Text my version of KH3D

[Snow 1,800]

Ask your permission? You basically just took a game and put it in your own words. I'm just making it easier to read for everyone. It's not like I changed everything. But, I guess, it still is yours, so okay.

[DChiuch 5,773]

Please continue this story!

[Snow 1,800]

chapter 2

Sora awoke in Traverse Town's first district.

"Oh, Traverse Town. Where's Riku? What happened to my clothes?"said Sora

"RIIIKUU! WHERE ARE YOU?"Sora shouted

"Shut your noisy mouth, or I'll snap your neck."said Neku.

"Huh? Neck-?GAAAAAHH."screamed Sora, falling off the balcony.

THUMP

"You fail, Sora. Epicly."said Neku

"Thanks, I know. But, how did you know my name?"asked Sora

"Ah, you're not a player?"said Neku

"Player? Is this a game? Oh my goood, I love games." Sora exclaimed.

"Not that kind of game. This game's more serious,"said Neku, holding his hand out for Sora to see.

Sora looks at the numbers.

"Well, on account of the fact, that I love games, I'll play with you."said Sora

"*Sigh* Idiot."said Neku.

"Well, whats your name?"said sora

Then, Dream Eaters came out of nowhere!

"Heartless?!" asked Sora.

"What? No! Dream Eaters!"said Neku

"Oh, okay, then."said Sora

"Fight!"said Neku

"Ok... Oh, god, wait...I need one for Kairi!"said Sora

"No. Fight." said Neku.

And they attacked.

-

Riku awoke to the sound of water.

"Where am I?"asked Riku

"You're in Twilight Town!"said a voice that sounded familiar to Riku.

[Sora's Baby 729]

[Ultimate Oblivion 52]

chapter 5

sora pov

"dang, look at the time, i wasted 20 minutes talking to u. better get my mission done"said neku

"why is your mission so important. it's just a game right?"said sora

"if i dont complete it in time, i will die"said neku

..................

"WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"said sora

"why?"said sora

"because i signed a contract before i died to live on but i need to work in this game forever"said neku

"so what's your mission?said sora

"to defeat a gigantic cat dream eater"said neku

 

sorry i took so long. i couldnt think of anything so i research about the world ends with you to find out more about neku

[4Everbee 1,365]

I love it! Kepp it!

[Sora's Baby 729]

good work.

[Ultimate Oblivion 52]

good work.

 

to who?

[Sora's Baby 729]

to who?

 

Roxas.

[Snow 1,800]

Chapter 3

Riku turned around and looked at the one who answered his question.

It was DiZ, but he disappeared in black flame and Maleficient appeared.

"Embrace the Darkess!"

Riku's head exploded with pain.

Then, she disappeared in black flame as DiZ had.

"Terra! Embrace it, the Darkness will give you power!" said the man who took her place.

"Who the hell is Terra?" asked Riku.

Then, he felt dark tendrils around his feet, and lost consciousness.

 

Riku awoke and found himself at a tower that had a bell.

"Finally, you're awake! Hi, what's your name? I'm Quasimodo." Quasimodo helped Riku up.

"I'm Riku. Nice to meet you!"

"Well, what were you doing here? Did you decide to take a nap on the sidewalk?"

"Well, where are we?" asked Riku.

"Oh, don't you know? We're in Notre Dame!"

 

"What's your name?" asked Sora

"Neku, Neku Sakuraba" said Neku

"Neku Sakuraba, what an interesting name." said Sora.

"Not a name I'd have chosen for myself, but, ya know..." said Neku.

Then, a black circle appeared on the ground, and a Dream eater that looked like a panda arose.

"Oh, no, a Nobody?!"asked Sora in surprise.

"What the hell-- Nevermind, I won't ask. It's dream eater again, but not our enemy. There are more like them. Just not around here."

"How do you know that? They look the same to me."

"The symbols are different."said Neku

"Oh, so it's not a Nobody."

"Of course. It's a dream eater with a different symbol different to the ones we fought." he said, pointing to it's head.

"Oh, haha. I'm just used to the nobodies and heartless." Sora replied.

