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-Prologue-
If you didn't read the first story, then here's a little recap. A boy name Rui is number 21 in a agency of the city Nova. The agency is called Brotherhood. During the once a year Runble, Crow attacked the arena. Rui fought him, but lost. After two weeks, Rui and his friends attacked his castle. There, a battle was fought. Rui couldn't stop Number Zero awakening. Rui and his friends then followed them to Nova. There Rui used Bankai and defeated Crow and then fought Zero. A strange thing took control of Rui and defeated Zero. There, after the battle, number 5, Luke. Attacked Rui and fought Yamamoto and left. Now, it's been a month and Rui and his friends train to fight Luke.

Chapter 1
Rui was sitting on a bench at the park. He was thinking about what happened with Luke. A lot of things happened during the one month. Gin, turned out to be a serect Brotherhood spy. He is now number 5. Rui didn't like the idea. He then got up and started walking towards his house until a man stop him. The man with long white hair, green eyes, sword on his back, wearing a black coat, and he is about 6.5 inches tall. Rui looked at him strange.'' Who are you asked?''Rui asked as he reached for his blade, but forget he didn't have it on him.

'' Is that anyway to greet a follow member? It's me, Kokayo.''the man said as he showed his Brotherhood badge. He was number 3.'' What do you want?''asked Rui.'' What I want is to help you. It seems you have something inside you.''said Kokayo as he pointed at Rui. Rui then remebered his battle with Zero. The thing that was controling him. The thing that defeated Zero even though Rui couldn't do it.'' Yes... That's why I don't train my Bankai. I'm afaid it'll take over again.''said Rui as he looked down.'' I can help you. I can help you control it.''said Kokayo as he started walking away.'' Follow me.'' he said. Rui then started following him.

They arrived at a warehouse.'' What are we doing here?''asked Rui.'' This is where were going to train.''said Kokayo as he opened the door. There were two other people. One was sitting down and the other was leaning against the wall. The one sitting down had short white hair, red eyes, two swords on his back, and he wore a brotherhood outfit. The one leaning had a sword on his back, blonde hair, yellow eyes, and he was also wearing a brotherhood outfit.'' This is Gerivous and the other is Ukaite.''said Kokayo as he said the one leaning was Gerivous and the other was Ukaite.

'' Seems you bought him. That's good. We can now begin.''said Gerivous as he started walking up to Rui.'' It seems you never seen us. Well, I couldn't blame you.''said Kokayo as he sat down in a chair.'' Why are you guys together?''asked Rui.'' We are like you. We also have that demon inside you. It's called a Hollow, but sometimes it might give itself a name.''said Kokayo as he started reading a book.'' We bought you here so we can have gain control over it.''said Gerivous as he drew his blade.'' Let's see if it'll take control if I fight you. I am number 4. Stronger then Luke and Gin.''said Gerivous as he then rushed to Rui. Rui knew he had to fight, but with what since he didn't have his blade, Rui then felt darkness cover his eyes. Then, anything went blank.

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Chapter 24

Rui saw the green aura fall on him like green rain. He then looked up at Ulquiorra's location. His eyes widened as he saw his release form. He gained large black bat wings on his back, his hair became longer and wilder, and the remains of his Hollow mask centers atop his head, with two large horns extending outward to the sides towards the front. The lines on his face became black, broader and more triangular and his fingernails lengthen. His Arrancar attire becomes more form fitting and closed at the top, becoming more like a robe towards the bottom. Rui stared as Ulquiorra then had a green spear be formed.'' Stay focus, keep your guard up, stay fully alert. If you drop your guard for even a single moment, or you'll die.''said Ulquiorra as he then appeared next to Rui with his spear at his neck. A green colored explosion happened and Ulquiorra stood behind Rui, who was kneeling and panting.'' Hm...seems you manage to use Getsuga Tensho to block my attack, but it wasn't enough.''said Ulquiorra as Rui's upper part of his mask was gone. Ulquiorra stared at Rui.' I....didn't think he was this strong.' thought Rui as he saw Ulquiorra then threw the spear. Rui looked carefully and dodged it and looked at it for a second as a second spear gazed him on shoulder. Rui tryed to regained balance by stabeing the ground with his sword. He then fixed his mask as he saw Ulquiorra get another spear and flew right to him and clashed weapons with him forceing Rui to back away.'' Rui, your mask allows you to fight par with the espada's. Hit me with Getsuga Tensho if it really is your strongest move. I'll show you the difference in our Strength.''said Ulquiorra as Rui made him get away. Ulquiorra got higher in the sky.'' Don't tell me to use my own attacks!''yelled Rui as he had white and red aura form around his blade.'' Testa Getsuga Tensho!''yelled Rui as he fired the slash. Ulquiorra blocked it and deflected easily.'' As I thought.''said Ulquiorra as he then made the remains of the slash disappear with a swing of his wings.'' Your still stuck at Human level. Your Getsuga is similar to our Cero.''Ulquiorra said.'' Cero? Don't compare that cero to me.''said Rui.'' Of course, you haven't seen yet. This is the cero we espada's use in our release form.''said Ulquiorra as he then had a black cero be formed at his finger tip.'' Cero Oscuras.''said Ulquiorra as he fired it at Rui and hit. Rui tried to withstand it, but his mask shattered as a dark green explosion occur as the Cero hit.

