Team Awesome:

- Alicia Maddox

- Amber Cole

- Cinder Fall

- Danex Darkfire +

- Jack Nightshade Frost

- Mercury Black

- Soul Eater Evans

- アクア

 

It all began with a letter...the letter "Q"

Edited November 16, 201410 yr by アクア

So Neptunia is like Final Fantasy in regards to story?

And absolutely no male characters? That's interesting.

Well no kinda. In FF the different installments have nothing to do with each other. In Neptunia its same characters with new ones here and there. Each character actually represents either a console, game company, series or game genre. Yeah no male characters except for a few antagonists here and there. Main character Neptune is a purple haired box of fun. Gotta love Neptune 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-XazP067WJI 

Edited September 28, 20169 yr by EMIYA

Well no kinda. In FF the different installments have nothing to do with each other. In Neptunia its same characters with new ones here and there. Each character actually represents either a console, game company, series or game genre. Yeah no male characters except for a few antagonists here and there. Main character Neptune is a purple haired box of fun. Gotta love Neptune 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-XazP067WJI

 

Ah ok

You said alternate universes so I assumed it was a FF type thing where, like you said, different games have nothing to do with each other

And having different characters that represent those things sounds awesome

The 4 main characters are 

Neptune = sega

Noire = PlayStation 

Blanc = Nintendo

Vert = Xbox

Main character Neptune is a purple haired box of fun. Gotta love Neptune 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-XazP067WJI 

wat

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wat

doh

 

Attempts:

I sit up in bed, seeing myself reflected in the mirror on the door across the room, looking flushed and scared, the woolen blanket pulled up to my chest. I didn't have a wool blanket.. I heard a growl, and felt hot breath on my neck. The mirror was fogged over with ice.

I saw it again today, on my way to work: the clown. He stood at the corner, just a red nosed clown, watching me. After awhile, he left. I saw him again that night, outside my house. He smiled in the moonlight.

 

 

 

Edited September 28, 20169 yr by Philip Ellwell

 

Attempts:

 

I sit up in bed, seeing myself reflected in the mirror on the door across the room, looking flushed and scared, the woolen blanket pulled up to my chest. I didn't have a wool blanket.. I heard a growl, and felt hot breath on my neck. The mirror was fogged over with ice.

 

I saw it again today, on my way to work: the clown. He stood at the corner, just a red nosed clown, watching me. After awhile, he left. I saw him again that night, outside my house. He smiled in the moonlight.

 

 

 

Sh@t, is it too similar? Literally the LAST thing I want to do for a writing contest on a SK site is COPY STEPHEN KING.........

Sh@t, is it too similar? Literally the LAST thing I want to do for a writing contest on a SK site is COPY STEPHEN KING.........

Never seen 'It' so I couldn't tell ya'. Been meaning to get around to it recently.

 

But your story is creepy as fudge. o_o

Never seen 'It' so I couldn't tell ya'. Been meaning to get around to it recently.

 

But your story is creepy as fudge. o_o

It is a killer clown, after kids in Derry, Maine.

Which, the first or sexond? 

I'm worrying over this too much....

It is a killer clown, after kids in Derry, Maine.

Which, the first or sexond? 

I'm worrying over this too much....

The second. The first one felt a little too...cliche I guess? Something that's been sort of seen, or read, many times and it just doesn't have a full scary effect to it anymore. In my opinion at least. 

 

Where as the second, you don't really see too many horror movies or books (as far as I know) that have clowns. And clowns are feared by many and seen as creepy as hell. So they can evoke fear more easily, hence being a more scary option that's not too overdone.

The second. The first one felt a little too...cliche I guess? Something that's been sort of seen, or read, many times and it just doesn't have a full scary effect to it anymore. In my opinion at least. 

 

Where as the second, you don't really see too many horror movies or books (as far as I know) that have clowns. And clowns are feared by many and seen as creepy as hell. So they can evoke fear more easily, hence being a more scary option that's not too overdone.

So should I post the clown one? I think I can add a sentence, too: it's under 100 words. 

And yeah....I can only think of maybe five horror movies based solely on clowns, and one of those is a horror comedy.

Also... "Sexond".... *facepalms into Mars*

So should I post the clown one? I think I can add a sentence, too: it's under 100 words. 

And yeah....I can only think of maybe five horror movies based solely on clowns, and one of those is a horror comedy.

Also... "Sexond".... *facepalms into Mars*

Hmm..maybe? Perhaps you should get feedback from a couple of other peoples first. You shouldn't solely trust my feedback. I suck at feedback.

Hmm..maybe? Perhaps you should get feedback from a couple of other peoples first. You shouldn't solely trust my feedback. I suck at feedback.

That's why I keep asking: I really want to win something from this. So I can hold up the book (Or pumpkin doohickey, if I get 3rd or lower) and say "I won this with my writing, and only my writing".

It's kinda important to me :I

That's why I keep asking: I really want to win something from this. So I can hold up the book (Or pumpkin doohickey, if I get 3rd or lower) and say "I won this with my writing, and only my writing".

It's kinda important to me :I

^_^ We've gotta get you to win this. 

 

Have some motivation.

 

^_^ We've gotta get you to win this. 

 

Have some motivation.

 

"You can do eeeet!"

"You can do eeeet!"

I'm TRYING, Shia Labeouf gif! 

I'm TRYING, Shia Labeouf gif! 

.......................................

That's actually good advice. 

.......................................

That's actually good advice. 

 

 

All the motivation,though.

Plus a fantastic top to page 782

All the motivation,though.

Plus a fantastic top to page 782

Damn straight.

 

Damn straight.

 

Do the wiggle, Bateman!

 

What....

 

Unrelated as all hell, but oh my god, the new Syfy horror films for 31 Days of Halloween

Stakeland II, The Crooked Man, Candle Cove.... holy hell. 

Edited September 28, 20169 yr by Philip Ellwell

Yeeeeeeeessss

Don't give up Phil

Yeeeeeeeessss

Don't give up Phil

I won't. 

Promise.