Final Hearts 69

Congratulations on getting it a 100% done and getting Sora....i'm still struggling through it....challeges are the hardest...i have unlocked everyone, but Sora...i find re:coded to be the best game i've played....anyways back on topic, you must have a lot of patience with the game. i just don't have that kind of patience.

she's the author, she can write whatever she wants and put in whatever she wants, rofl. just because the yaoi is in there doesn't mean its a bad story. and it's not yaoi unless there's actual, ahem, 'action' going on. boyxboy/girlxgirl/boyxgirl, all are the same and perfectly fine in every story. It's alright...i had stated in 'before i continue on wiht my fanfic stories' that if they had a problem with it that they could openly tell me or pm me about it. i'll be sure to leave those parts out...thank you for your giving me your thoughts rikuluver15....it is part of the fanfic...i will do my best to meet up to your expectations when i continue posting. Again i thank you for being honest with me and will keep this in mind when i post in not only this thread but also the fanfics that involve Demyx.

'be ready for more action'? 'Me' I've been ready for some more action in this book. I think that Math and Myez will have a conversation during their fight. Evas will not find be able to find Shin Zuy and thatTifa and tuvo will find Evas in time to save Shin Zuy. Yufy will be better, but not well enough to fight...and Perlu's plan will FAIL again.

-Yaoi...there's extremely little (just kissing)...but i don't want to take chances.- -info needed... Zexion and Demyx had a small relationship of which had taken place at the end of the long story of the Beginnings...Demyx's fanfic. Demyx had broken it, becuase he was too new in the organization and really didn't know if he was in the closet or not. from here on out...will be the reaction Zexion has towards Demyx (even though Zexion says its someone else that he has an eye on) and his actions on how he deals with problems that Demyx had given him visually. Jealousy is peaking up... but not really showing in Zexion at the present moment.- -Take note: When Zexion is writing in his journal in this confession he is taking lyrics from each song he listens to and turns it into how he would feel if he still had his heart.- Confession #1

there was something strange about the way the gaurd had said 'i believe she had always been this way...ever since she was born'. What did he mean by that?...'ever since she was born'. i'm a really that different from the people i was forced to leave. was i not safe? Did i do something wrong that i don't remember? that's impossible, nothing could possess me. What am i suppose to do, if it is true? As i was pondering this over, they were continue to talk as they walked away...i ran up to catch up to them. "Where will she stay so she won't cause trouble?" the gaurd asked. "I know where she could stay...but from what you tell me about her, he may not want her in the room with him." "Who is the person that she'll be with?" i got caught back up in my thoughts that i didn't get to hear who they were talking about...but isn't bad enough to let me stay with a guy that i don't even know? i shook my head to get the idea out of my mind, then i decided to take out my music player and turned to a song then listened to it. We walked forever, again, it seems like we were walking in circles and getting nowhere fast. Until i ran into the guard that had stopped directly in front of me. i took out an ear bud and looked at him. "this is where you are going to stay...until you clean up your act." my lips parted in shock. "What!?...No, you can't do that to me. i did nothing wrong...why am i even being punished?" i couldn't hold in my rantings anymore. "I'm sorry Ms. Salvera, but those are the rules of which the court had given." "It's Uni to you..mister...and i could just runaway as soon as you leave this crappy community." I asked in a smart alike tone with a huge smile on my face. "If you do runaway...we have wanted posters in each nearby communities, town, and cities...you'll just get caught if you go anywhere." 'anywhere?' i laughed mentally as a smile spread across my face. 'apparently he doesn't know me as well as he thought...'anywhere' according to him will be a civilization. But....in my terms....anywhere was just that...anywhere.' i added to "What are you smirking at?" the guard asked me. "Oh...nothing...i was just thinking." I replied as i entered the tent like home.

I'll be one of those people who will be celebrating Zexikon day with you Zexion's_lover_46...and i can't wait for both the event and the next chapter....but of course you already know that.

