My friend and I made this what do you think about it

 

Before

you cared

you would be sweet and kind

you never lied to me

but you have changed

Now

you don't care at all

you wouldn't care if i was dying

you lie left and right

i don't even know whats the truth anymore

because you changed

Before

i would tell you anything

i could pour my heart out to you knowing you would be there for me

i could always ask you for your advice when i need it

if i need you, you would be there in seconds

but you have changed

Now

i feel i cant tell you anything

i feel you say your there but your really not

if i needed you, you wouldn't be there until after i do it myself

because you have changed

Before

you would say i love you

you would always want me happy

you would always want to talk to me

but you have changed

Now

you don't even say it

you don't even care if i'm unhappy

you never want to talk to me anymore

because you changed

Before

you loved me

we were the best friends

we would act like little kids

we would always be together

we would be like two peas in a pod

but you changed

Now

you act like i'm this crazy chick who wont leave you alone

you act like your too mature to let the little kid inside of you come out

we hardly see or talk to each other

i am lucky if i text to you and you text back maybe two or three times

we are now like water and fire we don't go together

but you have changed

i really wish you didn't change

i wish everything will go back to the way it was

but i know it wont

even though you not the same person

i am

i will always care,love,respect, be here for you

i will always be sweet and kind and trustworthy to you

even though the old you isn't here

i know the old you is deep down inside you

you just gotta get it out

Gave me feels lol

I really liked the Now Before alteration. It gave it depth.

This is really good!

Nice, I really love stuff like this.

It's pretty relatable and clear for a poem like that.

 

It gave me feels.

 

I would 'Like' It but I burned my Quota.

 

I owe you +1 like.

Edited November 15, 201212 yr by Sigrun

I love this. Honest.

 

This is one of my situations right now. 8(

game me feels. You did an incredible job.

This reminds me of a friend of mine. We aren't together anymore, but still~

I loved the whole thing T.T

 

' we are now like water and fire we don't go together '

 

 

that line hit me the most

Thanks guys you are all awesome! im glad you like the poem and im glad you guys can relate to it

Edited November 15, 201212 yr by Sora-Lover

Hey hey! I deserve credit in this too! I helped you write it!