Hello everyone, this is Tom13, I would like to present to you, my own version of KH BBS, remade with some new characters, and some parts you never seen before. You may pm me if you want me to include any new things such as: ideas, and/or characters. Any who enjoy chapter 2, and the rest of the chapters will be posted on this thread.
Chapter 2: The night before the exam.
Four years have passed since that day, and the boy is now lively again. He still doesn't remember much about his past at all. The boy is now living on a world known as the Land of Departure, it is currently night time in the world, as lots, and lots of stars are seen in the sky. The boy, Ventus, gets up from his sleep startled. He sighs a little. He looks at the sky, and sees a meteor going by. Ventus, smiles, and gets excited when he sees the meteor going by. "A meteor shower!" Shouted Ventus, excited. Ventus wastes no time jumping off of the bed, and running out his bedroom door into the hallway. Ventus is so excited, he didn't see another boy walk out of his room, and when he turns to face Ventus, and when he sees the boy they crash into each other! They sit up on the ground rubbing their heads, and looking at each other. They suddenly start laughing, at the sight of having crashed into each other. The boy is 13 years old, with short black hair, a bit tanned skin, dark blue eyes, wears a long sleeved black, and yellow shirt, and has a knight shoulder pad-like cauldron on his left shoulder, and wears black pants, and wears black boots. "Hey! Watch where you're going Tyler!" Said Ventus, in an energetic tone. Tyler rubs the back of his head, in embarrassment, as he looks on at Ventus with a smile on his face, as they get up slowly from the ground, and they walk in the hall of the castle in the world. "Sorry about that....I noticed a meteor....Wait.....Your going to see it too?" Replied Tyler, in a cheerful tone, as he continues walking in the hall. "Yeah!!!! I'am!!" Replied Ventus, in a happy and cheerful tone, as he, and Tyler kept walking in the hallway. They finally reach the exit of the castle, they look at each other with a smirk their face, and ran out the door. A young man wearing a black coat is seen watching the two boys exit the castle, and then the man leaves the castle, by opening a Corridor of Darkness and walking into it.
Ventus, and Tyler run down the stairs, and look up into the night sky, looking for any meteors. They don't see any, and look at the pathway. "I can't see well from here!" Said Ventus, with a sigh. "I can't see either bro..." Replied Tyler, also sighing. Tyler, looks at Ventus with a smirk, and pushes him down a little, and runs towards the pathway, and into the training field. "Hey wait up!!!! Oh I see now....You are racing me to the top!!!!" Shouted Ventus, in a playful mood. Ventus, runs up the pathway, and into the training field. He takes a look around at the rings on chains that are attached to poles. "I've got time to spare." Said Ventus, in a playful mood. Ventus, summons his Keyblade, the Wayward Wind to his hand, and swings it at one of the rings, and then he ran at the pole that holds three rings, Ventus, just giggled as his assumes his battle stance. "What? You want a piece of me too?" Said Ventus, in a daring tone, as he took aim at one of the rings. Ventus, swings his Keyblade at the ring with great power in the strike. The rings then started moving in a fast pace, Ventus carefully aims his Keyblade at one of the rings, and performs a Strike Raid, by throwing his Keyblade at one of the =rings. "Hey, what am I doing? I'm going to miss the meteor shower! I need to get to the top before Tyler does!" Said Ventus, realizing that he is behind in the race.
