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Shrouded Madness- ENG, First pages sneak peek, for you.

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Since I'm so nice, here's a translation of my manga's first 4 pages for you.

I also need someone to make me a logo for it, both in English and portuguese :3

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    Nice manga :)

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    Nice manga :)

     

    Thanks :D
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    It's so sad :(

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    It's so sad :(

     

    Lol, THIS? Sad? First two pages and barely any explanation at all. It was meant for you to notice her sorrow, but not at all to make you sad already. lol. Not yet, at least!
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    Lol, THIS? Sad? First two pages and barely any explanation at all. It was meant for you to notice her sorrow, but not at all to make you sad already. lol. Not yet, at least!

     

    If this is only the beginning, then this comic will probably depress me xD

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    More sneaks for you :3Posted Image
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    Needs a lot of work. Y'know, it's sloppy, anatomy, shading, etc. I mean, half the time the characters who are supposed to have colored hair just... don't. Since there is no shading, it's just confusing.

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    Needs a lot of work. Y'know, it's sloppy, anatomy, shading, etc. I mean, half the time the characters who are supposed to have colored hair just... don't. Since there is no shading, it's just confusing.

     

    None of them have colored hair yet. Only black. In some of the frames are supposed to not be painted... Seriously, painting everything with that pen is a pain...

    Yeah, I'm not a professional. And there is some shading...

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    None of them have colored hair yet. Only black. In some of the frames are supposed to not be painted... Seriously, painting everything with that pen is a pain...

    Yeah, I'm not a professional. And there is some shading...

     

    If you want to present it, then it should be finished lol. Still, sloppy, anatomy, moar shading...
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    If you want to present it, then it should be finished lol. Still, sloppy, anatomy, moar shading...

     

    This is a SNEAK PEAK. --'

    I'm working on the things you mentioned. Thanks for criticism :0

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    i dont think it looks sloppy , it just needs some love!!!<3

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