Rules:

No fanfiction allowed

No profanity

and No racial, sexual, or other wise controversial objects

 

Judge: Zexion's_Lover_46(anyone who wants to call me ZL that's fine with me )

 

Round 1:

pairings are as follows:

 

Antium vs Butterflylexi

 

SK3 vs Ivan-chan

 

Sorage55 vs Gizelita

 

Sarrin vs -Ventus-

 

Hinako_U vs DemyxLovesCookies

 

Guidlines:

Participants are suppose to write a poem OR short story.

Short Stories can be no longer then two paragraphs.

Once all the participants have submitted I will determine the winners of round one. The winners of round one will move on to round two and I will pair them up. This will continue until there is only one winner left.

There are three rounds in all.

Everybody have fun and good luck!

Round one begins now...

You put me against the one person I can't beat?

 

[align=center]Fallen far, lost from grace.

 

Banned without abandonment

You promised to care

 

Your love washes over

A cloak of sparkle and wonder

 

Your splendor, You're my Hero

You're coming to save me

 

Without You, I'm nothing

Without You, we're alone

 

Without You, there's no purpose

Without You, there's no love

 

You're my Savoiur

You're coming back to save us

 

I am not on my own

You will be my Hero. [/align]

 

((This was about God, if it didn't make sense ^^))

In day I am man...

At night an animal...

So peaceful in the light...

So shattered in dark...

I tried to keep it at bay, but when darkness veils the earth...

The Animal comes out, the carnage begins...

Only you and you alone can save me from this Animal...

Give me redemption from the beast and cleanse this sinful soul...

Stop this Animal and show me the man I am...

So I can be the man I need to be... Save me from this Animal...

Oh Lord among lords, please save me from this Animal.

(I'm screwed ._. Gah. Ivan's gonna murder me)

 

Empty I am, or empty I was.

When was I ever full?

All of the emotions have been drained from my body.

Like a mosquito, the world pierced my skin, and drained the only thing that gives me life.

Hope.

 

Now I walk a path of pain. I swim in an ocean of tears.

I live in a forest of sorrow. And I'll die with remorse.

Remorse from a mistake that I've made.

I regret that I didn't say three words. Three words that could have saved my soul.

Three words that could've brought me happiness.

Then again, nobody has told me these three words either.

These words can build and break a person. These words...these words are lies.

"I love you".

 

(I failed, you can X my name off the list lol)

In day I am man...

At night an animal...

So peaceful in the light...

So shattered in dark...

I tried to keep it at bay, but when darkness veils the earth...

The Animal comes out, the carnage begins...

Only you and you alone can save me from this Animal...

Give me redemption from the beast and cleanse this sinful soul...

Stop this Animal and show me the man I am...

So I can be the man I need to be... Save me from this Animal...

Oh Lord among lords, please save me from this Animal.

 

The winner between Antrium and Lexi is Antrium.

Good job, Antrium ^^ What did I tell you?

You did awesome, Lexi! Thanks for judging Zexion and I will see ya all next round.

Hmm, since I make up poems at split-second intervals, this should prove a useful challenge against the witty Gizelita:

 

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As You Can See:

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As you can see,

The Angels free,

Amongst the Heavens,

Dancing Sevens,

 

I look to those skies,

With my shining eyes,

That Angel flies,

After he dies,

 

There is a tear,

From my eye,

Because that Angel,

Had fly,

 

But I cry no more,

That Angel God had bore,

 

Down to Earth,

Back again,

The Angel bounced,

Without a sin,

 

Shining Sun,

Through the clouds,

Rising flames,

Roaring crowds,

 

Pillars of Earth,

Break from the ground,

Rising to the Heavens,

With their rocky sounds,

 

Demons circle like scavenging hoards,

Drinking blood from skin-tattered Gourds,

Laughing Banshees scream in delight,

At the soul who had died right in my sights,

 

I rise above the clouds in a most blessed manner,

I was hugged and greeted without fear,

That child walks up after the judging hammer,

"Finally, my Destin, your Uncle Kevin is here."

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(This poem was dedicated to my dear nephew Destin, the poor soul. He was too young to die.)

Bwwaaaaaah, I'm sorry for taking a long time to post! I finished my poem late last night and forgot to post it. And, yeah, I fail for using my history homework as my entry. (It was either take notes or write a poem using ten facts from the section we were reading Guillotines, yaaay , which explains the length of it). So, here it is.

 

Red Moon

 

A hooded man stared at the sky, taking in the full red moon.

Scarred hands rubbed the now shortened hair on his head.

It wouldn

Bwwaaaaaah, I'm sorry for taking a long time to post! I finished my poem late last night and forgot to post it. And, yeah, I fail for using my history homework as my entry. (It was either take notes or write a poem using ten facts from the section we were reading Guillotines, yaaay , which explains the length of it). So, here it is.

 

Red Moon

 

A hooded man stared at the sky, taking in the full red moon.

Scarred hands rubbed the now shortened hair on his head.

It wouldn

Noteeee: Wowzas...Maybe I'm more emo than I thought. o.o;; Anywayssss, I so was not listening to Silent Hill music while I wrote this. Nope. Definitely not. I intended to write a HAPPY story, but ended up with this weird little thing. -w- It's sort of...odd, to say the least, but I think it turned out good. Koko's still going to PWN me though. .w. The simple sentences/unusual structure were supposed to create a sort of surreal feeling, but I think I failed at doing that. ;;

In case you don't get it

it's supposed to be about insanity's effect on the human mind.

Yeah, I'm so not morbid at all.

----

 

 

It

 

Venny told me to write about snow. I wrote about dying in a snowstorm. It's symbollic in a way.