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Ventus's dissummons his Keyblade, and runs up a slope, only to see a young man wearing a black coat with it's hood up, the man looks at Ventus eye-to-eye with him. "You must be warned.....Something terrible will soon happen....And.....You may no longer be who you are....." Said the man, seeming to warn Ventus of upcoming danger. Ventus looks at the man with a confused look on his face. "What do you mean? Who are you?" Asked Ventus, asking for the man's name. Suddenly, without warning the man disappears, leaving Ventus more puzzled, than confused. "Who was that guy? And what did he mean by danger?" Thought Ventus, thinking about what had just transpired. Ventus decides to shrug it off, and runs into another pathway leading to the top, as he reaches the top he sees Tyler already there. Tyler, looks at Ventus with a smile on his face. "Looks like I got here before you Ven!!! Said Tyler, with a smirk on his face, and with a playful tone in his voice. "Oh thanks!!!!" Replied Ventus, in a playful tone. Both Tyler, and Ventus started laughing. Tyler, and Ventus approch the ledge of the cliff, and lie down on the ground with their arms beneath their heads, to rest on them. They look up into the sky, and into the stars. Ventus, starts to have a concerned look on his face, Tyler looks at Ventus upon seeing his concerned face. "What's wrong Ven?" Asked Tyler, worried for his friend. "Why does this seem....Familiar?" Asked Ventus, in a concerned tone with an uneasy feeling. "Maybe it's just a coincidence." Replied Tyler, thinking of a solution to the strange problem. "Maybe, your probably right...." Replied Ventus, thinking it's just a coincidence. They close their eyes, after a few minutes they open them, and look above, after sitting up. Ventus, and Tyler yawned, and fall onto their backs, but they see a blue haired girl, looking at them. Ventus, and Tyler, bolt up from their sleep. "Woah!!!" They both said at the same time in a surprised tone. They got onto their knees, and look at her. "Give as a break Aqua!" Said Ventus, in a energetic tone. "Ven, Tyler, you hopeless sleepyheads, you know you two can't sleep out here without a blanket." Replied Aqua, in a playful tone, with some sarcasm in her words. "But....Did I dream that place up.....I feel like I've been there......Looking at the stars...." Said Ventus, talking about the sky. Aqua, took her hand, and ruffled the hair on top of Ventus' hair. "But, you're here, living with us." Replied Aqua, reminding Ventus, that he lives in this world now. "Yeah, your right..." Replied Ventus, with a smile on his face. Ventus, Tyler, and Aqua walk closer to the ledge, and sit down on it."Hey Aqua?" Said Ventus, asking Aqua a question. "Hm?" Said Aqua, wondering what Ventus is asking her. "Y'ever wonder what stars are? Where Light comes from?"Asked Ventus, in an curious tone. "Hmm...Well, they say..." Said Aqua, beginning to say something, as she was cut off by a young man with brown spiky hair. "That every star up there is another world" Said the young man, in a kind tone. Ventus, Tyler, and Aqua turn around to face a man after gasping. "Terra." Said Aqua, surprised to see Terra, out in the middle of the night. "Yep, hard to believe there are so many worlds out there besides our own. The Light is their hearts, and it's shining down on us like a million lanterns." Said Terra, explaining the stars in the sky. Ventus, looks at Terra with a confused look on his face after Terra finished explaining what stars are. "What? I don't get it." Said Ventus, in a confused tone. "In other words, they're just like you, Ven." Said Terra, in a playful tone. "What does THAT mean? Replied Ventus, as he got up, and walked towards Terra. "You'll find out someday, I'm sure." Said Terra, in a truthful tone. "I wanna know now." Replied Ventus, getting impatient. "You're too young to know now." Said Terra, calling Ventus too young to know the meaning of what he said. "Quit treating me like a kid." Replied Ventus, in irritation of being treated like a kid. Aqua, started laughing a little. "Hey, what are you laughing at?" Asked Terra, in a little harsh tone in his voice. "I can't help it. You two would make the wierdest brothers." Said Aqua, as she started laughing after that. Ventus, folds his arms behind his back, and Terra folds his arms to his chest, looking confused. Then they too start laughing. A few hours pass, as Ventus, Tyler, Terra, and Aqua look at the stars in the night sky, as Aqua suddenly gets up.
