The offical Birth By Sleep Abriged Series. Warnign these do cotnain soem spoilers. and some bad words. So RATED PG-13: But let the fun begian for KH Fans!

 

 

Episode 1:

 

Episode 2:

 

Episode 3: Directed by Keanu Reeves

 

Episode 4:

 

Episode 5: Oswald the Lucky Rabbits FRIST OFFICAL VOICE Apperice!

 

SEASON FINLE: Coming Soon

 

Part 1/ep. 6:

 

Part 2/ep. 7:

It seems....strange. I suppose this is comedy, compared to others I would title this under "Random Comedy" for its un-related plot add-ons. I still don't understand how i'd fit under Season 2. Basically, I ROFL'D out of my chair.

well theya re videos,and were suppsoe to make you laugh and add a smile. simple. how it realtes to its orginal incarnation. the vocie acting is 1000% better this time lol . well at least for aqua and Ventus and deftanly terra. Not for eraqus...he;s jsut a big ol daddy!

 

and to answeser how this will add to season 2: We have to uplaod the last to parts. then you'll see! ^^ MAHAHAHAHHAAHHAHAHAAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHA I'M A SEXY CANDIEAN GODESS

Well, to be honest, I've seen better abridged series. It really just seemed like you took clips from BBS and put random voice overs on them. Maybe making the videos shorter (since it's called an abridged series for a reason) and adding jokes that make sense with the plot would work? I dunno, just a suggestion.

Hopefully my con.crit. will help in some way.

Well, to be honest, I've seen better abridged series. It really just seemed like you took clips from BBS and put random voice overs on them. Maybe making the videos shorter (since it's called an abridged series for a reason) and adding jokes that make sense with the plot would work? I dunno, just a suggestion.

Hopefully my con.crit. will help in some way.

 

yeah hunny,thats not how you do ocnstivtive ctisim!

 

this is how it goes:

2-4 things they did right!(or what you liked)

2-4 thigns they can work on.

 

 

 

wwhat you said was oppion based, so ...oppions are fine and dandy but jsut learn what constrtive criesim is, becfore you go out sayign that you knwo what your talkign abotu and callign it constive critism.

 

Well, to be honest, I've seen better abridged series. It really just seemed like you took clips from BBS and put random voice overs on them. Maybe making the videos shorter (since it's called an abridged series for a reason) and adding jokes that make sense with the plot would work? I dunno, just a suggestion.

Hopefully my con.crit. will help in some way.

 

yeah hunny,thats not how you do ocnstivtive ctisim!

 

this is how it goes:

2-4 things they did right!(or what you liked)

2-4 thigns they can work on.

 

 

 

wwhat you said was oppion based, so ...oppions are fine and dandy but jsut learn what constrtive criesim is, becfore you go out sayign that you knwo what your talkign abotu and callign it constive critism.

 

Okay, first off, your little lesson on constructive criticism actually made me laugh at first. And then I realized you were serious.

Um...I did tell you 2 things you could work on, HUNNY. And all criticism, constructive or otherwise, is opinion based. I was trying to help, you realize; I didn't have to critique your videos. I could've just said, "They sucked. Go die please." but I'm not like that, so I decided to give you advice instead. And I'm beginning to regret it.

Please learn how to take criticism, or, even better, what criticism is, before you go and post a smart-ass reply. Mmm'kay, pumpkin?

 

 

Well, to be honest, I've seen better abridged series. It really just seemed like you took clips from BBS and put random voice overs on them. Maybe making the videos shorter (since it's called an abridged series for a reason) and adding jokes that make sense with the plot would work? I dunno, just a suggestion.

Hopefully my con.crit. will help in some way.

 

yeah hunny,thats not how you do ocnstivtive ctisim!

 

this is how it goes:

2-4 things they did right!(or what you liked)

2-4 thigns they can work on.

 

 

 

wwhat you said was oppion based, so ...oppions are fine and dandy but jsut learn what constrtive criesim is, becfore you go out sayign that you knwo what your talkign abotu and callign it constive critism.

 

Okay, first off, your little lesson on constructive criticism actually made me laugh at first. And then I realized you were serious.

Um...I did tell you 2 things you could work on, HUNNY. And all criticism, constructive or otherwise, is opinion based. I was trying to help, you realize; I didn't have to critique your videos. I could've just said, "They sucked. Go die please." but I'm not like that, so I decided to give you advice instead. And I'm beginning to regret it.

Please learn how to take criticism, or, even better, what criticism is, before you go and post a smart-ass reply. Mmm'kay, pumpkin?

 

but thats how CONSTRUTIVE CRETISM works! not crtisim...jeez.... now we can arguee princess,but were would that lead us? NO WHERE. because then would really be putting a Taylor Swift. and you and me knwo thats just horrible. besides J.Lo in this series is much better then Willa Holland as Aqua. mm'kay?

 

 

 

Well, to be honest, I've seen better abridged series. It really just seemed like you took clips from BBS and put random voice overs on them. Maybe making the videos shorter (since it's called an abridged series for a reason) and adding jokes that make sense with the plot would work? I dunno, just a suggestion.

