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I sat by the end of my window. I had my eye's closed just lost in my own thought. The sun was setting around this time of the day. It was about time for the fireflies to come out and light the whole town. Or maybe parts of it actually, but whenever they came out it seemd to have everyone forget about the war that was takeing place. Sometimes I would even forget myself. I'll admit I do alot.The fireflies seemd to have that effect on the villagers here. I opened my eye's when I heard the door behind me that led to my little brothers room open. I turned around to see my little brother was in his pj's. A stripped shirt and pants that match it and a little sleeping cap on his head. You could see some of his kinda curley brown hair come out of it but not much. His bright blue eyes were looking at the fireflies that were in my window already."Kasumi, the fireflies are out already. Do you want to come outside with me and look at them?"He asked full of joy. I smiled at him and got up and walked right over to him."Sure Shino. come on let's go."I said to him and picked him up. We walked out onto the porch and sat down in our favorite spots. We sat there for a long time not syaing a word to each other at all. He looked at the fireflies. I looked at the stars.I looked at each of the stars. They were so pretty tonight. Each one sparkled more than the next one. It gave a good effect for the time of night. The glow the fireflies made and the glow from the stars made everything seem so peaceful. "Kasumi,I'm getting sleepy."Shino said rubbing his eye's with both of his hands.I smiled at him and got up and held my hand out for him to take. "Come on let's go to bed."I said to him still holding my hand out and smileing at him. He took my hand and we both walked back into the house. I walked with him into his room and tucked him in. "Goodnight Shino."I said to him as I was about to leave I could hear him say in a sleepy voice."Goodngiht sister." I walked into my room and sat by the window like I did earlier. I gazed into the starry night sky. "The moon is so pretty tonight."I said outloud but quiet enough not to wake Shino up. Shino always seemd to make her happy no matter what kind of mood she was in. I guess the reason is that there mother and father died when they were both very young and they don't have contect with no one else really but that grandmother and grandfather but the lived in China so they didn't see them much. So Shinno was all she really had left really. She missed her parents dearly so did Shino, but they were murdered right in front of there eyes. The enemy that Japan is fighting agaistant killed there mother and father because they were simply in the way of things. A tear came down Kasumi face as she thought of her mother and father. She got up and walked over to the other side of the room and walked over to her table with pictures and papers everywhere. She picked up the last photograph that was taken of there parents and her and Shino all togather. Shino was toodler then and Kasumi was 14, but they all looked happy as can be.She held the picture close to her heart and started to cry quietly to herself. She walked over to her bed and sat down with the picture still in her hands. She creid and cried. Even though she was 16 now she missed them more than anything in the world.Soon later she fell asleep with the picture in her hands.

 

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The sun was shinning the brightest this moring. It was so bright that you had to cover your eye's just to see where you were going. That's what woke me up this morning.

It was shinning through my window. The window I left open....All night?! I can't believe that I left it open the whole night. Usually I shut it before I go to sleep but this time I guess I forgot but it's usually not like me to forget to do that.

I sat up and rubbed my eyes. I looked over and saw that the picture of our family was on my bed."Oh I fell asleep with the picture."I said outloud. I picked it up and put it on the table next to my bed.

I walked over to the window and looked outside. Everything seemed peaceful again."Good morning sister."Shino said. When I heard his voice I jumped. He scared me I didn't think he was up already, but I guess he was.

I turned to him and smiled at him."Good morning Shino."I said scrathing the back of my head. "Are you ok Sister? You seem really jumpy today." Shino said curiously.

I glared at him for a second but then I smiled at him."I'm fine you just scared me is all don't worry."

"Ok I won't!"He said full of joy once more. He ran out of my room and I watched him leave.

I sat on my bed for a minute or so and he came back in with a letter in his hand."Sister this was sent to us. It's from the general I think." He said in a confused voice.

" Let me see Shino." He handed me the letter and I read it slowly and outloud.

 

Dear, Mrs.Miyuki.