"Now...let me show you around. Mr...." He stated as if he wasn't interrupted. "Ashtora Kataline. I'm from Jacasa." "Mr. Kataline...please follow me." "Excuse me sir, but where are we going?" I asked politely still. "Call me Karalenda." 'i would if i knew how to pronounce it' i thought. "It's pronounced Kara-lin-da." he simply stated...as though he heard me thinking. "Could you read minds or something?" "No..." I stopped as we were at the stairs to go somewhere else in the castle. "you're lying..." "No, i'm not lying...you're just to stubborn to realize that i'm telling you the truth." Karalinda replied. I kept my mouth shut as we headed up the stairs. he started telling me what was what, but i wasn't paying attention to him. i was wondering on how i was going to escape from him. He then took me outside and looked at me. "If you're going to escape from here, i might as well let you go....but i hear that there is a giant gummy bear with intellect that's out for revenge." Karalinda answered. I laughed. "There's no such thing as a giant gummy bears. if there is then i might be running back here having it trail behind me. Pffst please....gaint gummy bear...yeah right." i then ran off in the direction that the creature had taken me. that guy had gotten my curiosity up and now got me thinking about if there is really such thing as a gaint gummy bear going around kiiling people for revenge of us eating them. lost in thought i kept on walking not knowing where i'll end up or what will happen. And if there are such things...will the gummy bear let me live or will he kill me like he had with the others? i guess the only way to find out is to find the gummy bear. so i continued in autopilot until i was out sight of the castle and it disappeared over the horizon. that guy i had just meet seems to know everything that is going on. but i don't want take my chances with that guy if there's a gaint gummy bear to be taken care of. besides i already know how to fight...becuase of school and family...so its not like i could defend for myself....becuase i can, people just assume i can't because i don't look like the fighting type, and i'm always ready to prove them wrong. I found my way over to a building that looked like it was built for a scientific purpose. I walked in and found people, scientists, on the floor dead...the horror of it made me sick...but in a good way. Why? Why should death be a joyous thing for me? When I was younger I was squeamish from it. now I'm looking at these dead people and I'm glad? I�ve always wanted to prove that I was a fighter, but even then I shied away from killing people. Has time changed that much? Have I mentally changed that much in that amount of time? I must've, otherwise I would be vomiting right now. I went further in and found more...more of the scientists dead. What happened here? I know that there isn't much to do in a science lab, but had what I'm seeing wasn't from boredom it was a massacre...a massacre for revenge. But whom...? No, it can't be true.I explored the rest of the tomb and found an occupied laboratory. I peeked through the window and found what that guy,Karalendra,had told me. It was a giant gummy bear,it looked like it was operating on some smaller ones. What happened next was...well, I couldn't believe my eyes. He was making the smaller bears bigger...exactly his size. I was shocked beyond words.I like gummy bears, don't get me wrong, but after witnessing this; I won't eat another. With the fear of having one of them and killing me for eating their buddies�I just won't be able to stand that. Now is the time to test if my thought stands corrected. will the gummy bear allow me to live or will it kill me? I guess it depends on how I answer the questions that the bear has for me. But...if I answer correctly, will he treat me like pet or as a slave? I rack my brain trying to think things through, trying to come up with something; that way if I happen to get caught...which is a high possibility right now. Then I need to have cleaver answers if they're going to have cleaver questions. A bear looked my way in the lab, and I quickly ran off away from the door. I heard it open and could feel a pursuit coming on. I must be going mad, if to think that a gummy bear would be chasing me...this would a childish nightmare. I sprinted at the thought of it, and I heard the footsteps quicken...and the nightmare begins. To shake off my pursuer, I took a twisted route to find a vacant room to hide in. But so far, there was none; each room had a gummy bear giving the smaller bears this blue liquid that made them grew three times their size and give them intelligence to match my own. I decided to give up on finding a lab room and started looking for a supply closet or something to that. I pulled another quick turn and literally ran into a supply closet. I got up off the ground and opened the door, then quickly and silently got into it. Closing the door, just enough to make it look like it was closed but it wasn't. If anyone was good at hiding it was me...it makes up for my low esteem on running for miles. I could blend into my surrounding so much, that even if the bear opened this door; he wouldn't find me in here. The footsteps stopped running and started walking cautiously around the area that I was hiding in. I held my breath, now that I had caught it, if I'm not careful about holding my breath I'll pass out...and if that happens then I'll be sure to make some noise; even if it is a small movement like what a mouse would make. When I couldn't hold it anymore, I silently released it and held it again. I heard another set of footsteps then they stopped and a conversation about an intruder... "Which way did he go? did you see him?" one of the gummy bears asked. "No, how did an intruder get in? i thought we had this place secure and free of beings that eats us." the second gummy bear answered. "I have no idea, but it looked like the intruder had run down this way." "Then may be the intruder is still here...but in hiding." i had a feeling that they were looking at me, i then heard more footsteps and they were coming right where i was hiding. they opened up the door, and looked right where i was; but didn't see me...thankfully. "Hang on..." the second gummy bear, which was red, said. "What is it?" the first gummy bear, which was blue, asked. "The intruder is in here...somewhere...i could smell him." i then let out a small breathe, from holding it in, and the blue gummy bear went right in front of where i was exhaling. he felt it. "Got you..." The bear said as he went in further and grabbed a hold on me. he hten threw me on the floor and placed its foot on my chest. "What am i suppose to say...congratulations?" i answered. "Who are you?" the red gummy bear asked. "Ashtora...but you could call me Ash for short." "Goodbye Ash..."THe gummy bear said as he brought up his weapon to kill me. "wait...can i say something first?" i asked as i went to plan b. "What is it that you want to say?" "I want to say..." Crap, what was am i suppose to say"i know what it feels like to be discriminated." nice save. "i could be useful to you..." "How so?" the blue bear asked. "i'm a fast runner and am good at blending in with my surroundings. i could help you by being a spy." "You rather turn your back on your race to help us take revenge?" the red bear asked. "That's right." "have you eaten any of our kind before?" the blue bear asked me. "Last time i had one of you i was six...then i switched over to gummy worms." i told them. "So...may i help?" i asked. the blue bear removed his foot from my chest and lowered his weapon. "We could use a spy that could blend in with our enemy...but what will you say if you get caught?" "they won't suspect me teaming up with you...i'll say that i've been held hostage by someone else. don't worry, i got it covered. you just need to trust me." "then your first assignment is, to go and find the enemy's camp and see what they're up to." i nodded. "I won't let you down...and if i do then you could kill me." i said with a smirk on my face. "you got yourself a deal." the red bear and the blue bear answered. i then walked off towards the entrance of the builing and started to look around to find the enemies base. i had the look of lost and utter confusion on my face to mask my intentions.