[Sora's Baby 729]

A nobody panda, what the flip?

[Snow 1,800]

A nobody panda, what the flip?

 

Lol. I thought Sora should say it was a nobody for a little lulz.

[4Everbee 1,365]

Good job dude keep it up!

[Snow 1,800]

chapter 4

Quasimodo stared at the parade on the street.

"Quasimodo." said Riku

Quasimodo just stared blankly.

"Quasimodo"said Riku

No response

Quasimodo!" Riku shouted

Quasimodo exclaimed, and fell back in surprise.

"Uh, sorry, Riku...I just..." Quasimodo held back tears. "I have to work...here forever..."

Riku grimaced. -Is there a way I can help him?- he thought.

Riku looked at the parade, and saw a strange animal with a strange symbol. It attacked a nearby parade-goer.

"Quasimodo! Stay here!"said Riku

Riku ran into the parade and slashed at it, but more appeared. Riku slashed at them, and darkness streamed out of his hand.

-Embrace it...Terra.- He heard the voice in his head say. -Damn that old man.- thought Riku, blocking a claw attack from a Dream Eater.

The people ran away in flocks down the street as Riku slashed at more. He blocked a claw attack and retaliated. He shot a look at Quasimodo. A Dream Eater was looming up to him with blinding speed. Riku hurled his keyblade at it, and it disappeared in black flame, as the others did. He looked around. "All gone." said Riku, with a grin.

He heard a sniffle, and looked at Quasimodo. Riku was startled, and saw Quasimodo was crying. -Oh no, was it something I did?- he thought.

"Are you hurt, Quasimodo?" Quasimodo shook his head.

"Then what's wrong?"

"I...I want to fight too! I want to have the power to save people!" He said, his tears hitting the ground with an almost silent splash.

Chapter 4 End.

[Sora's Baby 729]

I luv this.

[Lu Xun 2,069]

Good work

[Snow 1,800]

Chapter Five

"Damn," said Neku, looking at his hand. "I guess I better get back to my mission." said Neku

"Question: If it's a game, why does it matter?" asked Sora.

"Let's just say it's one of those games that, if you run out of time, you're out. Out for real."

He saw Sora wasn't getting it.

He clicked his tongue and used his thumb to point behind him.

Sora still wasn't getting it.

"I die, Sherlock."

"Wait, wait, wait....What?" asked Sora

"I signed a contract. I have to play this 'game'," he made air quotes when he said the word 'game', "Forever." said Neku

"So, why do you have to do this? Don't you have a choice?"

"I'd rather not say." said Neku.

"*sigh* Well, at least tell me what your mission is?" said Sora.

Neku thought it over, and said, "I have to defeat a Dream Eater cat. Big one. Just don't think you have to help me. This is my headache, not yours." He said to Sora, turning around and fast-walking away.

[Sora's Baby 729]

Lol.

[4Everbee 1,365]

When the next one?!

[Snow 1,800]

Come on, the ultimate 2, I want more grammar to correct!

And I like this story. I can translate it forever~

[Sora's Baby 729]

Yeah make more.

[4Everbee 1,365]

Come on, the ultimate 2, I want more grammar to correct!

And I like this story. I can translate it forever~

 

Maybe he don't want you to fix his grammar.I don't think anybody would want somebody to fix their grammar

[Ultimate Oblivion 52]

Maybe he don't want you to fix his grammar.I don't think anybody would want somebody to fix their grammar

 

i dont mine.

need ideas

[Snow 1,800]

i dont mine.

need ideas

 

Hm, mind if I post a chapter of my own? It won't count towards your story, I'll just post it to give you a few ideas.

 

 

 

Maybe he doesn't want you to fix his grammar. I don't think anyone would want somebody to fix their grammar.

 

~Fixed.

And khgirl4ever, of you don't want people fixing your grammar, type with better grammar. Easy fix.

[Sora's Baby 729]

Maybe he don't want you to fix his grammar.I don't think anybody would want somebody to fix their grammar

 

I would.

Hm, mind if I post a chapter of my own? It won't count towards your story, I'll just post it to give you a few ideas.

 

Lol.