 

We have found the person who has killed your parents quiet some time ago.

He is on the oppisite side of the war, some people say that he knew your parents from along time ago

and hated them for doing something him and his clan disagreed on. So he decide to kill them for it.

We are not sure why or what your parents did to make them mad, but we wish we knew.

I hope you and your little brother are doing fine.

We are terrible sorry for your lost. If you ever need anything just ask. We know you guys are going through a rough time at the moment.

 

Sincerly

The General Hiro.

 

 

I sat the letter down. I tightend my fist and tried to hold back my tears.

"Kasumi..Are you crying?"Shino asked.

I looked up at him and say that his face was full of tears. The were coming down his fast as fast as ever.

I hugged him tightly and cried with him."Yes I am Shino..."I said still hugging him.

We stayed like that for a couple minutes.

I let him go and wipped the tears from his face and then mine.

"Kasumi, what if that man comes and tries to kill us or someone else...?"He said still crying a little.

I looked at him and thought of what to say. Then I came up with soemthing to say.

"It's ok Shino. The cought the man who did it. He won't hurt any more people."I said to him smiling."Don't worry if he does try to kill one of us I'll be here to protect you."I said still smiling at him.

"Ok, thank you Kasumi ."He said as he wiped the tears away from his eye's.

"Here go get dressed ok."I said to him and got up from off the bed.

"Ok Kasumi!"He said and ran to his room.

I smiled as I saw him leave and picked up the letter.

There was one thing I didn't read out loud to Shino. Simple because I didn't want him to know, but I guess he kinda knew already.

 

The man who killed your parent's will not stop till your whole family is dead Mrs. Miyuki. He got to your grandparents already. We found them dead last wedsenday in there house.

it was a bloody secene. Were sorry about them and how we have to tell you like this. I advise for you and your little brother to go into hiding of some kinda.

The murder might come after you. Were just saying to let you guys get a chance to hide.

I read that part to myself. If I read it outloud then Shino's whole day would be ruined for sure. I didn't want to do that to him not at all.

I took the letter and folded it in half and put it in a drawer.

I looked at the ceiling and shut my eye's.'Rest in peace Grandmother and grandfather.' I thoguht.

I opened my eye's and a tear came down my face slowly.

 

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"Kasumi can I go outside?"Shino asked as he walked into my room. I wiped the tear that was coming my down my face so he wouldn't see me crying.

"No stay inside ok."I said."But why? It's so nice outside right now. Please!"He asked me. He started to give me a puppy dog face. He knew that always got to me when he did that.

"Fine but I'm coming with you."I said to him. I knew I shouldn't have said yes because the murder might either be out there waiting for us or he was in the town. I'm not sure but still I had to act like nothing was going to happen.

"Yay!Thank you Kasumi!"He yelled. He gave me a hug and ran outside into the yard.I followed him and sat on the ground under the cheery bloosem tree that was in our yard.I watched him play around and do what he wanted to do.

"Hey Kasumi!"I jumped up and hit my head the lowest branch that was on the tree. I rubbed the top of my head and looked up to see Nariko.

He lives right next store to us and he is the same age as me. He has sorta redish brownish hair and light green eyes. His hair is short and he is a little bit taller then me.

Maybe a inch or two but that's about it really.

Sorry about that Kasumi I didn't know you would freak out like that or did I?"He said. He was sitting on the ledge wall the seperates our houses.

"Oh haha very funny Nariko."I said to him and rolled my eyes at him. He jumped down from off the wall and sat next to me.

Shino ran over to us when he heard me say Nariko's name.

"Kasumi your boyfriend is here!"Shino yelled at me. I glared at him and my face started to get hot."He's not my boyfriend Shino! Were just friends!"

"Yeah Shino were just friends."Narkio said to Shino.

"What ever you guys just say your not dateing but you guys like each other it so easy to tell."Shino said to us and ran off again.

"Why does he always think were dateing?"I said outloud and stood up oss the ground and started to head into the house. Nariko got up when I did too.

