Chapter 1: Falling into the Black...

A smoky haze covered the air in the small tavern, the room was barely decorated except for a few odds and ends placed on shelves, the room smelled of dirt, smoke, and alcohol. Drunkards sat in their chairs and played poker while the bartender dished out concoctions as if they were water. A man came into the tavern wearing a tattered brown hood. He walked up to the bar and sat down on a stool,

You said this would be the final chapter. T.T I don't care if Erik dies, but there are other characters I like and I wouldn't want to die (even so you told me he will )

nice dude it awsome

Amazing job.I can't wait for the next chapter.

Chapter 14: Path of Fear

AWSOME DUDE