Scar and Shadow were destroying the hollows as Cody was dealing with Yammy.'' Hmph. Seems you have gotten stronger. Is this because you fought Apollo?''asked Yammy as he drew his blade and clashed weapons with Cody. They then felt the great energy from Ulquiorra's and Rui's battle.'' Wha-what's happening up there?''asked Shadow as he killed another Hollow.'' Seems he wants it to be over.''said Yammy as he kept fighting Cody. Scar got passed the Hollows and rushed to Yammy with a Senki blade and clashed it against Yammys. Yammy smiled and deflected and was stabed by Shadow. He yelp in little pain.'' Ya are starting to make me mad he said.'' as he got all three of them away.'' Come on. Just keep on getting mad. It's working very well.''said Yammy as he then had more hollows appear.'' I'm not losing to ya!'' he yelled as he sended the Hollows at the others. Scar and the others got ready to fight. They knew they couldn't lose.'' Let's go!''yelled Shadow as he and the others then rushed towards to the hollows ready to fight.

Rui was falling from a big smoke screen. His shirt part of his bankai was gone, jurt his right sleeve was there. His pants part was ruined to. He tried to regain his balance until Ulquiorra then appeared infront of him and was hit by his wing and sended to pillar. Rui was barely standing.'' Humans. They are the lesser beings. They think they can be equal to Hollows if they gain Hollow powers, but they are wrong. Human's who try to gain Hollow powers are just trash like the rest of the Humans.''said Ulquiorra as he stood infront of Rui. Rui held his blade in both hands.'' Getsuga-''said Rui.'' I told you it's wrothless.''said Ulquiorra as he then hit Rui though the the pillar. Rui was flying in the sky. Ulquiorra flew next to him. He saw Rui still had his sword in his hand. Ulquiorra then hit him towards another pillar and held Rui by the remains of his shirt.'' Who don't you drop your sword? Clearly you see the huge difference between our strength.''said Ulquiorra. Rui lifted up his blade a little.'' Who...cares who's stronger. I knew you were strong from the start. But do you think I'll give up even if your stronger then me? I'll...defeat you...Ulquiorra.''said Rui. Ulquiorra then got a little anger and then threw Rui to a rock.'' Those are words of a man that'll say if he faced true dispair.''said Ulquiorra as he then had green aura form around him.'' Allow me to show you true dispair.''said Ulquiorra as the green aura covered him and Rui stared in horror.

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\Chapter 25

Rui stared as the green aura then faded away as he stared at Ulquiorra.'' Resurreccion,Segunda Etapa.''said Ulquiorra as he still had his black wings, his long white coat is gone, revealing a more defined musculature with his chest bare and Hollow hole, dripping black, blood-like liquid. His waist becomes covered in something similar to black fur, which also covers his arms and legs. His fingers grow claw-like extensions and his feet become like talons. The irises of his eyes turn yellow while the sclera becomes green. The tear-like marks under his eyes increase in size and turn black. Ulquiorra's mask is now completely gone, he has taken a appearence almost to a bat. He has two bat-like ears on his head.'' I am the only Espada who has achieved a second release. Not even lord Luke has seen me in this form.''said Ulquiorra as he saw Rui standing up with the help of his blade.'' Dispise this, you still have the will to fight?''asked Ulquiorra as he saw Rui shaking.' He's not confused. He still feels the fear. Yet, he still thinks he can win after seeing this?' thought Ulquiorra. Ulquiorra then got in a fighting stance, by placeing one hand on the ground ready to attack.'' Very well. Even if I have to turn your body to dust to make you...understand!''yelled Ulquiorra as he went in for an attack. Rui was ready for it until Ulquiorra had his hand on Rui's head. Ulquiorra then pushed him into a pillar. Rui crashed into it and Ulquiorra watched it. He saw Rui standing. Ulquiorra then drived in and Rui tryed to attack, but Ulquiorra dodged. Ulquiorra then grabbed his blade and he then had his tail hit Rui. Rui got on a piece of rubble and jumped in the air and had his hollow mask summoned. Ulquiorra then punched Rui in the chest that sended him flying into the air some more.'' Your a fool Rui. You hope to defeat me, yet it makes you feel fear.''said Ulquiorra as he then hit Rui's face and made his mask break and send him flying into another pillar. He stayed in the air and saw Rui on a piece of rubble.'' If you are doing this because you have a soul, then you will die because of your soul.''said Ulquiorra. Rui then rose his blade.'' I'm not fighting because I want to win. I'm fighting because I have and need to win. I'll defeat you Ulquiorra.''said Rui as he smiled at Ulquiorra.'' Nonsense.''said Ulquioraa as he then flew towards Rui.