"I don't know maybe we should start dateing." I turned my head slowly to him and glared at him. I ran over to him and smacked him in the back of the head.

"Why would you say that! You never said that before!" I yelled to him.

"Ouch that hurt."He said not yelling back at me. He rubbed the back of his head where I smacked him.

"I'm sorry I just hate it when you say stuff like that. Wait here."I said to him and went in the house. I went to the kitchen and got a ice pouch for his head and came back out and handed it to him.

"Thank you Kasumi."He said and sat on the ground with the icepack to his head.

I sat next to him and we watched Shino play around the yard for awhile.

All we did was sit there and watch Shino do stuff around the yard. I knew I should tell him that grandfather and Grandmother died but I just didn't know how to tell him.

I need to wait for the right time to tell him the truth he deserved that.

"Kasumi are you ok? You seem like you were lost in your own thoughts."Nariko asked me with concern.

"Yeah I'm just fine don't worry about me."I said putting on a fake smile on my face.

"Kasumi your the worset lier ever you know. Tell me what's wrong."He said looking at me.

"Yeah I know I'm a horrible lier, but anyways. I'm hiding something from Shino right now and I jst don't know how to tell him this. It's going to kill him inside if he finds out but I have to tell him I know that by heart."I said looking down at the ground.

"Let me guess someone else was murdered in your family."He said.

"Yeah our grandparents did. About two days ago and I found out today."I said still looking at the ground.

He lifted my face up and looked me in the eyes.

"Do you know who is doing this at all?"He asked.

"No I don't but all I know is that he wont stop till me and my brother are dead too."

He looked at me wide eyed. He must have been shcoked or something about what I just told him.

"Nariko? Are you ok?"I asked him. He still didn't say anything.

Was he ok? What's going on with him?

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"Nariko? Are you ok?"I asked him again. He wouldn't say anything or do anything. He just sat there.

His face was plae white and his eye's were wide."I'm sorry Kasumi but I have to go."He said. He stood up and climed the tree and jumped to the other side of the wall to his his house.

I watched him leave all of a sudden. "I wonder why he left after I told him what I didn't tell Shino."I said quietly.

I sat down on the ground and looked up into the sky.

"What's wrong Kasumi?"Shino asked as he skipped over to where I was and sat next to me.

"Shino there's something I have to tell you..."I said. I turned to him and looked at him. This was going to hurt him more than it hurts me to tell him but he needs to know the truth about everything.

"What is it?"He asked me with concern.

I put my hand on top of his and held it."Grandfather and grandmother died two days ago, and the person who killed them killed mom and dad..."

I looked at his face and I could see his eye's were watering up. I could tell he was trying to hold back the tears but he just couldn't.

He reached out for me and gave me a hug. He tried to hide his face from me I guess so I wouldn't see him cry.

I rubbed his back and I started to cry too. "Why does that man have to go and kill everyone in our family!!!"He cried.

"I don't know Shino. I don't know. but there in a better place right now. "

"What if that guy tries to come and kill us Kasumi?! What are we going to do?!"He cried as he let go of me. You could still see the tears coming down his face.

"He won't get you Shino I'll make sure of it. I'm here to protect you so don't worry."I said smiling at him.

He wipped the tears away and smiled back at me."Ok but I'm here to help protect you too! You know!"He said.

I smiled at him again."I know Shino."I said and gave him a hug. We stood up togather and walked back into the house.

 

 

 

-The killer-

 

He cleaned his sword from the last kill he just did. The grandparents of Kusumi and Shino Miyuki.

He sat on a ledge of a building that was near there house. He looked down at the people who were passing by. He looked for one of the Miyuki children so he could kill them faster than he planned to do.

"Where are those two annoying brats!"He said under his breath. He had a evil smirk on his face."There father was a fool to make that desicon now his two kids are living on there own in fear."

He said with the evil smirk on his face still. "See Ryu Miyuki! You messd with the wrong person or my name isn't Osamu Chikako!!"He yelled.