Thanks. ...this is actually what had gotten me into writing fanfics. i have another one called Zexion's Confessions that i'll be continue to post as well. ................................................................................................. Chapter 3: stand up The news of him helping Betaleana

i'm glad you like it. it has a lot of chapters, so i hope you won't be disappointed when the last chapter comes out.

this is how i think Demyx had gotten into the Organization. i know it starts off slow but it'll pick up. The Demyx continuum...The beginning Chapter 1: Be yourself Running as fast as he possibly can, Myde runs from yet another fight. Where he ends up, he doesn

Okay, thanks for clearing that up for me...i won't waste my money on buying them, then.

Thanks...okay I will.

Confession...Solo mission: trapped in Illusions of the past Zexion was on a mission on Hollow Bastain. He was ordered to go there and enter the castle that was there to retrieve some items that were left behind. Zexion came out of the darkness and into the lighted area of the world. From where he was standing he was able to see the castle, took another step and heard some commotion coming from it. he then caught a gimpse of a boy running past and into the castle followed by an older man chasing him...apparenty they were playing. He shook his head and they wre gone, not letting it get to him; he went into the castle and entered it. he saw the boy again this time eating ice cream and was with a different man, again Zexion shook his head and they vanished from his sight. Getting a little worried, Zexion hurried or to the lab room. he opened the door and froze. "Superior?" Zexion asked, but the person didn' respond. He then went up to the lab table and the person vanished again. Freaked out, Zexion hurried to get somethings from that room then fled from it. "I want to go outside, Even, please can I go?" Zexion puased as he heard a familiar voice speaking. He turned around and noticed that the boy he had seen earlier was him. "It's too dangerous, Ienzo, you'll get hurt." Another voice, Even', answered him. "I want to go outside." Ienzo started to whine and repeating himself. "No." Ienzo steppped back looking hurt, and then ran off somewhere. Trusting that Ienzo would stay in the castle, Even stayed put. Zexion shook his head again and Even was gone as well. "What is going on?" he asked himself, as he got more freaked out. He then went to the main floor to get somethings that the Superior had asked him to get. He entered another room and went over to the balcony, there he looked down and spotted a boy with red hair and another with blue hair playing around with each other and was having a blast. "Is that...no...it couldn't be...Axel and Saiix?" he jumped down and ran over to them, but they were evaporated into thin air as soon as he got close to them. he turned around in confusion and saw Xigbar coming his way, but he wasn't in his cloak..he also had Xaldin and Lexeaus with him; they two weren't in their cloaks. he then spotted Superior off in the distance in a different outfit on the floor, he ran over to them and was going to ask questions when he saw them turn into vapor and disappear before his eyes. Zexion opened his portal and entered it with the things he had obtained, forgetting the rest of the things he needed to get, and fled to his room with a freaked out loo on his face. Those who passed him in the halls were confused as to what he had done. As he was seeing the people he saw at Hallow Bastain, he slammed his door and locked it. he then flew over to his be and buried his face in the pillow. he screamed in it as another imae flew through his mind. After he was done screaming, he unburied his face and looked arond. he remained silent for some time and then realized that nothing was hapening. he went out of his room and found Lexeaus there... but was wearing something else. Zexion then shut his eyes tight then opened them up again, hoping that Lexeaus would evaporate right in front of him; but only Lexaeus' clothes was replaced with the cloak. "What?" Lexaeus asked. "N-nothing...was there something you wanted to ask me?"Zexion asked. "Xemnas, would like to see you...it's about your mission he sent you on." "Oh...man...I need to finish it...i better go and..." Zexion then trailed off and then shook his head. "I'm going back to finish it...tell him that." He then opened up his portal and left before Lexeaus could say something. Zexion found himself at the castle again, but this time he focused real hard on his mission. He saw weird creatures, some that he had seen before but wasn't sure as to where he had seen them. He got closer and realized that Ienzo was there looking at them