Cody and the others were defeating the Hollows until they sensed Ulquiorra's second release. Yammy sensed it as well.'' Huh? Whatever's going on up there, your face is toast. He can't defeat Ulquiorra, just like ya can't defeat me.''said Yammy as he then saw smoke and saw Scar's Zabimaru's bankai.'' Take this.''said Scar as it then fired a red blast towards Yammy. It hit him and sended him flying towards the tower. Shadow looked up and saw the hole. He then started flying up there.'' Wait Shadow!"'said Scar as he was about to follow until Yammy appeared in front of him.'' He's dead, just like ya.''said Yammy as he sended a punch towards them.

Shadow kept flying and got though the hole and made it to the roof of Las Noches. He had Nel on his back.'' I'm...gonna heal Rui just incase.''she said.'' Fine. Just stay safe.''said Shadow as he started running until he felt wind on his back and he saw Ulquiorra on top of a pillar with Rui being hold by the neck with Ulquiorra's tail. He then turned and saw Shadow and Nel.'' Hm. Seems your friends have made it to late. Now watch ya two as the man ya thought will save Nova and defeat Luke die in front of ya's very eyes.''said Ulquiorra as he powered up a Cero Oscuras on his finger tip and fired though Rui's chest causeing a big hole to appear.

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Chapter 26

Nel and Shadow saw in horror as Ulquiorra as then unwraped Rui and watched his body fall on the ground. Nel started running towards him. Then Ulquiorra then appeared in front of her.'' It's no use. No matter how strong your healing powers, he's out of your reach.''said Ulquiorra. Then, Shadow appeared behind Ulquiorra and threw his sycthes at him. Ulquiorra dodged them and Shadow then started running towards Ulquiorra and tried to attack him.'' Nel. Take care of Rui. We need him healed.''said Shadow as he then had his hand up.'' Hado 31, Red flame cannon.''said Shadow as he started firing red blasts at Ulquiorra. Ulquiorra then appeared behind Shadow and hit him with hi wing towards a pillar. Shadow then got up.'' If I attack him from a distant. I'll be fine.''said Shadow as Ulquiorra then grabbed his right arm.'' So, it's this arm,;;said Ulquiorra as there was a snapped heard.

Nel had the orange sheild form around Rui as she was healing him.'' Rui...please be alive. We need you.''she said as she had tears fall down her face. Shadow then hit the ground with his right arm broken.'' Nel, don't worry about me. Just handle Rui.''he said as he had his blade in his left hand and he started running towards Ulquiorra who just hit Shadow with his tail. Shadow fell on the ground as he couldn't fight anymore. Nel had more tears fall down her face.'' Rui...we need you. Please, come and save us. Please. Beat Ulquiorra like you did to Grimmjow. Please. Please. Please. Please. Please. Please. Please.''said Nel as she had a sheild form over Shadow, but Ulquiorra destroyed it with his tail.'' I...Just don't know what to do. Please save us.''said Nel as she had more tears run down her face.'' Save us! Rui!''said Nel as Rui's hair then got longer. Rui's mind was seeing what was going on. He then ehard Nel call out to him.'' She's calling out.'' he thought.'' She's calling out to me.''thought Rui as he tried to move his hand.'' Get up! Get up! Get up! Get up! Get up!''thought Rui as his hand grabbed the ground as red and black aura started forming around him.'' I'll.....I'll...I'll protect all of you!''thought Rui as the red and black aura then destroyed the sheild and Nel turned around and saw Rui. He was different now. He had two wings on his back, A sharp tail, his left hand was a demonish claw, his right arm was wrap in fur, his had Talons shaped feet, His eyes were yellow and green, a third eye on his forehead, horns on both sides of his head, and he had sharp teeth coming out of his mouth. Nel stayed quiet. Shadow looked over.'' Rui..''he said.'' Impossible. There's no way you can be alive. How have you taken that form? Who are you?''asked Ulquiorra as Rui then summoned his blade and swinged as he destroyed part of Las Noches and letted out a hollow like scream. Ulquiorra heard it, but was scared.'' I asked who are you. I guess you can't hear words.''said Ulquiorra as he then powered up a black cero. Rui then powered up a red one with the points of his horns. Ulquiorra's eyes widen as they both fired their Cero's and caused a explosion. Shadow caught Nel as she was blow away. Ulquiorra then flew out of the smoke.'' Impossible. No matter how much he looks like a Hollow, there isn't any way a human can fire a Cero.'' thought Ulquiorra as he then saw Rui appeared at his side and fired another Cero. Ulquiorra countered with his own Cero as they made another explosion. Ulquiorra was shocked again.'' He countered my Cero twice.''said Ulquiorra as Rui then appeared behind him. Ulquiorra turned around and Rui grabbed his left arm and cutted it off. Ulquiorra then was punches by Rui as he then letted out another Hollowish scream. Ulquiorra landed ontop of a ruined pillar and then holded his cutted off arm. He was panting. Then, his left arm then reformed.'' My greatest power is reforming my body parts. Don't just stand there just because you think you can win after cutting off one arm.''said Ulquiorra as he then put his hands together. He then had a green arrow be formed.'' Lanza del Relampago.''said Ulquiorra as he then had the green arrow get into his hand.'' Stay where are. Don't move. I'll like it not to set this off near me.''said Ulquiorra as he then threw but missed Rui by a few inches and it hit the desert. Then then caused a huge green explosion.'' I see. It truly is hard to control.''said Ulquiorra as he powered up another one. Shadow was shocked.'' He can power up more then one.''he thought as Rui as he disappeared and reappeared behind Rui. Ulquiorra then tried to attack with his arrow, but Rui caught it with his hand.'' No way. With his bare hand?''thought Ulquiorra as Rui then destroyed it and slashed Ulquiorra on the chest and cutted off one of his horns. Ulquiorra fell on the ground and Rui then stepped on his face and started to power up a Cero." I see. No mercy? How very Hollow like. I don't mind, I have lost to you. I no longer have any meaning. DO IT!"said Ulquiorra as he was then shot point blank by Rui's Cero.

