Ai Enma

Amaya kept drawing a strange figure. The she heard a knock on the door. She went to open the door and she started to hug Nikki. "Oh my God! I am so happy to see you once again Nikki! I am sorry for what I done. Please forgive me!" Amaya cried. She let go of Nikki and smiled at Riku. Then she felt to see if her heart was beating again. It wasn't. She sighed but gave smile to her friends.

So far, your story is starting off good. I like it! Rui reminds me of Ichigo. Lolz. You have a good story in your hands. Keep it going!!

go for it sis. it wouldnt hurt to try and yeah you do look like a teen lol

Its really good and I can't wait to read the next chapters!!

Very good!! I like these chapters they are getting better and better! Keep up the good work!

Very interesting indeed!! I can't wait for your next videos lol!!

"Should I just give up...." she sang and stopped. She turned around and saw a guy in the doorway. "Ummm....You can come in if you were. I am done in here for now." she said to him. Amy put her guitar in the case and got up. She went by the door and said,"Hello..I am Amy. Also nice to meet you." she said and walked out. Amy walked out of the school to looked around campus some more. Walking by she sees the track field and gasps. "That biggest track field I have ever seen!" she said. The she heard something but didn't pay attention to it though and kept on walking looking at the different sports areas.

Amy walked back into her room and saw that Julia was there. She walked pass her like she wasn't even there. 'There's no time to be waisting on people who thought she was a loser.' she thought. Amy sat down at her desk and picked up a book to read. After awhile she got tired of reading and got up to leave. She went pass up couple of dorms. She yawned abit and went into the music room.

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"Wow..that was weird and came out of nowhere. Oh well, I better go sign up for track before the spots are taken." she said and left. The bulletin board had lots of sports but it really didn't suit her. She looked around for the track sign up sheet. "Here it is.."she said and wrote her name there. Amy put her hands in her pocket and took a small tour for awhile to pass time. School was normal like any other school except the kids who were unique and gifted.

Amy sighed as Julia left the room. "I sounded like a straight loser but I need to be my true self. Ok, I will be myself whenever we talk again. Amy got up and grabbed her guitar. She started to sing and play again. She felt that she was a loser on the inside but a winner on the outside. She stopped playing for a moment. "I can't let this girl walk all over me like a I am nothing. I am not going that route again. No sir." she said. Amy started to play again as she went into deep thought and she closed her eyes. "I build myself up...And fly around in circles...Waitin' as my heart drops...And my back begins to tingle....Finally, could this be it..." she sung her favorite song again. "Would probably kill for just one friend." she said.

Amy looked up and stopped playing her song. "Um..hello. I see you are my roommate. Nice cheerleader outfit!" she said to be friendly to her. Amy got up and put her guitar next to the rest of her instruments. She looked at the girl and see that she could be the cheer captain or something. Amy sighed. "Look, you don't seemed thrilled that I am sharing this room with you. Hey I can go get my room changed or something. I just don't want any trouble with anyone this year cause I am a freshman. I would really like to get to know someone here" she said and smiled to show peace. She sat down at her desk and waited for an answer from her. Hope it doesn't sounds to mean.

Oh thats bad but I hope it gets better soon.

Amy opened the door to music room and no one was there. "Hmmm....I guess I got some time to myself in here." she said with a smile. She took a sit next to the window and sat her guitar case on the floor. She opened it and took out her guitar. It had a big red star on it. She smiled and start to play. "I've made up my mind,Don't need to think it over, If I'm wrong, I am right, Don't need to look no further,This ain't lust,I know this is love,But, if I tell the world,I'll never say enough,'cause it was not said to you,And that's exactly what I need to do,If I end up with you...Or should I just keep chasin' pavements? Even if it leads nowhere,Or would it be a waste,Even if I knew my place,Should I leave it there,Should I give up,Or should I just keep chasin' pavements,Even if it leads nowhere..." she sung out loud while playing her guitar.

Chapter is very good! It is really chasing the pavements!! Chapter three is going to be very nice!!!

Awesome picture!! And happy birthday Leo. May you have many good more birthdays.!! From:Amaya(Amy)

"Well I am finished with this book already, well I should go get the rest of my stuff then." she said and she picked up her bag. In the dorm it was nice,regular, and dull. On one side the room was already set up with someone's stuff. Amy threw her bag on the other bed and started to unpack the other things she had. Clothes in the closet, instruments in one straight line. Hanging a poster next on the walls. She put pictures on the desk; cds,books,and laptop there. "Well, I have everything set the way I want it on my side. Now I can check out the music room." she said and grabbed her guitar. She left.

A pause at the end? I know 2 chapter is going to good just like chapter 1!

Amy got out of the car. She waved goodbye to her parents as they drove off. "Well at least I got here late. Being a freshman and letting others see you get dropped of by you mom and dad is embarrassing.." she said. She walked up the steps and looked around campus. She sat on a bench and started to read about this school. Well reading is one of the good things she like to do. 'This might be a good year for me actually.' She thought.

Name:Amy Wilson Grade:Freshman Gender:Female Species:Human Sterotype:Loners Sports team/group:Band/Track Weapon:Star Blade Appearence:Wears black skinny jeans with red shirt. Has black eyes and long brown hair. Always have to wear a aero jacket. Also wears red or black chucks. Bio:During the summer, Amy finds out that she is a keyblader. So she signs up for a school that she can try to fit into for once in her life. Sorry for lateness

This is really interesting already and it isn't even chapter 1 yet. I can't wait to see what's about to happen next.

No, I am sorry but the new winner is Ai Enma!!

That is a very beautiful poem!! It really is!! It is so deep to me!! Keep up your writing sis!!

Have you ever watched Jigoku Shoujo?

Yeah that would make me think it would end.