Hate

Hate is a powerful thing
It moves, it feels,
It tastes, it touches
And yet,
It doesn't bother me
Cause you can hate me
All you want
But I'm still gonna be
Me

So go ahead
Hate me,
I'm still breathing
Go ahead
Cut me,
I ain't bleeding
I'm just gonna stay here
Being me
Cause you can't touch me
It ain't meant to be
You're only hurting you
You ain't hurting me

fool. You make it look like hate is bad or something.

like it!

.....no not good not good at all.....it.....is....AWSOME!I LOVE IT!!!

fool. You make it look like hate is bad or something.

 

I completely agree. Give master Xemnas a medal.

fool. You make it look like hate is bad or something.

 

I didn't say you had to like it.....And if you've been thru as much Hate as I have then You'd understand it....I'm not TRYING to be mean...I'm just being Truthful

 

.....no not good not good at all.....it.....is....AWSOME!I LOVE IT!!!

 

Thx khgirl4ever:D.... I'm glad you liked it

Eh, I like how you made it poetic, and i really like the message you're trying to give, but to make it look more professional, replacing "ain't" for "isn't" and making the text more formal could be useful.