Everyone turned to the direction on where the heard someone yell. He saw them looking his way and disappeared before anyone could see his face.

"that was a close one. I need to be more careful around here."He said quietly to himself. He was behind a bush in a park now. He was not to far from Shino's and Kasumi house now.

He was wearing a hoodie that would cover his face so no one could see him or tell who he was. Hie hair was white and his eye's were a dark red color.

The hood he was wearing was black. and his sword was on his back. He walked in search of them. He woudln't give up till the whole Miyuki clan was killed for good, but first he wanted to go and say hello to some old friends of his. "I'll pay Nariko a visit and see if he missed his uncle Osamu at all." He said. He had the evil smirk on his face again and he held his sword tightly.

 

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-The killer-

After 20 minutes or so,Osamu made it to Narukio's house.

He knocked on the door lightly and waited for him to asnwer.

Naruiko came to the door and had a shocked look on his face."Did you miss me Naruiko?"Osamu asked with a smirk on his face.

"What are you doing here Osamu?"Nariko asked him.

"You don't clam me as your uncle still huh? Well I came here to see you of course."Osamu said. He walked right into Naruiko's House and turned around to him.

"The reason why I don't clam you as my uncle is because you killed Miyuki clan, or most of them anyways."Naruiko said looking away.

"Looks like little Naruiko has feelings about people besides him. Rememeber when you helped me kill there father Nariuko?"

Naruiko glared at him and snapped."I was younger then and you forced me to!"He yelled to Osamu.

"Oh come on your my partner and I know you know where the rest of the Miyuki's are now. So why don't you just tell me where they are Naruiko"

"I would never tell you, Osamu."NAruiko glared at him as he said it.

Osamu turned to the door and was about to walk out of the door."Ok then I'll have to find them on my own then, bu while I'm here I guess I can kill other people as well maybe the general of Japan."He turned to Naruiko.

"How does that sound liitle Naruiko! The death of your general! Or I can just kill you! Like I did with your family!"Osamu yelled to him with a crazed look on his face.

He turned to the door and walked out into the town again.

 

-Naruiko-

When Osamu left Naruiko punched the wall and made a whoel twice the size of his hand in it.

"Osamu!!!"He yelled and looked at the ground with his hand still in the wall.

He slamed the front door shut and went into his room a layed down on the bed.He layed there for awhile and then finally fell asleep.

 

 

-After 2 hours or so the general was found dead on his office floor bleeding to death. No one saw him that day and no one had a clue on who was the man who killed him.-

 

Kasumi heard the news about what happened to the general on the news when she went inside.."The guy the general was talking about in the lettter must have found out and killed him."She thought. She shut the television off.

kasumi walked outside for the third time that day. Shino was outside playing around like he was doing earlier. She sat on the porch and leaned on a post that was sticking out of the porch.She shut her eyes."Rest in piece General Hiro of Japan. You were a great general."She said quietly under her breath.

She opened her eyes and saw Shino was in her face. She freaked out and hit her head on the post that she was leaning on."Ouch! Shino you should say something to me letting me know your right there so I wont hurt myself as much."She said rubbing the back of her head.

"Sorry Kasumi, but I heard you saying something about the general. So what were you saying about him?"He asked. He sat right next to her and looked at her.

Kasumi looked at Shino looking for the right words to say to him about what happened to the general Hiro.

"Shino, Um General Hiro was murdered."

 

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Shino's eye's started to widened."General Hiro...was murdered...?"Shino said in a shaky voice.He started to clench his fist up into little balls."Who killed him?"

"I don't know Shino. I just found out he was murdered earlier today. So I don't know a lot of info-"

"That man who killed our family! He killed him!I know it! he did it!"Shino yelled to me full of anger."Shino calm down."I said putting my hands on his shoulders.

"Calm down! Calm down! How am I supposed to calm down! General Hiro was murderd and you want me to calm down!"Shino yelled and pusshed my hands away from him. He stood up and walked back into the house and slammed the door.