 

 

[align=center]Falling down

Like frozen tears

Cold wind

Strong, harsh wind

Practically biting at my skin

Fingers gone numb

Collapsing into the white blanket underneath

And staring into...

Into nothingness?

Is that what this never ending white espansion is called?

Nothingness?

Arms gone numb

I'm loosing feeling

Can't feel anything

Can't move

Don't want to move

Don't dare move

Should I cry out?

Cry out for help?

Not like any one would hear me

Legs gone numb

Body gone numb

Can't feel

Can't feel a thing

They keep falling

The snowflakes

My body

Covered in snow

Eyes slipping close

Can't feel

Can't breath

Deep sleep

Forever deep sleep[/align]

 

Hope this is fine

 

edit: Just saw DemDem's post

Dammit I'm screwed

[align=center]Falling down

Like frozen tears

Cold wind

Strong, harsh wind

Practically biting at my skin

Fingers gone numb

Collapsing into the white blanket underneath

And staring into...

Into nothingness?

Is that what this never ending white espansion is called?

Nothingness?

Arms gone numb

I'm loosing feeling

Can't feel anything

Can't move

Don't want to move

Don't dare move

Should I cry out?

Cry out for help?

Not like any one would hear me

Legs gone numb

Body gone numb

Can't feel

Can't feel a thing

They keep falling

The snowflakes

My body

Covered in snow

Eyes slipping close

Can't feel

Can't breath

Deep sleep

Forever deep sleep[/align]

 

Hope this is fine

 

edit: Just saw DemDem's post

Dammit I'm screwed

 

This was the hardest one to determine the winner. I thought both were written well but after much thought the winner between DemyxLovesCookies and Hinako_U is Hinako_U

 

[align=center]Falling down

Like frozen tears

Cold wind

Strong, harsh wind

Practically biting at my skin

Fingers gone numb

Collapsing into the white blanket underneath

And staring into...

Into nothingness?

Is that what this never ending white espansion is called?

Nothingness?

Arms gone numb

I'm loosing feeling

Can't feel anything

Can't move

Don't want to move

Don't dare move

Should I cry out?

Cry out for help?

Not like any one would hear me

Legs gone numb

Body gone numb

Can't feel

Can't feel a thing

They keep falling

The snowflakes

My body

Covered in snow

Eyes slipping close

Can't feel

Can't breath

Deep sleep

Forever deep sleep[/align]

 

Hope this is fine

 

edit: Just saw DemDem's post

Dammit I'm screwed

 

This was the hardest one to determine the winner. I thought both were written well but after much thought the winner between DemyxLovesCookies and Hinako_U is Hinako_U

 

Seee? I said Koko was gonna win. x3 Congrats, luv~ 8D

The winners so far are:

Ivan-chan

Hinako_U

Antrium

 

The only one's left who need to submit are:

Gizelita

-Ventus-

Sarrin

Let's go! I can't wait for round two!

 

-Ventus-

 

 

Here goes.

 

"..."

Smile attempted.

Failed.

Half broken? No.

I never wanted to be like this.

Had It of been my choice? Or is it under control.

Life Has a style of chance.

 

Wither or rather fake, I don

The blessing of Death

ok heres my best shot ventus!

 

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"Hope" is a thing with feathers

That perches in the soul

And sings the tune without the words

And never stops at all,

 

And the sweetest gale is heard;

And sore must be the storm

That could abash the little feathers

That kept so many warm.

 

I've heard it in the chillest land

And on the strangest sea,

Yet never, in extremity,

It asked safety of me.

 

Hope abides; therefore I abide.

Countless frustrations have not harmed me.

I am still alive, vibrant with life.

The black cloud will disappear,

The morning sun will appear once again

With the feathers joining as wings.

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I think you can assume wat its about~

May the best win!

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sorry to be so late in the running its just how school is right?

 

-Ventus-

 

 

Here goes.

 

"..."

Smile attempted.

Failed.

Half broken? No.

I never wanted to be like this.

Had It of been my choice? Or is it under control.

Life Has a style of chance.

 

Wither or rather fake, I don

SORRY! I double posted by accident. Plz, don't kill me

Hmm, since I make up poems at split-second intervals, this should prove a useful challenge against the witty Gizelita:

 

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As You Can See:

----------------------

 

As you can see,

The Angels free,

Amongst the Heavens,

Dancing Sevens,

 

I look to those skies,

With my shining eyes,

That Angel flies,

After he dies,

 

There is a tear,

From my eye,

Because that Angel,

Had fly,

 

But I cry no more,

That Angel God had bore,

 

Down to Earth,

Back again,

The Angel bounced,

Without a sin,

 

Shining Sun,

Through the clouds,

Rising flames,

Roaring crowds,

 

Pillars of Earth,

Break from the ground,

Rising to the Heavens,

With their rocky sounds,

 

Demons circle like scavenging hoards,

Drinking blood from skin-tattered Gourds,

Laughing Banshees scream in delight,

At the soul who had died right in my sights,

 

I rise above the clouds in a most blessed manner,

I was hugged and greeted without fear,

That child walks up after the judging hammer,

"Finally, my Destin, your Uncle Kevin is here."

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(This poem was dedicated to my dear nephew Destin, the poor soul. He was too young to die.)

 

And the winner between Sorage55 and Gizelita is Sorage55

 

The winners that are going to round two are as follows:

Antrium

Ivan-chan

Sorage55

Hinako_U

and -Ventus-

guess i lost~

But you were also great Sar, but I guess you're like me, we're better at novels than short stories or poetry.

My apologies to those whom have lost. My empathies.

For all the people who lost... I LOVE YA! You don't have to fight these guys *Looks towards Soreage55* Holy crap I'm screwed

My apologies to Antrium as well, apparently.