

So yeah,thats pretty much what Ive got so far,tell me what you guys think,feedback would be nice,if youd like a better look you can ask for my DA,but Ill only give if you ask cause I dont wanna make every thread about this a plugin,that make me seem needy.

 

Your sketches are amazing! But what's the plot?

Edited July 2, 201411 yr by JustBetweenYouAnd-I

Your sketches are amazing! But what's the plot?

But what's the plot?

BUT WHATS THE PLOT?

MAN O MAN I WISH I COULD TELL YOU THAT WITHOUT IT SOUNDING LIKE A RIP-OFF OF KH.

But seriously I wish it didnt sound like it,cause the set up for the beginning of my story sounds ALOT like KH1s beginning.

We start out with our two main characters who have lived pretty much there whole lives on this island/beach with their mom,but a couple of years ago a new girl washes ashore from out of nowhere.So they bring her into their home,and theyve been friends ever since.Then one day my main two decide to celebrate the day she came to the island by showing them their secret hideout thats been hidden from anybody thats ever visited the island,as a sign of a trustworthy friendship if that makes any sense.So they await til tomorrow for the celebration,thats when out of nowhere darkness covers the skies and creatures running around the island,they go and check it out to see the shadowy beings called heartless appearing,they try using the weapons they brought with them but its not effective at all,and as they get swarmed by the things,a light shines through,AND YOU CAN GUESS WHAT THE TWO OF THE TWO GET,so afterwards,they just fight what appears to be an endless swarm,til a weird vortex starts sucking the two up,they go in and the two get separated,AND THEN SHENNANIGANS ENSUE

IM SORRY YOU HAD TO READ WHAT WAS ESSENTIALLY THE BEGINNING OF KH1!

Hopefully the characters are good and different enough for making the begining more bearable,and as far as the rest of the story goes,I already have keypoints figured out and I know how I want to end it all,but I honestly think Ill tell a better story if I just wing it all,its just my style of writing,it works for me so eh.

MAN O MAN I WISH I COULD TELL YOU THAT WITHOUT IT SOUNDING LIKE A RIP-OFF OF KH.

But seriously I wish it didnt sound like it,cause the set up for the beginning of my story sounds ALOT like KH1s beginning.

We start out with our two main characters who have lived pretty much there whole lives on this island/beach with their mom,but a couple of years ago a new girl washes ashore from out of nowhere.So they bring her into their home,and theyve been friends ever since.Then one day my main two decide to celebrate the day she came to the island by showing them their secret hideout thats been hidden from anybody thats ever visited the island,as a sign of a trustworthy friendship if that makes any sense.So they await til tomorrow for the celebration,thats when out of nowhere darkness covers the skies and creatures running around the island,they go and check it out to see the shadowy beings called heartless appearing,they try using the weapons they brought with them but its not effective at all,and as they get swarmed by the things,a light shines through,AND YOU CAN GUESS WHAT THE TWO OF THE TWO GET,so afterwards,they just fight what appears to be an endless swarm,til a weird vortex starts sucking the two up,they go in and the two get separated,AND THEN SHENNANIGANS ENSUE

IM SORRY YOU HAD TO READ WHAT WAS ESSENTIALLY THE BEGINNING OF KH1!

Hopefully the characters are good and different enough for making the begining more bearable,and as far as the rest of the story goes,I already have keypoints figured out and I know how I want to end it all,but I honestly think Ill tell a better story if I just wing it all,its just my style of writing,it works for me so eh.

Only thing I didnt understood was did the new girl got it or the other one?

 

I would recommend (You don't have to do it if you dont want them) that if they're going to travel trough worlds they end in totally random worlds and the events that happened to one in that world affects the events of the other

 

 

(Would also like to help you with the story)

Edited July 2, 201411 yr by JustBetweenYouAnd-I

Only thing I didnt understood was did the new girl got it or the other one?

 

I would recommend (You don't have to do it if you dont want them) that if they're going to travel trough worlds they end in totally random worlds and the events that happened to one in that world affects the events of the other

 

 

(Would also like to help you with the story)

First off,I meant the main girl,not the new one.

Second,Well a big thing I wanted to happen when they visit different worlds is something similiar to BBS,they end up going to the same world at different ends of it and as they try to look for eachother as they interact with their surroundings they both end up solving that worlds problem.Something if I had to compare it to would be an American Tale,where the main character keeps trying to find his dad and at times their paths do cross eachother but they just miss eachother til they finally find eachother in the end.

And if you wanna help go right ahead when the time comes but right now I wanna get good at drawin to the point where I can start doin the project

Edited July 2, 201411 yr by lostmemory123

Well a big thing I wanted to happen when they visit different worlds is something similiar to BBS,they end up going to the same world at different ends of it and as they try to look for eachother as they interact with their surroundings they both end up solving that worlds problem.Something if I had to compare it to would be an American Tale,where the main character keeps trying to find his dad and at times their paths do cross eachother but they just miss eachother til they finally find eachother in the end.

So you mean that their parents are going to actually interact with them?!PLEASE, PLEASE LET ME HELP D:

So you mean that their parents are going to actually interact with them?!PLEASE, PLEASE LET ME HELP D:

I edited my post,look at it again.

I edited my post,look at it again.

I don't know what DA means...

I don't know what DA means...

NOT THAT POST

But to answer the questions you have,even though Im not sure how I indicated it in my last reply, I am gonna at least have their mother interact with them.

As for you helping me,knock yourself out,but only when I actually start doing the thing,Im not confident in myself to do it yet.

Also,DA means deviantart.

Oh, man! Seeing Oswald reminded me of something I thought up a loooong time ago. 

 

I was thinking that if there's such a world as the 'Timeless River' that you can go back to via a doorway, what if there was another one that disappeared mysteriously to make way for TR? I called it 'The Forgotten River' and it featured all of the old Disney characters that nobody remembers. 

 

Sorry for changing the subject, but your Oswald just suddenly brought that back to me. Really like your artwork, btw. Actually looks like it's literal concept art Square drew up. 

Hmm...The Forgotten River you say,how interesting *writes this gold down

But seriously cool idea though,never occurred to me,I just always thought of Oswald as part of the kings gang,just as the joker to contrast from the king.

if i had the time i would so give you ideas on this story because i have so many but i dont so...yeah.