Hopefully my con.crit. will help in some way.

 

yeah hunny,thats not how you do ocnstivtive ctisim!

 

this is how it goes:

2-4 things they did right!(or what you liked)

2-4 thigns they can work on.

 

 

 

wwhat you said was oppion based, so ...oppions are fine and dandy but jsut learn what constrtive criesim is, becfore you go out sayign that you knwo what your talkign abotu and callign it constive critism.

 

Okay, first off, your little lesson on constructive criticism actually made me laugh at first. And then I realized you were serious.

Um...I did tell you 2 things you could work on, HUNNY. And all criticism, constructive or otherwise, is opinion based. I was trying to help, you realize; I didn't have to critique your videos. I could've just said, "They sucked. Go die please." but I'm not like that, so I decided to give you advice instead. And I'm beginning to regret it.

Please learn how to take criticism, or, even better, what criticism is, before you go and post a smart-ass reply. Mmm'kay, pumpkin?

 

but thats how CONSTRUTIVE CRETISM works! not crtisim...jeez.... now we can arguee princess,but were would that lead us? NO WHERE. because then would really be putting a Taylor Swift. and you and me knwo thats just horrible. besides J.Lo in this series is much better then Willa Holland as Aqua. mm'kay?

 

Oh my God...you know what, nevermind. You aren't going to listen.

I'm sorry to say that this series is not my bread and butter.

I can barely understand what it is the "Characters" are saying. Theres no real parody... more like you with a microphone recording whatever came to your mind as you watched the scenes.

I also agree with most everything DemyxLovesCookies as said...

It really does need to be shorter, thats why it's called "Abridged".

And if you didnt know,

 

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Well, to be honest, I've seen better abridged series. It really just seemed like you took clips from BBS and put random voice overs on them. Maybe making the videos shorter (since it's called an abridged series for a reason) and adding jokes that make sense with the plot would work? I dunno, just a suggestion.

Hopefully my con.crit. will help in some way.

 

yeah hunny,thats not how you do ocnstivtive ctisim!

 

this is how it goes:

2-4 things they did right!(or what you liked)

2-4 thigns they can work on.

 

 

 

wwhat you said was oppion based, so ...oppions are fine and dandy but jsut learn what constrtive criesim is, becfore you go out sayign that you knwo what your talkign abotu and callign it constive critism.

 

Okay, first off, your little lesson on constructive criticism actually made me laugh at first. And then I realized you were serious.

Um...I did tell you 2 things you could work on, HUNNY. And all criticism, constructive or otherwise, is opinion based. I was trying to help, you realize; I didn't have to critique your videos. I could've just said, "They sucked. Go die please." but I'm not like that, so I decided to give you advice instead. And I'm beginning to regret it.

Please learn how to take criticism, or, even better, what criticism is, before you go and post a smart-ass reply. Mmm'kay, pumpkin?

 

but thats how CONSTRUTIVE CRETISM works! not crtisim...jeez.... now we can arguee princess,but were would that lead us? NO WHERE. because then would really be putting a Taylor Swift. and you and me knwo thats just horrible. besides J.Lo in this series is much better then Willa Holland as Aqua. mm'kay?

 

Oh my God...you know what, nevermind. You aren't going to listen.

 

oh no, sweetie i listen. I jsut took it that way. maybe thats not what your sayign but to me thats how it came out.

 

as for you Roxy:

okay thank you RoxSoxSH! actully its two people! And we did try to make it shorter.... to many good sences. while if your not intrested thank you for your time. I KNOW WHAT ABRIGED MEANS!

 

Now i think by season 2 lots of things are gonna be different!

Im sorry but its like DLC & Rox said they weren't good, I know its early days but I wasn't hooked by the first few minutes. The main fault I can think of is you probably think putting on a funny voice and saying anything that comes to mind constitutes a joke, where in lies another problem its evident you didn't produce a script (which the top abridgers do) so the plot's cohesion is sloppy. Also by not actually abridging it you limit you're ability to parody and control the story and jokes. In the end you had the mind to do it but you didn't have the heart.

 

I think the utmost problem about it is pure laziness, you put on a funny voice you do with friends and thought you could translate that into comedy gold, no thought given to proper or t least hammy voice acting. Heres some advice try putting on an accent or impersonate someone and make a voice from it. Write a proper script with 2 to 3 drafts even plagerise a bit. Edit an episode for an abridged format and try not to long 5 mins top

THANK YOU DEADPOOL! See you gave it short,sweet, striaght to the point. but its to people! so is it my voice? or hsi voie/ both voices you got to make that clearer! cause it sounds liek your a bunch of little kids.

 

 

BTW if you actully watch the last two episodes (they are both ten mintutes each for good reason.) it actully gives not only import plot info and twist but belive it or not(like yall won;t) has a plot. I mean hey jsut cause ya;; three don;t like it,doesn;t mean everyone else don't, lots of people like it. everyones different. got it? BTW Ryan Renolds as Deadpool FTW!