/lame for using song lyrics

 

Version 1

I like the blend of colors but the flowers look meh in the background but if I took them off it would look bland

 

 

Version 2.

Not much color but a lot less messy.

 

I really like my text placement. It fits. Kind of unreadable. But w/e.

I really like the first one

I agree, I like the first one the best ^^

Although the first one you can see the flowers better, the red effect, (overlay I'm guessing), is too concentrated. Try to tone down the color a bit and it'll definitely make the image look better.

 

Try to blend in the 3 main focal images. The manga scan of the girl doesn't exactly go with the real-life flowers. It looks too random. Also, although I like that font of text, it doesn't blend well in this project. Try to look for cursive font and blend it in more efficiently. Rasterize the text layer and put the eraser tool in a low flow percentage and blend around the edges. Maybe add a glow effect to make it look dreamy-like.

 

That's about it. My critique tends to sound blunt so don't take it the wrong way. You've definitely improved in your graphics skills so I advise you to continue. You make beautiful images, my koko lover <3

Thank you so much Jenny <3 I love crit

I'll try that thanks! x3 <33

I love that song!

i think the 2nd on is better, i can see the words better