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The Time-Traveling Replica (A KH story)

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(Note: This story may contain spoilers. It's about the Mysterious Figure in BBS, so it has a lot of theories. Well, not even theories really, just things I made up. But still.)

 

Prologue

A man in a black coat stood in a black, circle shaped room. The only thing that lit up the room were glowing red symbols shaped somewhat like the symbols on the hands of clocks, that were engraved into the wall. In the middle of the room there was a black pod. A computer stood next to the pod.

 

A black, high tech door on the wall slid open. A man dressed in the same thing walked in. "Is the ____ replica ready?"

 

The other man nodded quietly and typed a code into the computer. Beep-beep-beep. The pod opened. A figure in a simple white cloak fell out, and the man who had just walked in caught him. The figure was asleep.

 

"It needs to rest." The man who had caught him said. He started to walk out of the room with the figure slung over his shoulder. He walked out of the room and into a long, black hallway. It was the same design as the other room, except, as said, a hallway.

 

He walked into another high-tech door which lead to a bedroom. The only difference in the design was that the wall was a light, shining blue, but the same symbols. It was a well kept room. The whole place was well-kept. You could search non-stop for months and not find a speck of dust.

 

The man set the sleeping figure into a made bed, that was next to a window. Outside the window was nothing but night sky. A dark blue sky with many, many stars. But no moon. Or was it even a night sky?

 

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End of prologue. I'll write more tomorrow.

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That was really good! Keep writing!

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Meh, I don't think it's that great. But thanks.

 

EDIT: I just realized there's another fan-fic dedicated to the MF. I'm gonna get killed for this.

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Meh, so far as I know, double posting is excusable in the writing forum... I apologize if it isn't.

 

[align=center]Chapter 1

The Mirage Castle

 

I opened my eyes, and the glimmering light blue wall shone in my eyes. I quickly covered them with my arm. I must have fallen asleep on the beach again... I thought. I slowly moved my arm away from my face, and realized this wasn't the beach. I had woke up in a cold, unfamiliar room. "What is this place?" I wondered aloud.

 

I looked out the window beside me. It was so familiar, I had been in it so many times... space. Why would I be in space? I flung myself up from the dull gray bed, with a simple white bed spread and a small, square shaped pillow. "Where's blank and blank?" I wondered aloud again. What... why can't I say their names...? I thought.

 

I was about to run out the door to see what was going on, but I couldn't with this outfit on. The white cloak that exposed most of my legs and arms, that looked and felt like it could fall off any minute.

 

I looked around the room and found a black dresser. I reached out to one of the shelves to open it, but instead, as soon as I touched it, it flew open. Nothing in it. I tapped it again and it closed. Nothing was in the next few, but in the one before last, there was a folded black coat. Where had I seen this before? It was so familiar.

 

I wondered if there was any thing in the next shelf, but I had no time to see for myself. I had to see what was going on. I quickly got dressed in the coat, and sprinted out the door.

 

But before I could go any farther, a man stood in front of me blocking my path. "Ah. You have awoken. Welcome to The Mirage Castle."

 

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Hooray for short and crappy chapters. :/

 

I'll write more later today.[/align]

It's great! 8D

Keep writing <3

I'd just reccomend a little check on grammer in some little spots ;D

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