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Chapter 27

Smoke came from a huge crater that was made from Rui's Cero attack. He was holding Ulquiorra. Or what was left of him. Ulquiorra's left arm, right arm, left wing, and his tail were gone. He then threw the rest of Ulquiorra and started walking over him. He then pointed his sword over Ulquiorra's troat. Shadow grabbed Rui's arm.'' Rui, It's over. There isn't a reason to crave his cropse up. Do this and you'll no longer be human.''said Shadow as Rui then tried to stabed Ulquiorra's troat.'' I said don't do it. Rui!''yelled Shadow as Rui then got out of Shadow's hold and then threw his blade though Shadow and sended him flying to rubble.'' Rui!'' screamed Nel.'' Will save.''said Rui.'' Will save.'' he kepted saying.'' I'll...save you.''said Rui as he started walking up to Shadow and powered up a Cero.'' Don't do Rui. Rui! Rui! Rui! Rui!''yelled Nel as Ulquiorra appeared behind Rui as he then cutted off a horn. Then the Cero was unstable and exploded. Rui's body then returned to normal and he fell facefirst on the ground. Nel got to Rui's side.'' Rui.'' she cried out. Ulquiorra looked sad for some reason. Then. Rui's aura then formed inside the hole in his chest. It healed. Rui then got up and felt his chest.'' Wasn't there...a hole in my chest?''asked Rui as he got up. He stared at Ulquiorra.'' Get your sword and let's finish this.''said Ulquiorra.'' No.'' he said. Ulquiorra then took Rui's sword out of Shadow and threw it infront of Rui.'' Let's finish this.'' he ordered.'' No. I did that to you while I was in that state. So, it wouldn't be a fair fight.''said Rui as he wanted to be in the same stateas Ulquiorra.'' Very well. If that's what you wished.''said Ulquiorra as he took a step and his wing and then faded away. Ulquiorra was shocked.'' Tch. I'm that far gone?''asked Ulquiorra as he was standing there with his body fading away." Kill me. Quickly. I no longer have the strength to walk. If you do not cut me down now, then this fight will remain forever unsettled."said Ulquiorra as he was just standing there.'' No.''said Rui.'' Why?''asked Ulquiorra.'' This isn't the way I wanted to win!''yelled Rui. Ulquiorra's eyes then returned to normal.'' Hmph. You nevered did anything I execpted you to do.''said Ulquiorra.'' Just as I was finally growing intest into you humans.''said Ulquiorra as he then lift his arm to Rui.'' Do you still fight because you have a soul?''asked Ulquiorra.'' No. I fight because I need to win.''said Rui as Ulquiorra then started bringing his hand back.'' I see.''said Ulquiorra as he was fading away."I see. This. Yes. This thing in my hand is the heart?'thought Ulquiorra as his body faded away into the wind. Rui stared and grabbed his sword. Nel was near Shadow.'' Guys. Stay up here. I'll end this war right now.''said Rui as he then founded the hole and started driving to help out the others against Yammy.