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"Oh yeah. Terra, you and I have are Mark of Mastery exams tomorrow." Said Aqua, in a stern tone in her voice as she walks behind Terra, Tyler, and Ventus. Aqua, takes out four star-shaped charms out of her pocket, and held them out to show them. "I made us good luck charms." Said Aqua, in a cheerful tone, as she smiles. The four charms were colored Blue, Light brown, Green, and Yellow, Aqua threw the Light brown-colored charm to Terra, the Green charm to Ventus, and the Yellow charm to Tyler. "Wow, amazing.." Said Tyler, in a happy tone in his words. "I get one too?" Asked Ventus, in a cheerful tone in his words. "Of course. One for each of us. Said Aqua, as she, Tyler, Terra, and Ventus show off their charms, and looking at them. "Somewhere out there, there's this tree with star-shaped fruit, and the fruit represents an unbreakable connection. So as long as you and your friends carry good luck charms shaped like it, nothing can ever drive you apart. "You'll always find your way back to each other. Technically, I think you're supposed to make them with seashells., but I did the best with what I had." Said Aqua, explaining about the good luck charms she gave them. "Oy, sometimes you are such a girl." Said Terra, in sarcasm. "Hey, what do you mean, "sometimes"?" Asked Aqua, annoyed a little at what Terra said to her. "So this isn't a real good luck charm?" Asked Ventus, a little dissappointed. "Well, that's yet to be seen. But I did work a little magic on it." Said Aqua, stating that they have yet to see what the charms can do. "Really? What?" Asked Ventus, in an curious tone. "An unbreakable connection." Said Aqua, as she held her good luck charm up into the air.
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"That makes sense..." Said Tyler, understanding what Aqua said. Terra, got up and started to walk into the open field. "Well, tomorrow's the exam. Anyone wanna Spar?" Asked Terra, asking if someone wants to spar with him. "I can take ya!" Said Ventus, as he summoned his Keyblade into his his hand, and they both run into each other, and they clash weapons. Hours pass, and Ventus, and Terra are getting tired after clashing, Aqua came walking into the battle, with Keyblade in hand. "Well, that works if you're fighting one on one. But you need to learn how to handle a crowd, too." Said Aqua, as she assumed her battle stance. She, and Ventus jump at each other preparing to clash their weapons in midair. A few hours pass, and Terra, Aqua, and Ventus are worn out as they face each other, as Tyler is watching. Ventus, dissummons his Keyblade, signaling his time in sparring is over tonight. "Trust me, you guys are ready." Said Ventus, as Tyler gets up, and goes over to his side. "You're going to clean up at the exam tomorrow." Said Ventus, in a cheerful tone in his words. "I hope it's that easy." Said Terra, as he began walking. "It's like the master said. Power is born within the heart." Said Aqua, starting to explain about what the Master told them. "When the time is right, you just need to look inside yourself, and you'll find it there." Said Aqua, as she finished explaining. Ventus nods with a smile. Ventus, looks up into the sky a little, with a confused look on his face. "Hey, we're going to head back." Said Terra, telling Ventus that he and Aqua are heading back to the castle. Tyler, looks at Ventus, with a smile. "I'm also heading back too? Are you coming?" Asked Tyler, asking Ventus if he will head back to the castle too. Ventus, looks at Tyler with a smile on his face. "Yeah, me too!" Replied Ventus in a happy tone. Ventus, and Tyler run a little to catch up with Terra and Aqua. They start to walk back down the mountain, but Aqua looks into the sky as she saw a meteor passing by, distracted by it. "Together...Always..." Said Aqua, to herself as she held her good luck charm. Aqua quickly runs to catch up with Tyler, Ventus, and Terra to walk down the mountain, back to the castle.
A mouse is seen surfing on the water, with a book as the mouse yells in a little fright, as the waves come at him. Suddenly, a big wave goes at the mouse, and the mouse falls into a whirlpool, as the frightened mouse screams for his life.
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Without any word, the mouse came floating out of the water, the water disappeared, showing that it was just an illusion, the mouse was really in a room, with a wizard sitting on a chair with a desk. the mouse lands on the ground with a thud, and he got up soon after that. The mouse walks towards the wizard, as he rubs the back of his head, embarrassed. The wizard looks at the mouse, with a stern, and serious look on his face, showing that he was not happy at what he saw. The wizard lowers his head, and sighs at the sight he saw. "Mickey...I cannot shake the feeling something terrible is about to transpire." Said the wizard, in an serious tone in his words. Mickey, moves his head a little, as he looks confused, as the wizard looks towards a window, that shows the night sky. In the sky there are four stars glowing in the sky, a yellow star, a brown star, a blue star, and a green star.
