okies sooo my freind bet me i couldnt make a movie to this song and a drawing....(since its not exactly my tyle and a bit dark for kh).... basicly its about this guy who murders is girlfreind and she comes back from the dead and murders him (verry basic) its by avenged sevenfold and is called a little peice of heven

 

heres the doodle i did

 

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Um.

I think I know what song you're talking about. I saw a CMV about it. The drawing's okay, but more detail and effort could have gone into that background, in my opinion.

I think what you really need to work on is the blood...it doesn't look natural enough. The background and proportions look like they could use a little work as well.

I think I know what song you're talking about. I saw a CMV about it. The drawing's okay, but more detail and effort could have gone into that background, in my opinion.

 

 

I think what you really need to work on is the blood...it doesn't look natural enough. The background and proportions look like they could use a little work as well.

 

thanks i will try to work on that^^ ive gotten a lot better.. its actually from middle school a doodle i did at lunch.. so i didnt honestly put much time into it=p but i really like comments back so i know what to improve on^^ so thanks^^