Cody and Scar clashed against two punchs but they backed up. They then sense Ulquiorra's energy vanish.'' I was gonna to help him. But it looks like I'm stuck here with ya wimps. You had to go and die first. Ulquiorra.''said Yammy. Cody got next to Scar.'' Hey, use your Senki and attack him. He's the last Espada and he's number ten. Meaning we'll have the upper hand against him.''said Cody. Scar nodded and had a few cherry blossems form into two blades in both in his hands. They then rushed towards Yammy. Yammy dodged the attacks and pushed them away. They stared at Yammy.'' Tch. I slept and ate like crazy just to build up my power, but it looks like I have to use it on ya wimps.''said Yammy as he drew his blade.'' Get mad, Ira!''yelled Yammy as he started to get bigger and taller. His number changed from ten to zero. Cody and Scar stared in Horror as Yammy was now a giant with a tail, four arms, and horns on his head.'' Who told you the espada rankings go from 1 to 10? They really to though 0-9. I'm espada zero, Yammy.''said Yammy as he then powered up a black cero from his mouth and fired it at Cody and Scar.

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Chapter 28

Agents 10.11,12, and 13 were wounded on the ground as the beast stared at the remaining agents. Then, a pillar of fire formed around it killing it.'' How pitful Making me come out on the front lines. Now, Kokayo, Ukaite, Gerivous, Ravige, and Thor. Go and fight the espada's. Do not let them get even one step in the real Nova.''ordered Yamamoto as he then disappeared. Kokayo and Ukaite then disappeared and reappeared infront of the guy and girl. Gerivous disappeared and got infront of the old man. While Ravige and Thor got the girl.

The girl had long blonde hair, two parts of it in pony tails, she was wearing a white shirt with black pants, sword on her waist, black jacket covering her face, blue eyes, about 6.7 inches tall, and she had a evil glare. Thor and Ravige drew their blades. They got ready.'' Hm..seems I got the weaker ones. I guess I can play with ya. Just make sure you go easy on me.''said the girl as she drew her blade. She showed them her number which was on her foot. It was number three.'' I am Espada number 3. Habial.''she said. Thor then went and clashed blades with her.'' Just because your a girl doesn't mean I won't hold back.''he said as he then backed up.'' Sit Upon the Frozen Heavens, Hyorinmaru''Thor said as he then sended a ice dragon at Habial. She dodged and Ravige had claws on his hands.'' Cut her to pieces, Pantra.''he said as he clashed weapons with her.'' Ya won't win.''she said as she got him away and powered up her blade. A yellow beam formed at the tip.'' Ola Azul.''she said as she sended a yellow blast to Thor.

Kokayo looked at the man. He had short black hair, curly at the end, white jacket that's opened at his neck showing his hollow hole and jaw like piece, a little bread, black pants, sword on his waist, and black eyes. The little girl had short green hair, purple shirt, purple shorts, sword on her back, a horn on her head, and a eye patch covering his left eye. She stared at Ukaite.'' Bald.''she said.'' Hey! I'm not bald!''he answered as he was mad. Kokayo then stared at the man.'' Name's Stark. She's Light. Can we just sleep and wait for the others to finish their fights?''asked Stark. Kokayo was clapping.'' That sounds like a good idea, but I can't. Yama-sensei was very orderly about fight ya Espadas.''said Kokayo. Stark then sighed as he and Light then drawed their blades.'' What a drag.'' he said as he then clashed blades with Kokayo and Light clashed blades with Ukaite.

Gerivous stared at the old guy as he got up and smashed his chair. He pulled out a axe. The old man had short white hair, a crown like hollow piece around his head, white shirt, black cape, and red pants.'' Name's Barragan. Espada two.''he said as he then rushed towards Gerivous. Gerivous then blocked with his arm.'' How?'' Barragan asked.'' Simple.''said Gerivous as he then removed his sleves to show arm protect pieces.'' I'm not a fan of swords. I'm more of a hand to hand combat.''he said as he put on two golves which were black.'' let's go.''said Gerivous as the battle of Nova had began.

