Posted September 18, 201015 yr im black the night im bight like the sun im red like fire im brown like the earth im all the colors that are met to be im like the elements who fight im like the stars that shine in the night. im like the moon that sends light on the earth im like the world that lifes the people Hope you like it
September 18, 201015 yr Author Your like a rose that booms in summer. Your like the light because your the shine in my eyes Your like the heart i never had Your like the crow and im like the raven who love darkness.
September 18, 201015 yr Author you me we r the same the winter is like the snow we never had the rain is god crying the summer is heilos the sun god turning up the heat The cold is like the ice titan the god and titans are the same
September 18, 201015 yr Try using correct spelling and grammer. Ex.: you me we r the same You and me; we are the same. Also, if speaking religiously, like about God in Heaven, "God" would be capatalized. What's the point of this last one? It sounds like you're talking about the Lightning Theif, but then it stops making sense to me..
September 18, 201015 yr Your like a rose that booms in summer. Your like the light because your the shine in my eyes Your like the heart i never had Your like the crow and im like the raven who love darkness. It's "you're like" not "your like" you me we r the same the winter is like the snow we never had the rain is god crying the summer is heilos the sun god turning up the heat The cold is like the ice titan the god and titans are the same Some capitalization would be nice please im black the night im bight like the sun im red like fire im brown like the earth im all the colors that are met to be im like the elements who fight im like the stars that shine in the night. im like the moon that sends light on the earth im like the world that lifes the people Hope you like it Capitalization on the "I's" are needed and you need to use apostrophoes in between I and m. Look, we're not making fun of you. If you cannot take one ounce of criticsism, then don't write Everyone takes criticsism. Not everyone is perfect. I'm not perfect, Paopufruity is not perfect, lexi is not perfect, LazorKittehs is not perfect, Auroras is not perfect and you are not perfect. I understand that, but just because that your not perfect, doesn't mean that you can just abuse the language of English in a bad way. And also that "texting excuse" can fool some people, but it doesn't fool me. The texting excuse is just completely ridiculous. This is a formal fourm. I quite honestly think you're just being lazy. Look, improve your grammar, spelling, don't use the texting excuse and then maybe I'll actually like your writing. Once again, this is criticsism. Do not take it so seriously. /end criticsism.
im black the night
im bight like the sun
im red like fire
im brown like the earth
im all the colors that are met to be
im like the elements who fight
im like the stars that shine in the night.
im like the moon that sends light on the earth
im like the world that lifes the people
Hope you like it