Tonight I really wish the world was silent

I've got strangers at my door and in my house

Notice I did not say home,

Because I'm not home with all these shouts echoing out.

 

I hear her crying, and him screaming to get out

(These walls are too thin,

they'll never hold for my nightmares at 2 AM)

And Im stuck hiding in my closet with muffled sobbing

Wondering if the angels knew

What having family problems was all about.

 

Actually, I'm the one who doesn't know-

 

I won't turn the lights off any more at night

I see my future in five years

Just close the door and lock it tight

 

Good night, good night, good night.

 

There isn't anything wrong with me, the world, or this house-

But please, turn it ( lock it) away - n o,  s t a y -

I'm having trouble blocking it out.

 

These words, my songs, our screams

They don't mean anything.

Why can't it all go quiet?

Can I say I wish the world was silent?

 

All right, all right, all right.

 

Maybe there all good, seriously all these i could see are very good, i call it talent

on behalf of all members who posted, i say thanks.

we rock!

 

 

 

It actually is. The first two are about an argument that happened in my house, but it was awhile ago, like months. i remembered what happened and wrote a poem about it. the rest is me just being emo and the end is about me giving in.

 

"Can i say i really wish the world was silent?" is close to 'Can i say i really want to shut the world out?"

 

And the last all rights, are me saying yes

 

Yeah, just me being dramatic in poetic style

 

Aw, I was hoping it wasn't based! :'l

 

 

 

you want me to write a poem? okaayyy here goes nothing....

ummmm......

 

 

 

 

I like it

 

Quota though : /

I'll come back tomorrow to like it.

 

And i'll make an attempt to make a poem too.

Aw, I was hoping it wasn't based! :'l

 

 

 

 

 

I like it

 

Quota though : /

I'll come back tomorrow to like it.

 

And i'll make an attempt to make a poem too.

We would love to hear your poem

Yes! Make a poem!

never mind, its bad.

Edited October 6, 201411 yr by Soul Eater Evans

noooooooosseeee lets hear it! ^u^

never mind, its bad.

 

noooooooosseeee lets hear it! ^u^

 

Im with Amber, I want to hear it!!

So I'm writing a vocaloid-like poem. If you two like it, ill play it on the piano

 

 

No guarantee it'll be good.

Edited October 16, 201411 yr by Soul Eater Evans

Do it! an I have made a poem. It is very random though...

 

I swim in a sea

A sea of engaging thoughts

as I swirl my finger in my cup of tea

 

my thoughts drift from here

they often wonder to there

then they might suddenly disappear

 

I absent mindedly munch on gold fish

drifting off into a dream

I see little gold tails swish

 

the fish drift through the air

over and under they go

as they play hide and seek in my hair

 

the meaning of this I do not know

because I woke up without a clue

as to what happened to the fish with the golden glow

 

I munch some more as I muse

about the strange display

to this day I remain confused.

Do it! an I have made a poem. It is very random though...

 

I swim in a sea

A sea of engaging thoughts

as I swirl my finger in my cup of tea

 

my thoughts drift from here

they often wonder to there

then they might suddenly disappear

 

I absent mindedly munch on gold fish

drifting off into a dream

I see little gold tails swish

 

the fish drift through the air

over and under they go

as they play hide and seek in my hair

 

the meaning of this I do not know

because I woke up without a clue

as to what happened to the fish with the golden glow

 

I munch some more as I muse

about the strange display

to this day I remain confused.

Very surreal and cute! Love it

hehehe thanks!