"shino..." Kasumi said. She stood up off the porch and went into the house to look for Shino.

When she found Shino she saw his face. "Kasumi!"

 

-Naruiko-

 

"Get out of here uncle. I'm not going to help you finish the Miyuki clan. So why don't you just leave already!"Nariuko yelled to Osamu.

"Foolish boy. If your not going to help me I guess I have no other choice but to kill you right here right now."Osamu said to him in a lifeless voice.

Before Nariuko could blink or get into a fighting postion Osamu attacked him. He slashed right through his chest which made him bleed as soon as he was cut. Nariuko fell down on to his knees and held his wound.

"Osamu!"He said as his whole body fell down to the ground.

"Your not even strong enough to deflect that. Pitiful. Your weak."Osamu said. He walked over to Nariuko's body that was still on the ground and kicked it."Farwell Naruiko. Nice to see you again."He said and walked out of the house.

Naruiko layed there for a minute till he knew Osamu was gone. He stood up and laughed. "Looks like your the fool uncle. You couldn't tell I was faking the whole time."He said still laughing. Then it came to his mind that Kasumi and Shino lived next door to him and Osamu was looking for them if he found out that they lived next door then the might have been dead by now.

"Darn it!"He yelled. He swung the front door open and ran over to Kasumi house and started to knock on the door."Awsner the door Kasumi! It's me Nariuko! Come on!" He started to kick the door and still no awsner.

"firetruck this."He said. He went back to his house and climbed the tree that was in his yard and jumped over the wall that seperated there houses."Kasumi! Shino! Where are you!?"He yelled. He started to search the house to see if they were in there.So far he couldn't find them at all.

"Don't tell me he got to them already. If he did it's all my falut!"He repeated to himself in his head."Please let them still be alive!"

 

Sorry it took so long for me to post the chapter I was really busy so yeah. Hope you liked it.

Sorry it wasn't much either.

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Kusumi eyes widended. She took Shino's arm and pulled him away from the bloody body that was on there floor.

Shino started to tear up. Mainly because the body was General Hiro's body.

"Shino go into the other room now..." She ordered.

"B-but.."

"Now!" She shouted. After she shouted at him he ran out of the room.

Kusumi walked over to the body. She fell on to her knees and picked up generals Hiro's head and wipped somem of the blood off of his face.

She wasn't sure how long she just sat there holding his head. But that was all she could do.

"Kusumi. Naruiko is here." Shino said hiding half of his face behind the door.

Kusumi stood up and turned to Shino."Ok Shino." She walked over to him and gave him a hug."I'm sorry for yelling at you like that."

She said to him as she kept hugging him.

He hugged her back."It's ok I know you just didn't want me to see him like that."

She let go of him and held her hand out to him. He took her hand and brought her to where Naruiko was.

 

~Nariuko~

 

Naruiko was still breathing hard. He just had to climb over there wall and run over there to see if they were ok and he accidently scraped his leg on something sharp so there was cut now.

He made sure no one was able to see his blood. He waited for Shino and Kusumi. So far what Shino has told him was that Osamu killed him and brought his body here to warn them or was it to scare them half to death?

Kusumi and Shino walked in hand and hand. They looked like nothing happened but he knew something did.

He could tell because of the pain that was in Kusumi's eye's.

"Are you ok Kusumi? Shino told me-" Kusumi surprised him by giving him a hug. Teras started to flow down her fast. She hid her face from him and Shino.

He hugged her back and rubbed her back.

Shino just stood there crying too. Kusumi pulled away from Naruiko and turned around to see Shino was crying to.

She walked over to him and hugged him."Shino, go in the other room ok. I need to talk to Naruiko alone."

"Ok..."He said sadly. He walked out of the room ruibbing his eye's.

Kusumi watched him leave the room. She turned around to Naruiko."How did you know that general Hiro's body was here? Or how did you know something happened over here?"

Naruiko was silent.