Ok i have started writing an essay for school about anything i want to write about. so i thought this was the best time to write my own story for Vanitas. sound cool ami right? well anyways i have til summer vacation to finish it and i would love to update the chapters on this Forum. Right now i can put up chapters 1 and 2 case thats all i have at the moment. tell me what yall think about this. here are chapters 1 and 2....
Kingdom hearts: The mask of fear
By: Jacob Pulido
Part 1- Training
Chapter 1: Birth
“Please don’t do this master?!? I’m not strong enough” a boy cried out surrounded by a dozen dark creatures.
“No boy,” a man with a deep growl voice said “it is because you are trying to hold it in. Let the dark impulses waken in the pit of your heart. Release them, here and now! Sharpen your fear into rage.”
The boy began to freak now that the creatures had multiplied. “You must,” the man continued “If you don’t let the storm within you run its course, it’ll wipe you from the face of the world. Make no mistake! Do it. Embrace the darkness. Produce for your master the χ-blade!”
The creatures attacked the boy, and still he refused to fight with his key shaped sword, and was then trampled by the many creatures that pounded him to the ground. The man slowly walked toward him in despair. He didn’t find his pupil have the single slither of bravery within him.
“Really? You would rather die than use the power? Useless puppet.” The man kicked the boy over onto his back. “If I must….I will extract the darkness from within you myself.” The man summoned his key like sword similar to the boys. He then aimed the blade at the boys’ chest and used some weird magical power to suck the darkness out of him, bringing him back to life in the process.
From the darkness removed from the boys’ heart I began to form. I uncurled from the dark impulses of the boys’ heart and stood before the man. “Empty creature from Ventus riven, to you, the name Vanitas shall be given.” I looked down at the boy and saw him breathing heavily. Then I returned my attention back to the man. “Yes, Master.” I said to him with a smirk smile.
Chapter 2: Learning
The man brought the boy and me to his little so called hangout area. The place seemed pretty duh and dark. Not a slither of light was found in the room. Aside from all the smells and soda cans all over the floor, it was pretty roomy and big enough to have a party with every being in the world.
The man turned to me carrying the boy, Ventus, like a baby. “Make yourself comfortable” the man said to me. “Where are you going” I asked him. “To drop this boy off with my friend Eraqus” he replied. “I’ll be back soon and explain things to you” he told me. I nodded. The man left without looking back, and I stood there, motionless, until he returned.
“I never truly introduced myself” the man said “My name is Xehanort, but you will refer to me as Master, understood” I nodded. “Yes master” I said to him.
Xehanort began to explain to me about Ventus and why he was so important. “I found him as an empty shackle,” he began “he had no heart or reason to be here in the first place, a puppet, something that somebody created. Then one day I carried him around world to world looking for an empty world perfect enough to place him down. When I almost lost hope I remembered my home island, it was always empty and like a prison surrounded by water. That was the perfect place to leave him. I placed him down and began to walk away when out of no where he summoned his Keyblade when still in a deep slumber. That’s when it hit me. A boy that had the power to use a Keyblade, oh what I would give to have a pupil with that kind of power could help me succeed in my plan.”
“But master?” I began “why did you take him to Eraqus if he was to be of use to you?” I asked him. Xehanort sighed. “Oh Vanitas, Ventus never chose to use the power of darkness. I couldn’t have a Keyblade wielder who holds power over light on my side. In fact…” Xehanort looked at me with a grin. “You hold half of what Ventus is. You’re his darkness. Surely you hold the same power?” I saw where he was getting at, then suddenly a dark shroud appeared on my hand and a Keyblade appeared right before our eyes.
“Ahh,” Xehanort smiled “I guess this plan may work after all” He stared at me with a devious smile and then back at my Keyblade. “What is your plan Master?” I asked him. He stood there and I couldn’t really tell what his facial expression meant. “To the training room” he commanded me.
More are on there way ill post them up as soon as i can. peace out.