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Chapter 29

Thor kept deflecting the slashes. He then clashed blades with her again.'' Your strong Agent.''she said as she blocked a attack from Ravige.'' Ya can't defeat me.''she said as she then kicked Ravige away and punched Thor with the hilt of her blade in his face. He holded as he saw her get yellow aura around her blade and she then rushed towards him with a slash.'' Bankai, Daiguren Hyorinmaru!''yelled Thor as he had ice to flow from Hyorinmaru onto his right arm which ice formed into the shape of a dragon's head around his sword hand, encasing the sword up to the hilt. The ice continued forming up over his shoulders with two large wings sprouting from his back and a long tail. The ice formed down to his left arm encasing his hand into a ice dragon claw. He was then slashed towards the ground. He hit the ground and had his blade stabed the ground.'' Is that the power of a Agent? How sad. I guess I'll finish you off right now.''she said as Ravige came from behind, but was then nearly cut in half. He spitted out blood as he was sended to the ground. Habial then held her blade upside down.'' Destroy, Tiburon.''she said as she then had a sphere of water form around her. Thor got ready as he flew into the sky.' I can't let my guard down no matter what.' he thought as he saw her come out of the sphere. Habial had a white blade, white spear in the other hand, white tail, a fin on her back like a shark, a jaw shaped shark teeth masked covered her mouth, and she had a white robe on.'' Get ready.''she said as Thor's right side of his body was cutted off. Then, he appeared behind her and tried to cut her, but failed. Habial blocked and saw it was a Ice clone.'' I can only use that once.'' he said as he then rushed towards her and started clashing blades with her.'' I'm sorry espada, I can't let you win.''he said as he then was slashed on the chest.'' I can't let you win either.''she said as she shot water at him, but he turned it to ice and shot it right back. She dodged as she saw the sky get dark. Shark and Barragan saw. They irgoned it and rushed towards their enemies. Thor held up his blade high.'' My sword is one of the strongest ones ever made.''said Thor as a hole opened in the sky.'' What are you-''she asked as Thor stopped her.'' Hyoten Hyakkaso!''he said as snow started falling.'' Sorry. I win.''he said. Habial tired to destroy the snow until she was turning into a giant ice flower.'' Once it hits 100, your life will be over.''said Thor as he then destroyed the ice which destroyed her body, meaning killing her.

Gervious kepted dodgeing Barragans axe swings. He then punched him in the face and back up. Barragan spitted out blood.'' You weren't lieing about being good at hand to hand.''he said.'' I'll finish you here now. Rot-''said Barragan as he was stabed by Thor's blade.'' Sorry for butting in.''he said. Barrgan then got Thor away. Barragan rushed towards Thor.'' Thanks to you, I can't go into my release form!''yelled Barragan as Gerivous appeared infront of him and punched him in the face and Thor then finished him off but cutting him in half.'' You know I could have finished him off myself.''said Gerivous.'' I know, but this battle needs to end. Time for Kokayo and Ukaite to finish their fight.''said Thor as he turned off his Bankai.'' Let's just pray that Rui and the others get here in time.''said Thor as he looked at the fire pillar where Luke was sealed.

Kokayo clashed blades with Stark.'' Tell me. Who's Bankai is stronger? Yours or that Agents over there?''asked Stark as he was refereneing to Thor.'' Don't know. I haven't spar with him. I only spar with Ukaite. Instead of worrying about me and Bankais, you should be worrying about your friend down there.''said Kokayo as Stark looked down and saw Light defeated.'' She was weak. Show me your Bankai and I'll show you my release form.''he said as he backed up.'' Fine. Blaze, Inferno.'Kokayo said as his blade turned into a fire blade.'' Ah. Now, I'll show you my release form. Kick about Los Labos.''Stark as he then had smoke come around him. He then came out with a target eye, two guns, and clothes made from wolf skin.'' Now, show me your-''said Stark as fire formed around him. He started shooting Cero's from the gun at it, but it didn't work.'' Sorry. Need to win now.''said Kokayo. Stark got anger and flew up to Kokayo.'' Inferno, Eruption.''he said as the fire then exploded killing Stark. Kokayo and Ukaite meet up with Thor and Gerivous.'' Looks like we need to defeat Luke.''said Kokayo.'' Speaking of Luke.''said Luke as he was behind and Ukaite and slashed him on the back and chest wounding him very bad. Kokayo flew and caught him.'' Damn it. Wait! We need them here. Hurry up already. You need to get here. Rui!''he yelled.

Back in Las Noches, Rui was flying down the 5th tower heading to defeat Yammy and to find a way to get to the fake Nova.