defenseless. Then Roxas came running in. "Roxas...?" "Run..." the person told Ienzo. "Roxas i'm fine, I could handle it." Zexion said as he saw Ienzo run somewhere. After the ceatures were defeated, he head Vexen's voice. "Ienzo, where are you? Answer me." Vexen came calling; however he was in a white drench coat instead of his black organization cloak. He then saw Ienzo come running out of his hiding spot and over to Even. Shorty after that had happened, he sw Even thanking and talking to the Roxas replica;then Ienzo and him were headed for the castle. He trailed after them, and he was brought to the laboratory and noticed that Ienzo was tricked into getting into some cylinder type tank. Then Ienzo disappeared and he saw himself in the opposite tank that Ienzo was in. He stood in horror, after a little while he ran out of the room and went into another one that he needed to go t. He gt the remaining items and then opened up his portal to leave. He gave the items to Xemnas, and then fled to his room. When he got there he saw Vexen waiting for him. Zexion then backed up as Vexen got up to meet him, he ran from him. Zexion didn't look back to see if he was being followed. he just ran and shrotly he ran into Axel which then brought them to the floor. "Hey, Zexion, watch where you're going." Zexion didn't reply back to him, but he got up and ran off. Zexion did the same to the other five that he ran into. Once he was outside of he castle he ran over to the willow tree that he had grown accostumed to on their vacation time. He saw Demyx coming out of the castle and over to him. "Hey, Zexion...are you alright?" Demyx asked in a concerned voice. Zexion didn't answer. "What's wrong, Zexion?" "Axel told me once that you knew how to climb trees. Is that true or was he making that up?" Zexion asked to change the subject. "It's true...but what does this have to do with you?" Demyx answered as he got them back in topic. "Can you teach me?" Zexion asked as he stayed on his topic. "Yes, but I want to know what you had gotten into you. You had ran into Axel and five others." "I don't want to talk about that right now...it's a personal issue to deal with." "I see...so you'll be telling Marluxia about this when you are ready to tell him." "If I choose to yes I will...Now about the tree climbing...how hard is it?" "Not hard, just need to remember a few things to know about it for it to come naturally to you though." "Can you teach me how to climb this tree?" "Yeah." After Demyx had shown im how to climb the tree, Demyx left him alone to go somewhere else. Zexion stayed there until he had fallen asleep.

We finished our walk to this strange town that was said to pluhot...oh...why is this happening to me?i just don't see any reason to it. placing me with these--- we came into town...well it looks more like a community than a town...and what a low standard place this is. Anyways, the gaurds directed me through the commnity and were stopped by a person...he looked like someone important. "Is this the suspect from Kanasan?" the person asked. "Yes, this is her." the main guard asnwered. "What is her sentence and where is she sent here instead of somewhere else?" The guard went up to the person and whispered what i had 'supposedly' had done and then they continued in a whispered conversation. i huffed sigh in frustration. "Can we go now to wherever i'm suppose to go?" i asked agitatedly. "she's impatient i see..." the person plainly stated in shock. "Yes, i believe she had always been this way...ever since she was born." the guard had answered. 'wait a minute...what did he say? how would this guard know how i was the moment i was born.' i thought to myself. Meanwhile, somewhere further in the community...

However, what i didn't know was that there was a great threat hidden to me about something that i did not intend. the creatures brought me to the a big open room and left me alone. i started for the door to leave, but someone was already standing there in the way. "Finally..." the person stated, as if he was expecting me for some time. "You have arrived, geat warrior." 'Woa-what? what does he mean warrior? i'm no warrior.' i thought. "I'm sorry..." i said politely. "I'm afraid you have the wrong person. i'm not a warrior." i added. "Ah...but you are...you just don't know it yet. you just need a bit of training to harness your skills with a blade." the person told me. "I am Karalendra...i am the master of this castle and you are to answer to no one but to me. is at understood." I didn't answer and for a long while neither of us said anything. Then without any real reason the doors bursted and someone went up to Kara...something...and whispered in his ear, then the person ran out of the room again.