Ok i have started writing an essay for school about anything i want to write about. so i thought this was the best time to write my own story for Vanitas. sound cool ami right? well anyways i have til summer vacation to finish it and i would love to update the chapters on this Forum. Right now i can put up chapters 1 and 2 case thats all i have at the moment. tell me what yall think about this. here are chapters 1 and 2....
Kingdom hearts: The mask of fear
By: Jacob Pulido
Part 1- Training
Chapter 1: Birth
“Please don’t do this master?!? I’m not strong enough” a boy cried out surrounded by a dozen dark creatures.
“No boy,” a man with a deep growl voice said “it is because you are trying to hold it in. Let the dark impulses waken in the pit of your heart. Release them, here and now! Sharpen your fear into rage.”
The boy began to freak now that the creatures had multiplied. “You must,” the man continued “If you don’t let the storm within you run its course, it’ll wipe you from the face of the world. Make no mistake! Do it. Embrace the darkness. Produce for your master the χ-blade!”
The creatures attacked the boy, and still he refused to fight with his key shaped sword, and was then trampled by the many creatures that pounded him to the ground. The man slowly walked toward him in despair. He didn’t find his pupil have the single slither of bravery within him.
“Really? You would rather die than use the power? Useless puppet.” The man kicked the boy over onto his back. “If I must….I will extract the darkness from within you myself.” The man summoned his key like sword similar to the boys. He then aimed the blade at the boys’ chest and used some weird magical power to suck the darkness out of him, bringing him back to life in the process.
From the darkness removed from the boys’ heart I began to form. I uncurled from the dark impulses of the boys’ heart and stood before the man. “Empty creature from Ventus riven, to you, the name Vanitas shall be given.” I looked down at the boy and saw him breathing heavily. Then I returned my attention back to the man. “Yes, Master.” I said to him with a smirk smile.
Chapter 2: Learning
The man brought the boy and me to his little so called hangout area. The place seemed pretty duh and dark. Not a slither of light was found in the room. Aside from all the smells and soda cans all over the floor, it was pretty roomy and big enough to have a party with every being in the world.
The man turned to me carrying the boy, Ventus, like a baby. “Make yourself comfortable” the man said to me. “Where are you going” I asked him. “To drop this boy off with my friend Eraqus” he replied. “I’ll be back soon and explain things to you” he told me. I nodded. The man left without looking back, and I stood there, motionless, until he returned.
“I never truly introduced myself” the man said “My name is Xehanort, but you will refer to me as Master, understood” I nodded. “Yes master” I said to him.
Xehanort began to explain to me about Ventus and why he was so important. “I found him as an empty shackle,” he began “he had no heart or reason to be here in the first place, a puppet, something that somebody created. Then one day I carried him around world to world looking for an empty world perfect enough to place him down. When I almost lost hope I remembered my home island, it was always empty and like a prison surrounded by water. That was the perfect place to leave him. I placed him down and began to walk away when out of no where he summoned his Keyblade when still in a deep slumber. That’s when it hit me. A boy that had the power to use a Keyblade, oh what I would give to have a pupil with that kind of power could help me succeed in my plan.”
“But master?” I began “why did you take him to Eraqus if he was to be of use to you?” I asked him. Xehanort sighed. “Oh Vanitas, Ventus never chose to use the power of darkness. I couldn’t have a Keyblade wielder who holds power over light on my side. In fact…” Xehanort looked at me with a grin. “You hold half of what Ventus is. You’re his darkness. Surely you hold the same power?” I saw where he was getting at, then suddenly a dark shroud appeared on my hand and a Keyblade appeared right before our eyes.
“Ahh,” Xehanort smiled “I guess this plan may work after all” He stared at me with a devious smile and then back at my Keyblade. “What is your plan Master?” I asked him. He stood there and I couldn’t really tell what his facial expression meant. “To the training room” he commanded me.
More are on there way ill post them up as soon as i can. peace out.