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Chapter 30

Rui kept flying down. He felt something inside him stirl up.'' Damn it. Not now.'' he said as he kept going. Meanwhile, Yammy was infront of Scar and Cody who were wounded badly. Scar had his sword in the ground.'' Man. I knew you guys were weak. Now, I'll finish this right now!'' said Yammy as he threw a punch and punched the sand causeing it to explode. He saw Cody and Scar were gone.'' What?''Yammy said as he turned around and saw a kneeling Scar and Rui in his ruined Bankai clothing and ready for battle.'' Ha. You came. I was gonna come for you, but you did a favor and came to me.''said Yammy.'' Rui..''said Scar.'' Don't worry Scar. I'll end this war now.''said Rui as he flew to Yammy. Scar saw Rui's eyes were different.' Those weren't eyes of when someone wins. Rui, what in the world happened to you up there?' thought Scar as he stared at the hole in the roof. Rui then dodged a punch and blocked it with his sword.'' Good. There's only two of you here.''said Rui.'' What? What are you talking about?''asked Yammy as he powered up a Cero.'' I can now go all out and crush you with force.''said Rui as he then had his Hollow mask appear and he fired a Gesutga at Yammys neck cutting it and he fell to the ground. Rui then removed his mask. He then started walking to Scar until Yammy got up and sended a Cero at him. Rui then got his mask on, but it disappeared right after.' Wha..''thought Rui as he was grabbed by Yammy.'' You little ant. I'll crush you. I'm number zero. Meaning I'm stronger then Grimmjow, Nnotia, and Ulquiorra. Their ants compared to me.''said Yammy as he started squezzeing the life out of Rui. Rui started screaming.'' Shoot to death, Shinso.''said Gin as his blade cutted off Yammys arm making Rui hit the sand. He saw Sky next to him.'' Hey. I told you I wanted to fight him.''said Sky,'' I got here first.''said Gin. Rex walked up to Rui.'' Rui. Gin and Sky got this. Go to Nova.''said Rex as he had a gun shot it and a portal opened up that lead to the fake Nova.'' You'll be healed along the way. Go now. They need your help.''said Rex. Scar, Cody, and Shadow were there healed enough to fight.'' Were with you. Let's end this war.''said Scar. Rui nodded as they all ran in the portal heading to the fake Nova.

Luke stared at Kokayo, Thor, and Gerivous as they were the only people that can fight him.'' I didn't think it'll be ya three left.''said Luke as he drew his sword.'' Rage though the seas and the heavens, Nejibana.''said Luke as his blade turned into a trident. Kokayo had his blade go into his shikai. Thor went into his bankai state. Gerivous put his golves all as they rushed towards Luke. Then, the sky started cracking. Rui then came out with his Bankai clothing all healed.'' Testa Getsuga Tensho!''said Rui as he fired the slash right behind Luke where he couldn't counter. He then started sending more at him. Shadow, Cody, and Scar appeared next to the others.'' Good. Ya made it back.''said Kokayo. Scar nodded. Rui panted as all the red and white aura disappeared and showed Luke had a sheild behind him.'' Hello Rui. I'm glad to see your well. Behind the neck is any creatures blind spot. Do you think I'll enter this battle without applying a sheild on it?''asked Luke. Rui was about to rush to kill Luke until Kokayo stoped him.'' Wait. Do you remember what happen last time when you rushed at him?''asked Kokayo. Rui shaked a little as he looked down. Then. All the agents appeared. They were hurt, but could still fight.'' Rui. All of us are here to protect you.''said Kokayo as he, Ukaite, Gervious, Thor, Ravige, Tron, 15, Brianc, and the other Agents were ready for battle. Luke stared'' Do you think ya can defeat me?''asked Luke as he started spinning his Trident. Kokayo and the others then rushed to Luke. The wounded ones went first and Luke started slashing or stabeing them to defeat them. Thor clashed weapons with his and disappeared as Ravige came to slash Luke. Luke then blocked and fired a red flame cannon black point. The defeated agents started falling to the ground. Scar sended Cherry blossems at Luke. Luke dodged and slashed him. Scar fell and Shadow then threw his sycthes. Luke grabbed a chain and started wrapping Shadows and Codys bodies with it and slashed them. Kokayo and the others went for an all out attack, But Luke appeared behind all of them and they were slashed or stabed. Rui stared in horror as all the Agents were defeated by Luke. Luke smiled. Rui then started flying to fight Luke until a pillar of fire blocked him. Luke turned and saw Yamamoto ready to battle.'' Ah. The leader finally comes out.''said Luke.