Meanwhile, at a mysterious wasteland, the same old man, from four years ago was looking out at the night sky from a cliff. A Corridor of Darkness opens up, and the same young man, who was in the castle of Land of Depature, who watched Ventus and Tyler leave the castle to look out at the stars, walks out of it, and stands behind the old man. "The one who you need for your goals, and his friend went to go watch a meteor shower, master, and another man like me appeared to the one, also wearing a black coat like I'am.....It seems that he is aware of our motives....What shall we do, Master Xehanort?" Asked the young man, calling the old man, "Master Xehanort". Xehanort, looks at the young man with an evil smirk on his face, as he turns to face him. "No worries, Darkdron, it won't matter one bit as he sees what's in store....How are the Darklings doing? We'll need them for our back-up plan, in case we lose the parts we need for our initial plan..." Replied Xehanort, in a dark tone revealing a type of monsters of sort, named the Darklings. Darkdron, lowers his hood, revealing his face, he has tanned skin, long, and spiky silver hair, that flows down to the midsection of his back, and has pointy ears, and has the same gold eyes as Xehanort's. "They are fine....We are pushing are enemy back, more into defeat....Yet the enemy refuses to give up....Those bird brains....They may be smart, but in the end, they shall be defeated, and destroyed...." replied Darkdron, telling Xehanort about what the Darklings are doing right now. "I see....Well, have the Darklings made any progress yet?" Asked Xehanort, as he extends his hand out while raising it in the air, as he asks if the Darklings are making progress. "Well, master, they are close to getting into the Temple of Zelia, on the World of Shining, and are now devising a way to disable the temple's security systems, and steal the temple's Planetary Energy, which will serve in our back-up plan to forge the thing we need, and place it in the dark counterpart of the temple in my World of Nexus, the World of Shining's Dark counterpart....After that, the Darklings shall invade the Temple of Balgia, the Temple of Sheena, and the Temple of Althar, to do the same like they are to the the temple, by stealing their Planetary Energy that they're going to do soon...." Said Darkdron, folding his arms on his chest, as he tells Xehanort about the Darkling's plans to steal the Planetary Energy to use it for something, to forge some king of thing. "Excellent.....That's what I want to hear....After all, you ARE the king, and ruler of all Darklings, since it was you who was the first Darkling to be born, and the most powerful than the rest..." Said Xehanort, stating that Darkdron, is the king, and ruler of the Darklings. "Of course master, I will never let you down, we shall succeed in our plan, and get what we desire..." Said Darkdron, in a dark tone, as he promises not to let Xehanort down. Xehanort, gives out another evil smirk on his face, and folds his arms behind his back. "Very good....The next part of our plan starts tomorrow, to sabotage Aqua, and Terra's Mark of Mastery exams.....The boy in the mask, will be there hidden in the shadows...." Said Xehanort, mentioning the existance of a boy wearing a mask. "Very well, master...." Said Darkdron, as he bowed to Xehanort, as they both give off more evil smirks on their faces.
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Terra, Tyler, Ventus, and Aqua have spent their last night, under the stars peacefully, and are hyped for the exam. Xehanort, and Darkdron, are talking about something at a wasteland, what are the Darklings? What is the Darkling' enemy? Who was the young man, wearing the black coat that Ventus saw before watching the stars? Perhaps we may never know. The next chapter shall explain some questions. Chapter 3: The Exam.
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Hello everyone, this is Tom13, I would like to present to you, my own version of KH BBS, remade with some new characters, and some parts you never seen before. You may pm me if you want me to include any new things such as: ideas, and/or characters. Any who enjoy chapter 2, and the rest of the chapters will be posted on this thread.
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