I'm debating on whether I should write this story I have a great idea for. Although in the past I've tried to write many story's but gave up 2-4 pages in. This one in particular I think I really want to go write but then again what If i end up giving up? I've never been into story writing and have been focusing really on a Music career. But the book I want to write is well thought out. Here's a preview of it.

 

"The Franchellos" who live in Brooklyn, NY in the 1940's. It focuses on Mafia vs Mafia, drug dealing, death, and romance like any other Mafia Story. The main character Carlo Franchello who falls in love with a girl who is dating a man in the enemy Mafia "The Gambinos" Francisca Gambino the woman he lie his eyes on one day and cannot stop thinking about, was the start of a new kind of fight. He then wants to get out of the Mafia but the boss won't let him.

 

That's as far as I can go without giving out everything of my Idea and spoiling the story. So should I write it and see what becomes of it?

 

 

Yes it kind of is like Romeo and Juliet but with a sexy, classy, 1940's Mafia twist

 

Edited June 26, 201213 yr by Libirica

if you want to write it, then write it. it doesn't matter if you don't finish as long as you enjoy doing it.

Seems kind of interesting.

Something I would read

It sounds interesting.

if you want to write it, then write it. it doesn't matter if you don't finish as long as you enjoy doing it.

 

Yea but the thing is it's something that if i start writing I want to finish it, but I don't wan't to give up and have it be a waste of hard worked time.

Edited June 26, 201213 yr by Libirica

I love West Side Story As a master debater

I say write it!

 

Yea but the thing is it's something that if i start writing I want to finish it, but I don't wan't to give up and have it be a waste of hard worked time.

 

i see where you're coming from, but if you had fun, did you really waste time?

Madotsuki pretty much said everything I was going to say. lol

Looks good keep going.

Okay, I''ll work on putting it together and get to writing soon then I'll write it on my computer first and then put it on KH13 when its all done and edited! It's gonna be a really long book though http://kh13.com/forum/public/style_emoticons/default/happy.png

Go ahead