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Yamamoto had his blade in his shikai.'' Luke. I regret to even to this day for not stopping you on that day.''he said. Luke smiled.'' Do you really think you can defeat me Yama-sensei?''asked Luke as he then clashed weapons with him. Yamamoto then swinged his blade and fire was sent to him, but Luke snapped his fingers and the fire disappeared and Yamamotos blade was just a normal blade.'' Now,''said Luke as he then stabed him.'' No more fire.''he said as he slashed Yamamoto sending him to the ground. Luke smiled.'' All there is now is-''said Luke as he was kicked in the face and was sended to the ground. Yamamoto stood in the sky ready to battle with his hands and feet.'' How do you think I stayed number one in the agency when he left?''asked Yamamoto. Luke came back into the sky and spitted out blood.'' pretty good.'' said Luke as he then put his sword away and rushed towards Yamamoto with his fists. They then started fighting bare handed. Luke blocked or dodged all of Yama's while Yamamoto was being hit by Luke's attacks;; Do you really think I wouldn't fight you without knowing weakness?''asked Luke as he had water on his fists.'' Take this.''said Luke as he then punched Yama's face and stabed him with Nejibana in the chest and sended Yamamoto to the ground. Luke looked around and saw Rui was gone. Luke then got to the ground and walked towards where Yama's location was. A series of blades came out of the sky and Luke dodged all of them. He saw Gin in the sky. Sky and Rex walking to Luke.'' Seems ya defeated Yammy. I guess that's it for my Espadas.''said Luke as he started spinning his blade. He then started clashing blades with Sky and Rex. Luke then slashed Rex on the chest and stabed Sky defeating them and stabed Gin as he tried to attack from behind. Luke walked up and saw Yamamoto's wounded body.'' Time to die Yama-sensei. You were fun, but it looks like I win this war.''said Luke as Yamamoto grabbed his foot.'' Don't get cocky boy.''said Yamamoto as a red circle formed around Luke.'' Wha- What are you doing?''asked Luke as he got a little mad.'' Hado 96 Itto Kaso!''yelled Yamamoto as a fire pillar then erupted around Luke damageing him. Luke then came out of it and landed on a building saw a shadow over him. He saw Rui. He was different now. He had longer black hair, his blade fused with his arm, a chain wrapped around his bare right arm, and he had eyes of a warrior not afaid of anything. He then landed and slashed Luke and made the building explode.

Luke landed on the ground near some ruin buildings and saw Rui land infront of him.'' Let's do this Luke. I'll finish it in a instant.''said Rui as he then rushed towards Luke and started clashing blades.'' What's going on? How did you get this strong? What did you do?''asked Luke as he kept clashing blades with Rui.'' I made a deal with Yubel.''said Rui as he then slashed Luke, but he blocked and stabed Rui in his right arm.'' Looks like that arm isn't useable...anymore..''said Luke as he saw Rui backed out and then made a crater appear around him.'' Luke...I'm tired of your treats and thinking your all strong. Your now afaid since I'm stronger then you. Let me show you.''said Rui as he placed one hand on his right arm. The chains started being lifed as alot of aura formed around him.'' This is... Final Getsuga Tensho''said Rui as Black and white aura formed around him.'' What...is that form?!''asked Luke as he stared in shock at Rui's new formed.

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Chapter 32

The aura faded away. Rui's hair turned darker black, and became waist-length. Light bluish-gray bandages formed around his body, tightly wrapped around his torso, right arm, and face, ending just beneath his eyes. Black flame-like markings spread across his chest and wrap around his left arm, and the remains of a tattered black cloak cover his lower body. Luke stared in shock.'' If I use this move, then I'll lose all my powers. Meaning, Zangetsu, Bankai, Hollow, and the power to sense energy,''Rui said as his red eyes started at Luke. Luke felt like he was stareing at his soul.'' No! This possible! There is no way that you can be stronger then me! I'll defeat you Rui! You can't stop me!''yelled Luke as he saw Rui hold his hand up and a black sword made of aura appeared in his hand.'' Mugestu!''Rui said as a massive sword slash was sended to Luke. It slashed him in half and his body faded away.'' If you use this move, you lose all your powers. Goodbye, Rui.''said Yubel as his words echoed though Rui's mind as the darkness covered him as well.

The darkness vanished and Rui appeared on the ground. His hand disappeared with the other parts. He was in his hoodie and pants he was in at first. He saw his sword fading away with his very eyes. He then saw something hit the ground. He saw Luke very damage. Luke standed up holding his wound.'' Damn you...You really think you can win..?''he asked as he started running up to Rui. Rui saw he had his powers for one more slash. He then ran up to Ule and destroyed his blade and slashed Luke on the chest. Luke fell facefirst on the ground dying.'' Damn...it...''he said as he died. Rui turned around and only saw the hilt of his blade. It disappeared.'' Goodbye...Yubel..''said Rui as he looked up at the sky.'' Thank you.''Rui said.

-Epilogue-

Rui was walking in the real Nova. It was switch about two days ago. He is wearing a school uniform as he's attending school now. Rui looked at the sky.' Now, it's over. I finally got the peace I fought for.' thought Rui as he started walking. A man passed him. He had short black hair, wearing the same school uniform, bag on his shoulder, black jacket, black eyes, and he turned around and started at Rui.'' Your getting to use to peace already? I guess we need to wait a little longer. Rui.''said the man as a Brotherhood Agent badge fell out of his bag.
The end? Stay tune for Brotherhood 3: Fullbring.

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