Hello, i am creating my own version of kh3d.

here goes

 

Chapter 1

Mickey, donald goofy set a course to Destiny Islands.

"so sora, u made your mind up?"asked mickey

"i am sure." said sora

"lets go to where Yen Sid is. U 2 Riku." said Mickey

They flew to the mysterious tower and yen sid told them the situation.

" Sora, Riku, u have done well to repel darkness twice" said yen sid

"it's nothing" said sora while folding his hand backwards

"but, the real xehanort have came back." said yen sid

"HUH" everyone said except mickey and yen sid

"Why?" riku said

"Xehanort heart and body have been restored so his whole will be complete" said yen sid

"we gotta stop him now."said sora

"it will take some time for him to be back. but first, i shall hold the mark of mastery"said yen sid

"what is this mark of mastery?"said sora

"it's a tradition for keyblade bearers like u to become true masters"said yen sid

"even without taking the test, i will still pass"said sora

riku turn his head down and said"i once chose to walk the path of darkness making me think i am not suitable to wield the keyblade. this test is good enough"

"if u 2 get out of the dream, i shall call u masters"said yen sid

"huh?"everyone said

riku and sora passed out

 

long intro right. got inspiration from trailer. hope u like it

I wasn't talking about me. You shouldn't go fixing people's grammar just because you want to.

 

~Fix'd.

But I don't see why you're making a fuss. It's not like I'm going Moderator on you and editing your posts.

~Fix'd.

But I don't see why you're making a fuss. It's not like I'm going Moderator on you and editing your posts.

 

I'm not making a fuss.If i was it would be like this''YOU DUMB A@@ YOU CAN'T GO OFF FIXING SOMEBODY ELSE firetruckING GRAMMAR YOU B****" .Lol.But really.I'm not making a fuss

I'm not making a fuss.If i was it would be like this''YOU DUMB A@@ YOU CAN'T GO OFF FIXING SOMEBODY ELSE firetruckING GRAMMAR YOU B****" .Lol.But really.I'm not making a fuss

 

Wow..this kinda sucks.

I'm not making a fuss.If i was it would be like this''YOU DUMB A@@ YOU CAN'T GO OFF FIXING SOMEBODY ELSE firetruckING GRAMMAR YOU B****" .Lol.But really.I'm not making a fuss

 

I didn't mean fuss like that. I just don't see why you hate it. If you don't want me to fix your grammar, don't type with bad grammar.

Wow..this kinda sucks.

 

Huh?

I didn't mean fuss like that. I just don't see why you hate it. If you don't want me to fix your grammar, don't type with bad grammar.

 

If you don't like bad grammar.Then don't read my post.Easy as.Wait for it...That

Huh?

 

I'm sorry this fight is just stupid.

chapter 6

riku POV

"how i wish i could be free"said quasimotor

"well, go out. smell the frest air, get some girls(i laugh when i wrote that)."said the 3 statues

"u remember what master said"said quasimotor

"master, paster, baker, who cares about the guy. get out there"Said the statues

"ok."said quasimotor

"eh..., quasimotor?"said riku

"yes riku?"said quasimotor

"why are u talking to statues

sora POV

"wow, i never seen this part of travest town"Said sora

"That is because it never existed"said neku

Then, a big cat appeared.

"there is our target, defeat it."said neku

"right"said sora

 

sorry i took so long, got banded from pc(secretly used it)

Riku is soooooooo lost.

Chapter 6

"I just...want to be free." said Quasimodo, his tears flowing out.

The statues mouths started moving. "Quasimodo, we've been over this. Just go pick up a girl."

Quasimodo still didn't stop crying. "But..."

"Quasimodo...Why are you talking to statues?" asked Riku.

"Oh...They're...friends of mine....? Yeah, he should believe that."

Riku looked up at the statues. "Quasimodo..." the statues said in unison.

"But...Master..."

"Who the hell cares about that old guy? He's a tard."

Riku couldn't help chuckling.

"But..."

"GO!"

Quasimodo walked off, and Riku caught sight of Dream Eaters, and dashed off to fight them.

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Sora ran after Neku, and they entered the alleyway. He raised his hand, and the wood opened up, revealing a black void, that Neku entered. Sora followed, and there was a sign in the darkness.

Traverse Town District: --

The darkness cleared, and Sora saw a place similar to District 3.

"Wow, never saw this."

Neku stopped dead in his tracks, turned around, and punched Sora in the face.

"You IDIOT!" he yelled. "You were not supposed to follow!"

Sora rubbed his cheek. "Sorry?"

"Sorry won't cut i--" he stopped talking, and flew forward. He was slashed at the back by a giant cat Dream Eater. "Gah! Hey!" yelled Sora, brandishing his keyblade and charging.

The flow is so much better.

I...Am...In....LOVE...With this story!

nooooooooooooooooooo

nooooooooooooooooooo

 

Why NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO?

because u praised him, not me

because u praised him, not me

 

I like your story,Not his lol

I like your story,Not his lol

 

Yeah,lisen to her.

Come on make the next part of the story!

i need ideas!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

so wait this sunday(if lucky)

You really shouldn't be praising me, since it's not my story.

I've just been grammar fixing and adding a little here and there to make it make sense.

So basically, everything I'm typing is really his work.

I'll thank both then!

You really shouldn't be praising me, since it's not my story.

I've just been grammar fixing and adding a little here and there to make it make sense.

So basically, everything I'm typing is really his work.

 

Thank you!

i need ideas!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

so wait this sunday(if lucky)

 

Thank You!!!

i need ideas!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

so wait this sunday(if lucky)

 

Your waiting for ideas when all you have to do is.

Sit down and start writing. Sitin down waiting for ideas won't do you any good.

Idea for Riku arc: Quasimodo sees the girl of his dreams, and tries desperately to keep it a secret from Riku, but Riku knows better.

Idea for Sora arc: Sora fights off the giant cat when the giant cat looks like it's about to die, it calls in stronger friends.

ok ok i will start writing

chapter 7

after sora beaten the cat, the marking on neku's hand dissappear

neku took ot a phone, dial numbers and said "hey Beat, what is the next mission?"

...

after a while, neku said "lets take a break for the day till i get my next mission"

ok" said sora

 

i will edit it tommorow. no time

Chapter 7

Sora defeated the cat, jumped back, and took deep, panting breaths. Sora looked at Neku's hand, but the mark didn't disappear. More giant cats sprung out of nowhere, lunging at Sora. "What...?" The cat he just defeated rose, yowled, and the shockwaves blew Sora back. "UGH! Damn!" said Sora, struggling to keep his feet in place. The shockwaves stopped, and then all the cats lunged at Sora.