Wow...that was a shocker! this is getting good...i can't wait until the next chapter comes out. keep it up and at one point you may actaully make me cry while reading. i wasn't expecting Tifah to come out like that and tell Evas the truth like that. that was a nice twist to the story.

O...wow...just...wow.... i loved it. it kept me entertained and wanting more. i loved the fact that you had used hearts for the change of characters. I had found the org 13 parts...epecially Vexen's...to be funny. which is what a story needs for something so serious. you actually caught and held my attention when you were explaining what the story is about. i didn't realize how long the chapter was when you sent it to me, but when i read it it didn't seem to be long at all, becuase my attention was on the story. I had a blast reading the story. it is a true piece of fanfic literature for sure...i loved the fact that you had used first person, becuase well...you are the main character....but using first person makes the reader believe that they are the main character, which is something that i had always loved about literature no matter what kind it is.

You know...i never heard his music, but from the looks of that picture it looks like he was ruining a song. i honestly don't know what to think about this.

there's many diffinitions of love, however that's the beauty of an abstact feeling. the best way for me to tell you what it is, is through a poem that i had written when i was stuck in your position. the poem is called the strongest love in this poem i describe what love means to me...the difinition of Love is what you want it to be...but this is what i had written and i hope that it'll help you out with this situation. the strongest love the strongest love is when someone you love is gone out of your life completely 'till you realize you love them then you don't realize it until it's too late to tell them how you feel about them After you realize it, you burst into tears. then you start saying in a shaky crying voice: "What am I doing?" repeatedly. then wait for an answer but you get nothing the strongest love is when someone sees you when no one else can. the strongest love comes from the weakest heart that is broken in half. then it will never heal until you tell them. the strongest love comes from your strongest feelings that you don't even know existed until you feel them. the strongest love is-is-is when you think about them forever. the strongest love, the strongest love is inside yourself and no one else to find out. ........................... i wrote this my freshmen year of high school so it might be a little bit choppy....i hoped that had helped you. i can't much give you any more on this subject but i hope this had helped with finding the legit difinition.

Agreed...though i do have a mobile, i just don't want my phone to vibrate or to sound everytime someone posts something...each would be all the time...now going mobile for those who have a handheld game system. i could see happening...but then again i probably will find myself back on the compture instead of a game system or phone. i would rather keep it how it is, and besides if people could access this site through their phones already then i say it already has gone mobile....but don't take me seriously on it, becuase i'm just telling how i think it is.

Well... then i guess i'm missing out on a lot of things, becuase i don't own any of the final mixs...i just have the normal ones that are released...and where can i get the final mixs? The USA game stores that i've been going to don't sell any of the final mixs. do i need to speacial order them?..may be i should've had this thread posted in random instead of general.

Shortly after nightfall, I was forced to leave from my home town Kanasan to go to Pluhot. I have no idea where this was or what kind of town it is. Yet all I know is that it is somewhere in the middle of this dead senerary. Anyways, i have gaurds watching me to make sure i don't runaway. i don't even know what i did to deserve this kind of treatment. but, what was it that i do wrong? "How much further?" i asked after we went for miles. "We're going to stop here for the night....we'll pick in the morning." The guard stated as he pitched a tent where we were standing. he then took me by the arm and guided me into the tent. "Go to sleep now." the guard told me as the others took root outside the tent. "Can i change first?" i asked. "Hurry up, then get to bed. we'll be raising early to finish up our travel tomorrow.

Yeah? what is it that you need help with?

Name: Uni Age 19 gender/sex: female ........ My name is Uni, I came from a land that is filled with wonder and beauty...but lately That has turned into nothing from the long drought that had been here since ancient times.though it is said that two people will scheme against the odds to fulfil a long awaited prophecy. Though i am only 5'5", I am very quick and highly intellegent. this story of mine will also be with my friend who will now be introduced...

Now...that i did not know...i knew that his name was revealed in days; but having his name spell out ale...that i did not know.... see i knew posting something like this would work...we learn new things all the time even if it is as old as knowing Axel's real name. Again i was just trying to get out of my boredom...that is the only reason why i started this thread...now can we just get back to being somewhat friends? Apparently there are people who don't know this or they are messing with me; but already six people said that they didn't know this fact. and one of them said that they might know it...so apparently this thread is working.